Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

[Masood]

Assalamo allaikum members

Ham September key maheeney sey aik neya silsila shuru kar rahey hain. Is mein har shairana zoq rakhney waley ko dawat di jati hai keh aap aaiye aur apni sharana soch ko ubhariye. Ham aap ko aik tasweer dein gey is tasweer per aap ney apna kalaam jo aik qita, nazam, ghazal, geet ya kisi bhi tarha sey likh saktey hain.

Har contest key aakhir mein ham poll karwaein gey keh kon sa kalaam tasweer ki musabqat sey behtreen hai.

Is contest mein koi haar jeet nahin - hamari koshish hai keh ham apney membraan key zoq ko ubharein - himmat kijiye aur is mein bharpoor hissah lijiye.

Hamari Pehli Tasweer Hai:

Sehraa

[Yaaram]

Re: Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

hm bohat acha silisila shoro kya hay Masood......:)

[kanch ki mehroo]

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zabardast sislsila shuroo kiya hai :)

[Wasi]

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Acha silsila hey bahi ji..... :)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

Aik adna si koshish ki hey, umeed hey k aap ko pasand aaye gi.

[Z.]

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Muskan :thmbup:
aur ye rahi meyri koshish

Raasta kathan to hai magar
Umeed key jugnu abhi paas hein

phool abhi baqi hein

[La'hasil]

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acha silsila hia Masood :rose


aur acha likha hai Muskan aur Gul nay :rose


jeetay rahyeah khush rahyeah sada abad rahyeah :rose

[WOH LARKI]

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zaberdast Gul.........aap k liye:phool: .



Khwahesh aap ka shukriya pasand kernay k liye.aap k liye bhi:phool: aur :rose bhi.

[Z.]

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zaberdast Gul.........aap k liye:phool: .

shukriya Muskan :)

aur acha likha hai Muskan aur Gul nay :rose

shukriya khawahish :)

[Masood]

Re: Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

Kuchh hamari janib sey bhi :)

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

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wooooooooo......itti mushkil tasweer :uff

[:Qassim:]

Re: Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

Kuchh hamari janib sey bhi :)

Salaam

Wah Masood bhai ... Bohot hii achchhe khayaalaat ka izhaar kiya hai aap ne :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[:Qassim:]

Re: Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

wooooooooo......itti mushkil tasweer :uff

:tang: :tang:

[Aania]

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Zindagi sehraa ki manind
aansooo sookhi ret se
hont khushk pathar se huye hain
haan tumhari yaad main...
is mausam ke sab hi badal
aag barsaney lagey hain
haan tum aas paas nahen ho
kesey sametoon bikhrey huye
sookhey huye patton jesi zindagi ke palon ko
jis main tum hi bas chukey ho...
aur doosra koi naam nahen hai...
is se pehley ke aankhen khooon roney lagen....
ye badan khushk reit sa honey lagey..
aur rooh ka har saaz
thalon main dafn honey lage..
TUM AA JAO...
TUM AA JAO...


:roseBy, ME (A) :dua

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Hamari Tasweer - Aaap Ka Kalaam

Zindagi sehraa ki manind

aansooo sookhi ret se
hont khushk pathar se huye hain
haan tumhari yaad main...
is mausam ke sab hi badal
aag barsaney lagey hain
haan tum aas paas nahen ho
kesey sametoon bikhrey huye
sookhey huye patton jesi zindagi ke palon ko
jis main tum hi bas chukey ho...
aur doosra koi naam nahen hai...
is se pehley ke aankhen khooon roney lagen....
ye badan khushk reit sa honey lagey..
aur rooh ka har saaz
thalon main dafn honey lage..
TUM AA JAO...
TUM AA JAO...


:roseBy, ME (A) :dua

:D: :eye: buhat khoob
wah