Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

[Aik Lamha]

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Zindagi sehraa ki manind

aansooo sookhi ret se
hont khushk pathar se huye hain
haan tumhari yaad main...
is mausam ke sab hi badal
aag barsaney lagey hain
haan tum aas paas nahen ho
kesey sametoon bikhrey huye
sookhey huye patton jesi zindagi ke palon ko
jis main tum hi bas chukey ho...
aur doosra koi naam nahen hai...
is se pehley ke aankhen khooon roney lagen....
ye badan khushk reit sa honey lagey..
aur rooh ka har saaz
thalon main dafn honey lage..
TUM AA JAO...
TUM AA JAO...


:roseBy, ME (A) :dua

Behtereeen Aaanieee... zabardast/..

[Aania]

Re: Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

thnx sohnyo..... :rose

[WOH LARKI]

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Boht zaberdat Aaina.very well written.:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose

kesey sametoon bikhrey huye
sookhey huye patton jesi zindagi ke palon ko

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

Re: Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

:tang: :tang:

yeh kia ho raha hai?

[Yaaram]

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Sirf do sher

[Aania]

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Sirf do sher

wow koool piece of poetry thnx for sharing its really awesome..... :phool::phool:roseroseroseroseroseroseroseroseroseroseroserose

[:Qassim:]

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Kuchh hamari janib sey bhi :)

Asalaam O Alaikum

Wah Masood sahab ... Bohot hii khoobsurat kaaviSh hai aapkii ... Umeed hai k :insha: future meN bhii aapko paRhne ko milayga!

YouNhii achchha achchha likhtay rahiay aur sada khuSh rahiay :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[Aania]

Re: Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

Boht zaberdat Aaina.very well written.:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose

kesey sametoon bikhrey huye
sookhey huye patton jesi zindagi ke palon ko

thnx :eye:

[Aania]

Re: Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

Kuchh hamari janib sey bhi :)

very great work though .... khush rahye,.. :phool:

aur miltey bhi rahye..... nazar aanaa hi band ho gaye aap to.....

[hayaa_n]

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Assalam.o.aleikum
Aap sab ka kalaam parha.sab ka hi andaaz-e-bayaan khoob hay Masha Allah:) silsila bhi acha hay aur jinhon nay is may hissa liya hay un ka likha read kar kay bouhat acha laga.mairi taraf say aap sab dili daad qubool kijiye.:rose :) :masha