~~Bait Baazi~~

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Na mere koe manzil hai na koe kinara
tanhae mere mehfil yadain mera sahara
On say bichar kay kuch yon waqt guzra
kabhe zindagi ko tarsy kabhe mout ko pukara

anna k bhes mein thee zid kabhi na dharkay ga
yeh dil magar teri aahat se heee tu machla hai

aap ka shair bait bazi key asoolon key mutabiq nahin, jis harf per shair khatam ho wahin sey neya shair shuru kiya jata hai :) - maslan:

yeh dard ki tanhaiyaan, yeh dasht ka weeran safar
ham log to uktaa gaey, apni suna - aawargi

Kiya yeh aap nay Mujh se kaha .........

kia aap deykh saktay hein pukaraa alif per bhi khatm hota hai ....

:comfort:

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yaran-e-tez gaam ne mahmil ko ja liya
Ham mahw-e-nala-e-jaras-e-karwan rahay

ye haqeeqat hai k hotaa hai asar baatoun mein
tum bhi khul jaao gay do-chaar mulaqatoun mein

[Daood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

na janay saath choor de ye zindagi kahan
hanaste huwe zamane main sub se ila kur

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

na janay saath choor de ye zindagi kahan
hanaste huwe zamane main sub se ila kur

ronay hee kahan deytay hein roothay howay moasam
han abr kabhi dard k chaah jaein, phir baat alag hai

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Kiya yeh aap nay Mujh se kaha .........

kia aap deykh saktay hein pukaraa alif per bhi khatm hota hai ....

:comfort:

:tauba Nahin Gul yeh main ney Aatish ki post ko edit kar key likha hai, apna naam us mein likhna bhool geya tha... unka shair bait bazi key asoolon key khilaf tha... Itney badey alfaaz sey likha hai keh merey deedey phat gaey :kr:

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ronay hee kahan deytay hein roothay howay moasam
han abr kabhi dard k chaah jaein, phir baat alag hai

Yehi mizaaj hai apna kisi ka dil na dukhey
judaiyon ko bhi chaha hai qurbaton ki tarha

[aquari]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yehi mizaaj hai apna kisi ka dil na dukhey
judaiyon ko bhi chaha hai qurbaton ki tarha

ussey kaho bauhty na'murad shey hai junoon
usey kaho mujhey hai bauht junoon us kaa

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yehi mizaaj hai apna kisi ka dil na dukhey
judaiyon ko bhi chaha hai qurbaton ki tarha

hairatoun ke sil_sile soz-e-nihaaN tak aa gaye
ham nazar tak chaahate the tum to jaaN tak aa gaye

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

:tauba Nahin Gul yeh main ney Aatish ki post ko edit kar key likha hai, apna naam us mein likhna bhool geya tha... unka shair bait bazi key asoolon key khilaf tha... Itney badey alfaaz sey likha hai keh merey deedey phat gaey :kr:

likha issi liyay tha baraaa baraaa k ye parh kar meray deedat v pthan walay ho gay thay naaaa:pagal: ...

ziada nuqsan tu nahi howa deedoun ka aap k ...........:comfort:

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

hairatoun ke sil_sile soz-e-nihaaN tak aa gaye
ham nazar tak chaahate the tum to jaaN tak aa gaye

Nahin deedey deedah'war hain bach gaey hain :p

Yun phir raha hai kaanch ka pekar liyey huwey
ghafil ko yeh guman hai keh pathar na aaey ga!

[aquari]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ye aarzoo hii rahii ko_ii aarzoo karte
Khud apanii aag mein jalate jigar lahuu karte

tere jamaal ka par-tau nigaah mein hotaa
kabhii sabaa se kabhii gul se guftagoo karte

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yeh tabiyat hai to khud aazar ban jaein gey ham
chara'gar roein gey aur gham'khawar ban jaein gey ham
kya khabar thi aey nigar shair, terey ishq mein
dilbaran-e-shehar key dildaar ban jaein gey ham

[кησωη ѕтяαηgєя]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

muhabbat k safar main koi bhee rusta nahin detaa
Zameen waqif nahin banti , falak saya nahin detaa

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Itni shiddat say chaha mager wo kise aur ka ho giya
shayad is jahan ma wafa ka koe sila bhe nahe