~~Bait Baazi~~

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Nayi dunya basa li jis ny usy kia khaber
Chain sy us k shaher mein koe ji sakta nahin
Khon-e-jiger de ker kerta tha jo oron ko sairaab
Khud piyaas apni kion bujha sakta nahin..??

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Nayi dunya basa li jis ny usy kia khaber
Chain sy us k shaher mein koe ji nahin sakta
Khon-e-jiger de ker kerta tha jo oron ko sairaab
Khud piyaas apni kion bujha sakta nahin..??

Muskan shair mein kuchh garr barr ho gaii hai :)

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

I think Muskan ka shair ALIF per khatam hota hai:

Aashiyaney ki baat kartey ho
dil jalaney ki baat kartey ho
hadisa tha guzar geya ho ga
kis key jaaney ki baat kartey ho

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Muskan shair mein kuchh garr barr ho gaii hai :)

I`m Sorry ...:)

I think Muskan ka shair ALIF per khatam hota hai:

Nahin Masood ,hamara Shair "Noon" per khatam ho raha hai Sorry 4 Mistake..

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Nayi dunya basa li jis ny usy kia khaber
Chain sy us k shaher mein koe ji sakta nahin
Khon-e-jiger de ker kerta tha jo oron ko sairaab
Khud piyaas apni kion bujha sakta nahin..??

To ham NOON sey shair FARMAA :khi:detey hain :kr:

Naqsh faryadi hai kis ki shokhi-e-tehreer ka
kaaghzi hai pairhan har paikar-e-tasweer ka
kavey kavey sakht jani haaey tanhaii na pooch
subah ka karna shaam ka lana hai ju-e-sheer ka

[lucky]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

apni zindagi main mujh ko shreek smjhna
koi gham aa jaye to qareeb smjhna
day dain gay muskurahtain aansoo k bdly main
mgr hzaaron doston main zraa azeez smjhna

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Ankhon mein Ansoon Ab tou thamty hi nahin
Ye be waqat mousam rukny ka naam nahin leta

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Ankhon mein Ansoon Ab tou thamty hi nahin
Ye be waqat mousam rukny ka naam nahin leta

apney hathon ki lakeeron mein bsaa ley mujh ko
main hoon tera to naseeb apna bnaa ley mujh ko
mujh sey poochhney aaya hai tu wafa key maani
teri yeh sada dili kahin maar na daaley mujh ko

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

apney hathon ki lakeeron mein bsaa ley mujh ko
main hoon tera to naseeb apna bnaa ley mujh ko
mujh sey poochhney aaya hai tu wafa key maani
teri yeh sada dili kahin maar na daaley mujh ko

Woh kahta tha buhat Aziz hein meri ankhein usy lekin
woh jaty jaty inhein ker gia hai phir se pur-num

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Woh kahta tha buhat Aziz hein meri ankhein usy lekin
woh jaty jaty inhein ker gia hai phir se pur-num

merey ham'nafas merey ham'nawa mujhey dost ban ker dagha na dey
main hoon sadma-e-ishq sey jaan ba'lab mujhey zindagi ki dua na dey

[lucky]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ye dil ka rog ye chaaht Khuda kisi ko na day
buri bala hai muhabbat Khuda kisi ko na day
tarap,junoonye ruswaa e aan akela pann
qadam qadam pay moosibat Khuda kisi ko na day

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ye dil ka rog ye chaaht Khuda kisi ko na day
buri bala hai muhabbat Khuda kisi ko na day
tarap,junoonye ruswaa e aan akela pann
qadam qadam pay moosibat Khuda kisi ko na day

yeh aarzu thi tujhey gul key ru'baru kartey
ham aur bulbul-e-baitab guftgoo kartey
pyambar na muyassir huwa to khoob huwa
zuban-e-ghair sey kya sharh-e-aarzu kartey

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

merey ham'nafas merey ham'nawa mujhey dost ban ker dagha na dey
main hoon sadma-e-ishq sey jaan ba'lab mujhey zindagi ki dua na dey

Yaad hai usy Aj bhi mere chahry ki Muskan
Jis ny kaha tha k Tou mera koe nahin

[lucky]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yeh aarzu thi tujhey gul key ru'baru kartey
ham aur bulbul-e-baitab guftgoo kartey
pyambar na muyassir huwa to khoob huwa
zuban-e-ghair sey kya sharh-e-aarzu kartey

yoon luti hon gi bahaaren na gulistaanon ki
jaisy lut gaye duniya mery armaanon ki
tum nay mehfil main b bula k na poochi koi baat
kia yoon hi qadar kia krty hain mehmaanon ki

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yoon luti hon gi bahaaren na gulistaanon ki
jaisy lut gaye duniya mery armaanon ki
tum nay mehfil main b bula k na poochi koi baat
kia yoon hi qadar kia krty hain mehmaanon ki

Yaad-e-Mazi azzab hai yaar Rabb!
Chheen ley mujh sey hafiza mera!