Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

[Khalish]

Azeezan.e.Mehfil:

:salam:


Aap ki bazm meiN pehli martaba haazir ho raha hooN. Aik ghazal paish.e.khidmat hai. Aap ki qeemti araa ka muntazir rahooNga.


Khush RahaiN

Mukhlis

Khalish

GHAZAL

(1)
Hawa ke doosh per bikhray jo gham haiN
Meri hasrat key yeh naqsh.e.qadam haiN
(2)
Buhot ristay haiN yeh tanhaaeeyouN meiN
Yeh daagh.e.dil kahaaN chalooN se kam haiN!
(3)
main apne aap tak shayed na pohaNchooN
meri hasti meiN itne paich.o.kham haiN
(4)
sadaaeiN ab bhi daita hooN maiN khud ko
karooN meiN baat kis se loog kam haiN
(5)
Abhi fursat nahi marne ki mujh ko
Abhi sehne ko kitne ranj.o.gham haiN
(6)
rakhooN kaaNdhay pe sar main kis ke jaa kar!
sabhi tu mehv.e.aazaar.o.situm haiN
(7)
:Khalish: kab tak jiaiN iss zindagi ko?
Ajab si be.basi hai aur hum haiN


Iss ghazal ka urdu version bhi paish kar raha hooN

[Masood]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

Ham aap ko Pegham per bohat tah-e-dil sey welcome kartey hian Khalish aur aap ka yeh pehla kalaam bohat hi pasand aaya. Aap yaqinan Pegham per bohat musbat addition sabit hon gey - khush Aamdeed.

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

Azeezan.e.Mehfil:


Hawa ke doosh per bikhray jo gham haiN
Meri hasrat key yeh naqsh.e.qadam haiN

rakhooN kaaNdhay pe sar main kis ke jaa kar!

sabhi tu mehv.e.aazaar.o.situm haiN

Khalish kab tak jiaiN iss zindagi ko?
Ajab si be.basi hai aur hum haiN

:welcome: To Our community :eye:
aapka kalam perh k achha laga :masha umdah likhtay hain aap.....waiting for more :)

[Khalish]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

Ham aap ko Pegham per bohat tah-e-dil sey welcome kartey hian Khalish aur aap ka yeh pehla kalaam bohat hi pasand aaya. Aap yaqinan Pegham per bohat musbat addition sabit hon gey - khush Aamdeed.

Buhot buhot shukriya Masood :rose iss pazeeraaee per maiN bhi aap ka tah.e.dil se mamnoon hooN. Aap ne meraa kaha pasand farmaaya .. meraa aadaab qabool kijiay

Mukhlis

Khalish

[Khalish]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

:welcome: To Our community :eye:
aapka kalam perh k achha laga :masha umdah likhtay hain aap.....waiting for more :)

Buhot buhot shukriya Eshaa Chaudhry Buhot nawaazish hai aap ki.

Khush RahaiN

[Z.]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

saari ghazal bohot payyari hai

ye do sheyr ...juz superb :thmbup:

main apne aap tak shayed na pohaNchooN
meri hasti meiN itne paich.o.kham haiN

sadaaeiN ab bhi daita hooN maiN khud ko
karooN meiN baat kis se loog kam haiN

[.]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

sab say pehlay pegham pay kushmadeed :rose or aap ka kalam buhat acha hai ..aap ainda bhi apna kalam share kartay raha kejey :rose

[Shaheen]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

boht khoob

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

Mujay Nahiee Ata hai.

[DIL]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

Asalaam-o-Alaikum!

Khalish bhaiya :rose app ko yahaan dekh ker bohuttttttt khushi howi :) Aur ghazal to her baar ki terha umdah kahi hai :rose

Khush Rahiyea :) Abaad Rahiyea :rose

[Ahsan Baloch]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

Nice, GHAZAL and Thanks For Shearing

[NaQsh]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

welcome to pehgam :)
wah bohat hee khub
kia likha hai !!!
zabardast
MASHALLAH

[Khalish]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

saari ghazal bohot payyari hai

ye do sheyr ...juz superb :thmbup:

Buhot buhot shukriya Xenya :) Buhot nawaazish hai aap ki

[Khalish]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

sab say pehlay pegham pay kushmadeed :rose or aap ka kalam buhat acha hai ..aap ainda bhi apna kalam share kartay raha kejey :rose

Buhot buhot shukriya Aanchal :rose maiN inshaa.allah ba.qaaedgi se haazir hone ki koshish karooNga.

Khush RahaiN :rose :rose

[Khalish]

Re: Ghazal: Hawa Ke Doosh Per Bikhray Jo Gham HaiN

boht khoob

Buhot buhot shukriya Shaheen:rose :rose