Hum Bhala....

[gazal_uzma]

azeezan-e-bazm
aadab

bohot dino pehlay aik bazm k shairy muqablay k liay iss misray "hum bhala araz-e-hal kia kartay" per yeh ghazal likhi thi per masrofiyat k baies post nahi kar saki thi. aaj purani couch files check kar rahi thi tu yeh ghazal mil gaie so socha kiyon na iss ko aaj idhar post kar don.
aap ki aara-o-tanqeed ka intizar rahay ga or koie islah karna chahey tu meray liay khushi ka baies hogi yeh bat
regards
uzma khan



Tum bin qismat-e-malal kia kartay
Hum bhala arz-e-hal kia kartay

Tum bin tu ik pal nahi guzarta
Hum bhala basar Mah-o-sal kia kartay

Jub tum ko lot hi jana tha
Hum bhala tuM say saWal kia kartay

Muqadar hamara hijar hi hona tha
Hum bhala khuwahish-e-wisal kia kartay

Jub shakh-e-rang hi sookh gaie
HUM bhala Dhanak ko nihal kia kartay

Hamaray mosamo k mizaj hi badal gaye
Hum bhala kisi ka khayal kia kartay

Barrhawa dainay walay hi kho gaye
Hum bhala ub kamal kia kartay

Hum koie hakim-e-waqt tu nahi
Tumhara bhala jeena wabal kia kartay

Tum main milan ki chah hi na thi
Hum bhala milna muhal kia kartay

Hum tu khod haray howay juwari hain
Hum bhala mizaj-e-yar bahal kia kartay

Sarahti nighahain hi jub rooth chalien
Hum bhala Husen-e-Ghazal ko jamal kia kartay

[RulzZ]

Re: Hum Bhala....

tum bin to ek pal nahee guzarta,,,
hum basar mah-o-saal kia kartay...
bohot umdah :rose

[Wafa]

Re: Hum Bhala....

wow uzma ji bohot hi achi shair hai aap .........bohot hi zabardast likha hai........:clap:

[aik_lerki]

Re: Hum Bhala....

Bohat he zabardast likha hai :rose
Keep sharing

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Hum Bhala....

azeezan-e-bazm
aadab

bohot dino pehlay aik bazm k shairy muqablay k liay iss misray "hum bhala araz-e-hal kia kartay" per yeh ghazal likhi thi per masrofiyat k baies post nahi kar saki thi. aaj purani couch files check kar rahi thi tu yeh ghazal mil gaie so socha kiyon na iss ko aaj idhar post kar don.
aap ki aara-o-tanqeed ka intizar rahay ga or koie islah karna chahey tu meray liay khushi ka baies hogi yeh bat
regards
uzma khan



Tum bin qismat-e-malal kia kartay
Hum bhala arz-e-hal kia kartay

Tum bin tu ik pal nahi guzarta
Hum bhala basar Mah-o-sal kia kartay

Jub tum ko lot hi jana tha
Hum bhala tuM say saWal kia kartay

Muqadar hamara hijar hi hona tha
Hum bhala khuwahish-e-wisal kia kartay

Jub shakh-e-rang hi sookh gaie
HUM bhala Dhanak ko nihal kia kartay

Hamaray mosamo k mizaj hi badal gaye
Hum bhala kisi ka khayal kia kartay

Barrhawa dainay walay hi kho gaye
Hum bhala ub kamal kia kartay

Hum koie hakim-e-waqt tu nahi
Tumhara bhala jeena wabal kia kartay

Tum main milan ki chah hi na thi
Hum bhala milna muhal kia kartay

Hum tu khod haray howay juwari hain
Hum bhala mizaj-e-yar bahal kia kartay

Sarahti nighahain hi jub rooth chalien
Hum bhala Husen-e-Ghazal ko jamal kia kartay

very nice gazal,uzma ji bohoth he khoobsoorat gazal likhi hai aap ney,aap ney apney khayal ko iss behtareen andaz mey pesh kia hai keh ,iss mey aap ney koi kami nahi chhodri hai ,keh koi iss per per tanqeed ya iss ki ki tasheeh kar sakey,share karney ka bohoth bohoth shukria

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Hum Bhala....

tum bin to ek pal nahee guzarta,,,
hum basar mah-o-saal kia kartay...
bohot umdah :rose

thank u so much scorpion 4 encouragment
regards
uzma khan

[roshini]

Re: Hum Bhala....

nice sharing:rose

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Hum Bhala....

wow uzma ji bohot hi achi shair hai aap .........bohot hi zabardast likha hai........:clap:

thank u so much wafa

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Hum Bhala....

Bohat he zabardast likha hai :rose
Keep sharing

thanks alot 4 reading and encourgment
regards
uzma khan

[Yaaram]

Re: Hum Bhala....

Bohat umdah Uzma jee :) ghazal main chand aik aise sher hain jin main raawani ki kami mujhey mehsoos hoi hay ...:) kher main to aik haqeer sa insaan hon .....mere se bhi buland paya ustad sha'ir pegham per mojood haiN :) Hope aisa mujhey hi laga ho
ummid hay behna aap mind nahi karein gi ...is tanqeed ko baray-e-tameer lejye ga :)
Baqi lafzoN ka istemal...bohat sada......qafia/radeef bohat aala hay sab ka sab :)
Apne Qalam main rawani pedah kejye
Shukrya :rose

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: Hum Bhala....

bohth khoob thanks for shairing..

[*Rida*]

Re: Hum Bhala....

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht khobsorat :phool:

[Atif Hafeez]

Re: Hum Bhala....

acha hai

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: Hum Bhala....

bohth achi.

[F-A-L-A-K]

Re: Hum Bhala....

Tasleemat janab

Bohut hi Zabar10 ................. Khush Rahiye Hamesha