Aik Ehsaas - Aik Biyaan - Aik Shi'r

[shahid_naman]

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Mohabbat ka ab iraada badal jaana b mushkil hai
Tumhain khoona bhi mushkil hia tumhain pana b mushkil hai
zara si bat per aankhain bigho per baith jaaty ho
tumhain to apny dil ka haal batana b mushkil hai

wha aik kuri :khi:

lagta ha dil sa likha ha very nice:)

[shahid_naman]

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Nikalna Khulad se aadam ka suntay aaye thay lekin
Baray badnaam ho ker tere ..........................aho

jab mana app ka naam es post ma dakha too ma bahoot haran ho gaya tha lakin abi per leya ha sakoon ho gaya ha ma ma gulat sooch raha tha:khi:

[shahid_naman]

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mere ajnabi mere aashna,:rose
tuja harf harf me dua likhun,:rose
koi aisa wasl naseeb kr,:rose
tuja chand taare hawa likhun,:rose
agar na ban sakun kabi tera, :rose
to hayaat ko main fanaalikhun,:rose
ya zindgi qadam qadam,:rose
teri yaad sa jawan rahe,:rose
nere ajnabi mere aashna,:rose
nai tuje kbhi na juda likhun,:rose

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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jab mana app ka naam es post ma dakha too ma bahoot haran ho gaya tha lakin abi per leya ha sakoon ho gaya ha ma ma gulat sooch raha tha:khi:

o toon apni sooch e sai ker le, aye he kafi hay

[Mr.Khan]

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Woh Zalim Jo Dil me Reh kar bhi mera Na ban Saka Ghalib,
Aur Dil woh Kaafir hai, Jo Mujh me reh kar bhi tera ho gaya,

[MorningGlory]

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Theek he ub mein bhi shaheen ki tarah chitaanon pe baseera ker leta hoon :blush:

Chitaanon kia hota hai Munda bhai Chatanon ki kaheen aap baat to naheen kar rahay.

Gul Sis Fizaon main Noon gunna bhi lugta hai.

[MorningGlory]

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Nikalna Khulad se aadam ka suntay aaye thay lekin
Baray badnaam ho ker tere ..........................aho

Khulad naheen Khald.

[MorningGlory]

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vafure ashk ne kashana ka kia ye rang
ki ho gae mere divaro dar, daro divar

K ho gai, ho ga ki naheen.

[MorningGlory]

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AOA,


Mil jate kayain to bandagi karte

naseeb apna tha begana to nain



Sohail Abbasi.

nain naheen balkay naheen.

[MorningGlory]

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dum lekr ek lamha chlain jayen ge faqeer
sun kr tumharay khulaq ki tareef,agye

abdul hameed adm

Khulaq kia hai? Kaheen Khulq to naheen ya Khalaq?

[MorningGlory]

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vadie najd men ab vo shore salasil na raha
qais divanae nazzarae mahmil na raha
hosle na rahe, ham na rahe, dil na raha
ghar ye ujda he ki tu ronake mehfil na raha

ae khusaan roz ki ayi va basad naz ayi
behijabana sue mehfile ma baz ayi

K ki jagah aap ki ka istamal kartay hain yay aap k indian honay ka pata deti hai.

........

Liaay ki hijjay ghalat hai aap ki urdu main.

[MorningGlory]

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yaqeen thaa shaikh ko jannat me jaam khankain ge
iss khushi me wo pyasa hi mr gya hoga
qateel shifaee

Khankain kia hai samajh naheen ai.

tumharay Haath Se Nikloon To be Kass O Mujboor
tumharay Haath a'oon To ikhtyaar Hoon mein

be kass say murad kaheen aap ki baykus to naheen

[MorningGlory]

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:salam:
ہم تو چلتے ہیں لو خدا حافظ
بُت کدے کا بُتکدو! خدا حافظ
کر چُکے تُم نصیحت ہم کو
جاؤ بس ناصحو! خدا حافظ

Butkaday kay butkado is main ka naheen ho ga.

yun chatktay han shaakh pr gunchay
jeasay un k salam atay han
`FAIZ`

Chatktay han ya CHATAKHTAY HAIN

[MorningGlory]

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Munda bhai 38 to 42 pages tuk main yay ghaltiaan hain. Kia itna kafi hai ya aur dikhaoon.

Masooq bhai aap ki urdu to lajawab hai aur ashaar ka chunao bhi aur sonay pay suhaga yay ka ghaltion say paak is liaay bara maza aya parhnan main.

Aap nain aik jagah ZAJAJ ka lufz istemal kia hai jo main nain pehli baar parha hai is k maani kia hain bata dain gay to maharbani ho gi. Thanks in advance.

Gul sahiba aap ki urdu main kafi ghaltiaan hain. Main nain khuwah makhah hi aap ko expert samajh lia. Aap to urdu ki urdu rasmul khat main bhi taang tornay say baaz naheen aeen.

[Gul]

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