Sandaisa

[gazal_uzma]

Tum hi batao kaisay main Sandaisa bhaijon
Zamana hay bay aitbar bohot
Koie waseela nahi hawa k siwa
Jo tum ko meri mohabat ka yaqeen dila day
Meri khushbo tum talak pohoncha day
Or tum ko jatla day k
Ik larrki pagal anjani si
Shadaie or dewani si
Apnay khuwab or tabeeron ko
Jeenay ki sab tadbeeron ko
Teray nam laga baithi hay
Magar aitraf kartay darti hay k
Tum us ki masoom khuwahishon ko
Hans k na tal do
Us ka maan na torr do
Tum ko kaisay samjhaon
Apnay jeewan ki sab gharriyan
Subhain, shamain, sans ki larriyan
Teray nam pay war gaie hon
Dil k hathon har gaiehon

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Sandaisa

Tum ko kaisay samjhaon
Apnay jeewan ki sab gharriyan
Subhain, shamain, sans ki larriyan
Teray nam pay war gaie hon
Dil k hathon har gaiehon

bohat umdah likhty hain aap..... pyr ka boht sada sa lekin khoobsoorat andaz hay is nazm mein :rose

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Sandaisa

Eshaa
bohot bohot shukriya iss pazeeraie ka
regards
uzma

[*Hala*]

Re: Sandaisa

buht achaa uzma ji :rose

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Sandaisa

bohot shukriya hala ji sarhnay ka
khush rahain
regards
uzma

[*Rida*]

Re: Sandaisa

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht acha likha hay :phool:

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Sandaisa

thank u so much rida 4 appriciation
regards
uzma khan

[Hamsafar]

Re: Sandaisa

Great ...........................
you have a great knowledge........................keeep shairing.........
bohat umda hai ................ i like it .....................anjani si larki........so sweet

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Sandaisa

bohot bohot shukriya janab
keep coming and reading
regards
uzma khan

[Masood]

Re: Sandaisa

MashaAllah bohat achha likha hai Ghazal aur sadah sey alfaaz sey sadah si baton ko biyaan kiya hai - good work...

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Sandaisa

thank u so much masood

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: Sandaisa

great........