main kon hun

[Mujahid Khan]

ik dhhachka hai
ke ro lun
hans lun
yaa.....
chhup jaaoon kahan
rakhhwalon se
woh.......
jo bachcha thah
meri godh mey
aur......
na jaan paai
woh shaatir hai
bhool gaya
shayad mujeh.......
zinda
dafnana
par ussey yaad hai
ab thak
intizaar.......
meri...
aur meri bachchi ka
boli lagney ka hai
soli par chardney
yaa.....
goli lagney ka hai
main nasamaj
sub kuch bhool gai
kia hun......
main kon hun
tu mera bhai
yaa....
mera bachcha hai

[gazal_uzma]

Re: main kon hun

oh my God
wht a different style and topic
superb
regards
uzma khan

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: main kon hun

bohoth bohoth shukria uzma khan,aap ki hosla afzaai ka,asal mey main iss nazam mey iss dore ki aik lardki(aurath)ki faryad hai jo iss dore ke mardon aur dor-e-jaahiliath ke mardon se compare kar ke batha rahi hai,ke dor-e-jahiliat aur ab ke mardon mey bilkul koi farak nahi hai,kiun ke woh lardkiun ko peda hothey hi dafna dethey thhaiy aur ye unhain na maar kar ,wani, karo kaari ,jaayidaad ya apni mardaangi key naam par qatal kar key uss ki boli laga kar baich dethey hain,yaani iss dore ka mard dor-e-jaahiliat ke dore sey aurathon ke liyiee ziada aziatnaak saabith hau hai,iss nazam ki lardki ka kehna yeh hai.

[sheem]

Re: main kon hun

bohat achi hai

keep it up dear :phool:

[gazal_uzma]

Re: main kon hun

sansible ji
aap nay apni nazam ka background wazeh kia acha laga nazam ki rooh tak tu main bhi pohonch gaie thi or aap ki aakhri bat tu waqie bohot sahi hay heero main tolay janay k qabil k aaj ka mard orat k liay zamana jahiliyat k mard say ziyada bura sabit ho raha hay aaj orat ko urrna seekha k par kat diye jatay hain. shaoor day k mahsoor kar dia jata hay. wajha srif yehi hay k hum apnay piyaray mazhab islam say ziyada maasharti cheezo ko customs ko asolo ko ziyada follow kartay hain halan k fazool hain aisay asool jo kisi ki jaan say barrh k ho jaye kisi ki chahat say barrh k ho jain
regards
uzma khan