~~Bait Baazi~~

[S*Sobia Shah]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Sobia yeh TEY kahan sey beech mein aa gaii

Konsa Tey?:donno:

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Konsa Tey?:donno:

woh na baitbazi key asool key mutabiq jis harf per shair khatam hota hai usi sey next shair shuru hota hai - aap ney jo shair share kiya woh TEY sey tha jabkeh aap ko YEY sey likhna tha :p

[S*Sobia Shah]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

woh na baitbazi key asool key mutabiq jis harf per shair khatam hota hai usi sey next shair shuru hota hai - aap ney jo shair share kiya woh TEY sey tha jabkeh aap ko YEY sey likhna tha :p

Ohooo Sorry Woo Dar Asal Ye Shair Itna Acha Laga Kay Main Sub Asool Bhool Gai:D:

[S*Sobia Shah]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aab Aakhri Lafz Hay Kaf
کچھ تو ہوا بھی سرد تھی کچھ تھا تیرا خیال بھی
دل کو خوشی کے ساتھ ساتھ ہوتا رہا ملال بھی

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Kuch aissay humnay kharabay basaey shehron mein
Jo dasht walay thay wo bhi uthh aey shehron mein
Hamaree sada dili dekhiey k dhondtay hain
Hum apnay des ki batein paraey shehron mein

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

:wk

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

hain:shook: Gul ji k ashaar kahan gaey yahan se



Wafa k bhes mein us nay jafa to ki lekin
Ye haal hay k wo ab mera saamna na karay

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

hain:shook: Gul ji k ashaar kahan gaey yahan se



Wafa k bhes mein us nay jafa to ki lekin
Ye haal hay k wo ab mera saamna na karay

Main ney safaii kar di :D :D Bait bazi ka tasalsul toot geya tha...

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

achhi job hay safae suthraey ki jare rakhiey

Wo khud adeeb, na shair , na falsafi tha magar
Zara see der mein mujhko bana gaya kya kya

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Maasi to aap ho :p

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ab ye tuu ki takrar shuru kar dee:lahoul



Wohee hay khail, wahee marhalay, wahee hum tum
Yaqeen puranay nahin, guman naey bhi nahin

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

chalo muaf keeta :p

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

chalo muaf keeta :p

NAhin aap beshak gardaan kijiey tuu ki ..:eye:
saannu ki :donno:


Aissay na thay hum ehl-e-dil itnay kahan kharab thay
Hum bhi kisi ki aas thay hum bhi kisdi ka khwab thay
Itna kuredtay thay humko wo baat baat per
kya kos masla thay hum ya band kitaab thay?


Sorry wow se sh'r post kar diya tha:lahoulso edit kiya

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Na mujhey apni bibi ka kuchh khiyaal to hai na :p

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~