~~Bait Baazi~~

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yeh masjid hai hamein darpaish, aur dil ki yeh halat hai
machal jata hai rastey mein jahan but khana aata hai
nayyar amritsari

yey

ye kehna humnay hee toofaan mein daal di kashti
qasoor apna hai dariya ko bura kia kehna

alif

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ye kehna humnay hee toofaan mein daal di kashti
qasoor apna hai dariya ko bura kia kehna

alif

Ji aap key liye bhi alif hi hai :p

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Ik umr se hou lazzat-e-giriyaa se bhi mehroom
Ae raahat-e-jaan mujh ko rulaanay ke liey aa.

alif:p

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Ik umr se hou lazzat-e-giriyaa se bhi mehroom
Ae raahat-e-jaan mujh ko rulaanay ke liey aa.

alif:p

Aa phir sey mujhey chhor key janey key liye aa
ranjish hi sahi dil hi dukhaney key liye aa :zuban: :zuban:

Alif

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aa phir sey mujhey chhor key janey key liye aa
ranjish hi sahi dil hi dukhaney key liye aa :zuban: :zuban:

Alif

Us ko neendon k nagar mein na basao mohsin
werna shaamil wohee neendon k khalal mein hoga...

Alif:zuban:

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

aey shama teri umer tabi hai aik raat
hans ker guzar ya issey ro ker guzar dey

yey

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

aey shama teri umer tabi hai aik raat
hans ker guzar ya issey ro ker guzar dey

yey

Yun kis terha katay ga karee dhoop ka safar
sir per khiyal-e-yaar ki chadar hee lay chalein

noon (ghunna:zuban:)

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yun kis terha katay ga karee dhoop ka safar
sir per khiyal-e-yaar ki chadar hee lay chalein

noon (ghunna:zuban:)

nahin aat ahamein ghunghunaney ka fun
ham to seen aur sheen per jatey hain ARR :kr: :kr: :kr:

RREY sey shair farmaein please

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

nahin aat ahamein ghunghunaney ka fun
ham to seen aur sheen per jatey hain ARR :kr: :kr: :kr:

RREY sey shair farmaein please

Raakh ho jaey gee qurbaton mein mehakti huey zindagi
Hijr ki aag mein tum pighal jaao gay jaa k pardes mein :zuban:
noon( phir se ghunghunaiiey :kr: )

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Raakh ho jaey gee qurbaton mein mehakti huey zindagi
Hijr ki aag mein tum pighal jaao gay jaa k pardes mein :zuban:
noon( phir se ghunghunaiiey :kr: )

arey madam REY sey nahin RDEY sey shair kahiye

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

arey madam REY sey nahin RDEY sey shair kahiye

Rdey se aap keh ljieey ..hamein aisa koi sh'r nahin yd jis ka first word rdey ho..Ustad-e-0mohtaram aap bata dijieey :lol

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Rdey se aap keh ljieey ..hamein aisa koi sh'r nahin yd jis ka first word rdey ho..Ustad-e-0mohtaram aap bata dijieey :lol

to lijiye madam aap kya yaad karo gi

RDEY sey shuru hota nahin koi lafz urdu zuban mein
jaisey nahin koi sahara Masood deewaney ka jahan mein



ab btao manti ho apna ustaad???

Noon (ghoona :p)

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

to lijiye madam aap kya yaad karo gi

RDEY sey shuru hota nahin koi lafz urdu zuban mein
jaisey nahin koi sahara Masood deewaney ka jahan mein



ab btao manti ho apna ustaad???

Noon (ghoona :p)

:khi:

ji jabhi ustad-e-mohtaram kaha tha aapko:zuban:

Na janay kin khiyalon mein ye larki gumm hai kuch din se
K apna naam sun ker yun achanak chonk jaatee hai

Yey:p

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yehi mizaaj hai apna, kisi ka dil na dukhey
judaiyon ko bi chaha hai qurbaton ki tarha

HEY halwey wali

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Hum tumhein dhoond rahay hain kaeey din se her su
Tum kaeey din se dharaktay ho jag-e-jaan k qareeb

(ye shair kehtay hain hum nahin kehtay:zuban: :zuban: )

Bay