Aik Ehsaas - Aik Biyaan - Aik Shi'r

[alwaysalone]

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aah !!

Hum Nai To HaadicoN Se Yeh Seekha Hai Dosto
Had KheNch Day Koi To Guzar Jaana Chahiye..

[Gul]

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[SherAli]

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Zafar us ko admi na janie ga vo ho kesa hi sahibe fahemo zaka
jise tesh men khofe khuda na raha jise aesh men shukre khuda na raha

shayad ghalat likh diya sher ko. sorry

[Gul]

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Zafar us ko admi na janie ga vo ho kesa hi sahibe fahemo zaka
jise tesh men khofe khuda na raha jise aesh men shukre khuda na raha

shayad ghalat likh diya sher ko. sorry

Kuch samjh nahi aya aap nay likha kiya hai ?372-scare

[Gul]

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[SherAli]

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Kuch samjh nahi aya aap nay likha kiya hai ?372-scare

sorry par men ne Bahadur shah zafar ka ek sher post kiya tha. kia ghalat kia?

[WASI ANJUM]

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Khizan mein phool khilao to koi baat bane
bahar aaye to kante bhi muskrate hain

[Masood]

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:)

[SherAli]

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mujh ko malum he janat ki hakeekat lekin
dil ko behlane ko ghalib ye khayal achha he

[Masood]

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mujh ko malum he janat ki hakeekat lekin
dil ko behlane ko ghalib ye khayal achha he

Aap key share kardah kuchh ashaar drust nahin hotey. Aap unki tafteesh kar key post kiya kijiye... yeh shair kuchh yun hai:

ham ko maloom hai jannat ki haqeeqat lekin
dil key khush rakhney ko Ghalib khiyaal achha hai

[SherAli]

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Aap key share kardah kuchh ashaar drust nahin hotey. Aap unki tafteesh kar key post kiya kijiye... yeh shair kuchh yun hai:

ham ko maloom hai jannat ki haqeeqat lekin
dil key khush rakhney ko Ghalib khiyaal achha hai

thank you ji tashi ke lie. mujh ko to pata bhi nai tha ki sher men ghalti he. sorry. koshish karun ga k ghalti na ho par insan hi hun ho bhi sakti he is lie dar guzar karte hue durust kar dijie ga. thank you.

na jis ki shakal he koi na jis ka nam he koi
phir aesi shae ka ku hamen azal se intzar he?

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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AhaN Mehfil to khoob zoro'N per hay 372-shock

[Gul]

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:donno:

[SherAli]

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vadie najd men ab vo shore salasil na raha
qais divanae nazzarae mahmil na raha
hosle na rahe, ham na rahe, dil na raha
ghar ye ujda he ki tu ronake mehfil na raha

ae khusaan roz ki ayi va basad naz ayi
behijabana sue mehfile ma baz ayi

[Masood]

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:lahoul