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  • Hum Bhala....

    azeezan-e-bazm
    aadab

    bohot dino pehlay aik bazm k shairy muqablay k liay iss misray "hum bhala araz-e-hal kia kartay" per yeh ghazal likhi thi per masrofiyat k baies post nahi kar saki thi. aaj purani couch files check kar rahi thi tu yeh ghazal mil gaie so socha kiyon na iss ko aaj idhar post kar don.
    aap ki aara-o-tanqeed ka intizar rahay ga or koie islah karna chahey tu meray liay khushi ka baies hogi yeh bat
    regards
    uzma khan




    Tum bin qismat-e-malal kia kartay
    Hum bhala arz-e-hal kia kartay

    Tum bin tu ik pal nahi guzarta
    Hum bhala basar Mah-o-sal kia kartay

    Jub tum ko lot hi jana tha
    Hum bhala tuM say saWal kia kartay

    Muqadar hamara hijar hi hona tha
    Hum bhala khuwahish-e-wisal kia kartay

    Jub shakh-e-rang hi sookh gaie
    HUM bhala Dhanak ko nihal kia kartay

    Hamaray mosamo k mizaj hi badal gaye
    Hum bhala kisi ka khayal kia kartay

    Barrhawa dainay walay hi kho gaye
    Hum bhala ub kamal kia kartay

    Hum koie hakim-e-waqt tu nahi
    Tumhara bhala jeena wabal kia kartay

    Tum main milan ki chah hi na thi
    Hum bhala milna muhal kia kartay

    Hum tu khod haray howay juwari hain
    Hum bhala mizaj-e-yar bahal kia kartay

    Sarahti nighahain hi jub rooth chalien
    Hum bhala Husen-e-Ghazal ko jamal kia kartay


  • #2
    Re: Hum Bhala....

    tum bin to ek pal nahee guzarta,,,
    hum basar mah-o-saal kia kartay...
    bohot umdah :rose
    That's Enough...!!

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    • #3
      Re: Hum Bhala....

      wow uzma ji bohot hi achi shair hai aap .........bohot hi zabardast likha hai........:clap:
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      • #4
        Re: Hum Bhala....

        Bohat he zabardast likha hai :rose
        Keep sharing

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        • #5
          Re: Hum Bhala....

          Originally posted by gazal_uzma
          azeezan-e-bazm
          aadab

          bohot dino pehlay aik bazm k shairy muqablay k liay iss misray "hum bhala araz-e-hal kia kartay" per yeh ghazal likhi thi per masrofiyat k baies post nahi kar saki thi. aaj purani couch files check kar rahi thi tu yeh ghazal mil gaie so socha kiyon na iss ko aaj idhar post kar don.
          aap ki aara-o-tanqeed ka intizar rahay ga or koie islah karna chahey tu meray liay khushi ka baies hogi yeh bat
          regards
          uzma khan




          Tum bin qismat-e-malal kia kartay
          Hum bhala arz-e-hal kia kartay

          Tum bin tu ik pal nahi guzarta
          Hum bhala basar Mah-o-sal kia kartay

          Jub tum ko lot hi jana tha
          Hum bhala tuM say saWal kia kartay

          Muqadar hamara hijar hi hona tha
          Hum bhala khuwahish-e-wisal kia kartay

          Jub shakh-e-rang hi sookh gaie
          HUM bhala Dhanak ko nihal kia kartay

          Hamaray mosamo k mizaj hi badal gaye
          Hum bhala kisi ka khayal kia kartay

          Barrhawa dainay walay hi kho gaye
          Hum bhala ub kamal kia kartay

          Hum koie hakim-e-waqt tu nahi
          Tumhara bhala jeena wabal kia kartay

          Tum main milan ki chah hi na thi
          Hum bhala milna muhal kia kartay

          Hum tu khod haray howay juwari hain
          Hum bhala mizaj-e-yar bahal kia kartay

          Sarahti nighahain hi jub rooth chalien
          Hum bhala Husen-e-Ghazal ko jamal kia kartay

          very nice gazal,uzma ji bohoth he khoobsoorat gazal likhi hai aap ney,aap ney apney khayal ko iss behtareen andaz mey pesh kia hai keh ,iss mey aap ney koi kami nahi chhodri hai ,keh koi iss per per tanqeed ya iss ki ki tasheeh kar sakey,share karney ka bohoth bohoth shukria

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          • #6
            Re: Hum Bhala....

            Originally posted by ScorpioN_RulzZ
            tum bin to ek pal nahee guzarta,,,
            hum basar mah-o-saal kia kartay...
            bohot umdah :rose
            thank u so much scorpion 4 encouragment
            regards
            uzma khan

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            • #7
              Re: Hum Bhala....

              nice sharing:rose
              woh ban k aashk meri chasmay tar mei rayhta hay
              ajeeb shaks hay paani k ghar mei rayhta hay.........

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              • #8
                Re: Hum Bhala....

                Originally posted by Wafa
                wow uzma ji bohot hi achi shair hai aap .........bohot hi zabardast likha hai........:clap:
                thank u so much wafa

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                • #9
                  Re: Hum Bhala....

                  Originally posted by aik_lerki View Post
                  Bohat he zabardast likha hai :rose
                  Keep sharing

                  thanks alot 4 reading and encourgment
                  regards
                  uzma khan

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                  • #10
                    Re: Hum Bhala....

                    Bohat umdah Uzma jee :) ghazal main chand aik aise sher hain jin main raawani ki kami mujhey mehsoos hoi hay ...:) kher main to aik haqeer sa insaan hon .....mere se bhi buland paya ustad sha'ir pegham per mojood haiN :) Hope aisa mujhey hi laga ho
                    ummid hay behna aap mind nahi karein gi ...is tanqeed ko baray-e-tameer lejye ga :)
                    Baqi lafzoN ka istemal...bohat sada......qafia/radeef bohat aala hay sab ka sab :)
                    Apne Qalam main rawani pedah kejye
                    Shukrya :rose
                    Allah

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                    • #11
                      Re: Hum Bhala....

                      bohth khoob thanks for shairing..
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                      • #12
                        Re: Hum Bhala....

                        Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose

                        buht khobsorat :phool:
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                        وَ بَارِکْ لِيْ فِيْمَا أَعْطَيْتَ

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                        • #13
                          Re: Hum Bhala....

                          acha hai

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                          • #14
                            Re: Hum Bhala....

                            bohth achi.
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                            • #15
                              Re: Hum Bhala....

                              Tasleemat janab

                              Bohut hi Zabar10 ................. Khush Rahiye Hamesha
                              :rose :rose Apna Khyal Rakhiye Ga aur Ager Ho Sake Tu Dosroun Ka bhi :rose :rose

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