koi poochey to merey watan sey

[Z.]

Asalam alaikum,
ye aik do lines abhi mey ney likhien jin ki tarteeb itni koi theek bhi nahi leykin mey ney socha key aap sab key sath share ker lun ...

Koi Poochey to merey watan sey
Aaj us ki salgirah hai

kya pata us ki matti udaas ho

kya pata us key darya ro rahein hon

kya pata us ka sabzah thandak chahta ho

kya pata us key Pahar pukaar rahey hon

kya pata us ki hawaein sakoon chahti hon

aur

kya pata us key phoolon ko
dilon mey utar jaaney wali khushboo ki chah ho

Aey Allah du'a sun leyna
in beyzabaano ki

[Yaaram]

Re: koi poochey to merey watan sey

wah bari hi pyari nazm likhi hai aap ne GUl.......Bare achay khayalat ka izhaar kya hai InshAllah aap ki dua kabool ho gi InshAllah :)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: koi poochey to merey watan sey

So beautifull gul:phool: , Aap ne boht hi sada say andaz mein apnay khoobsurat se jazbat ka izhaar kar k watan se muhabbat ka saboot diya hey.
Thanx for sharing:rose :rose :rose

[Z.]

Re: koi poochey to merey watan sey

Shurkriya Yaaram aur Muskan :)

[La'hasil]

Re: koi poochey to merey watan sey

Wah Buhat khoobsurat :rose



buhat acha likha hai Gul :)


khush raho hamesha :)

[aik_lerki]

Re: koi poochey to merey watan sey

zabardast Gul :rose
bohaat hi achaa likha hai aap nay.apny khyalaat ka izhaar waki bohat achy andaaz main kera aap nay :)

[Z.]

Re: koi poochey to merey watan sey

shukran khawahish and komal

(komal tum ho kidher :D :rose)

mey soch rahi hun key 14 aug. 2006 ki tehreer mey ney Pegham per kyun nahi daali :cc:

[saaj]

Re: koi poochey to merey watan sey

that so nice , i really liked it, mujhe laga k main waqi apne watan main aa gay hoon, v nice.x x x x