Mera Qarar....

[gazal_uzma]

adab sathiyon

iss bazm main pehli bar apni aik kawish paish kar rahi hon tanqeed o aara ka intizar rahay ga

regards
uzma khan

Mera qarar lut giya na dosti na piyar hay
Na zindagi main rang hay na ub koie bahr hay

Meray naseeb main koie khushi kabhi rahi nahi
Ghamo k mosamo ka ub kahan koie shumar hay

Siyah sooni rat hay khamoshiyon ka sath hay
Meray liay hayat ub ghamon ka aik bar hay

Hazar badghumaniyon ki talkhiyan hain qalb main
Keh jis k dil ko dekhiye ghubar hi ghubar hay

Faraib sab nay hi diye mujh ko rah-e-hayat main
Jo motibar thay un ka bhi na koie aitbar hay

Khushi k pal udhar day yeh zindagi sanwar day
Ya or bhi tabah kar tujhay yeh ikhtiyar hay

Hamara piyar qarz hay kisi k dil pay aaye Ghazal
Kabhi chuka na paye ga yeh aisa ik udhar hay

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Mera Qarar....

very nice poem uzma,nice sharing keep it up

[Masood]

Re: Mera Qarar....

Aik aik shair mein apni apni kahani hai aur har aik lafz bohat khoobsurat sey us feeling ko biyaan kar raha hai jo aksar raah-e-hiyaat mein dekhi jati hai. Pehli kavish key saath jalwa-numa hui hain aur kya kavish hai! Allah karey aap ki soch mein mazeed wussat pedah ho....

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Mera Qarar....

siah soni raat hai khamoshion ka saath hai
merey liyee hayath ab ghamon ka baar hai

khushi key pal udhar dey yeh zindagi sanwar dey
ya aur bhi tabah kar tujeh yeh ikhtiar hai



bohoth hi khoobsurath ghazal hai , mujeh khaas kar yeh sher bohoth pasand ayee,
aap ki quwwa-e-qalam ki umer daraz ho,aur hamain uss sey achchi achchi nazmain aur ghazlain pardney ko milain

best regard
mujahid khan

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Mera Qarar....

aap kee poetry main sagher sadikee ka akas dikhti hay
very nice keep it up

[shahbaznk]

Re: Mera Qarar....

Nice sharing..
Keep it up.....

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Mera Qarar....

very nice poem uzma,nice sharing keep it up

thank u so much mujahid sahib
regards
uzma khan

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Mera Qarar....

Aik aik shair mein apni apni kahani hai aur har aik lafz bohat khoobsurat sey us feeling ko biyaan kar raha hai jo aksar raah-e-hiyaat mein dekhi jati hai. Pehli kavish key saath jalwa-numa hui hain aur kya kavish hai! Allah karey aap ki soch mein mazeed wussat pedah ho....

thank u so much masood 4 all this valuable comments and encouragment
regards
uzma khan

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: Mera Qarar....

very nice thanks for shairing...

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Mera Qarar....

siah soni raat hai khamoshion ka saath hai
merey liyee hayath ab ghamon ka baar hai

khushi key pal udhar dey yeh zindagi sanwar dey
ya aur bhi tabah kar tujeh yeh ikhtiar hai



bohoth hi khoobsurath ghazal hai , mujeh khaas kar yeh sher bohoth pasand ayee,
aap ki quwwa-e-qalam ki umer daraz ho,aur hamain uss sey achchi achchi nazmain aur ghazlain pardney ko milain

best regard
mujahid khan

mujahid sahib
aap nay iss ghazal pay dubara nazar e inayat ki bayhad mamnoon hon aap ki
hosla afzaie or dua k liay bayhad shukriya
regards
uzma khan

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Mera Qarar....

aap kee poetry main sagher sadikee ka akas dikhti hay
very nice keep it up

afsos k main nay kabhi bhi sagher sadikee sahib ko nahi parrha hay i will b gr8 full if u share some of his poetry so i will come to knw wht is there which is same in his and mine poetry
read karnay ka shukriya
regards
uzma khan

[Wafa]

Re: Mera Qarar....

bohot hi zabardast likha hai ........bohot pasand aaye..........:rose

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Mera Qarar....

Wafa, buhat hii achhii sharing hey
keep it up

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Mera Qarar....

Nice sharing..
Keep it up.....

thanks 4 couragment
regards
uzma khan

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Mera Qarar....

very nice thanks for shairing...

thank u so much 4 reading and appriciation
regards
uzma khan