Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

[Masood]

Assalamo allaikum

SAHIL, SAMUNDAR, MANJHDHAAR, DARYA



Ham ney saal-e-Nau key pehley haftey mein lafz SAHIL, SAMUNDER, MANJDHAAR, DARYA per ashaar likhney hain. Aap apney ashaar, Urdu aur Roman dono mein share bhi kar saktey ho aur compose kar key bhi share kar saktey ho :rose

[shy]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

:thmbup:

[hayaa_n]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

Sahil
Is Qadar Hay Sukoot Mowjo'n Main
Jaisey Sahil Pay Kuch Huwa Hay Abhi

(Kiya Apna Bhi Likha Ja Sakta Hay..Main Nay Apna Likh Diya Hay. Delete Kar Kay Kisi Doosray Ka Likh Doo'n?)

[Masood]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

(Kiya Apna Bhi Likha Ja Sakta Hay..Main Nay Apna Nikh Diya Hay. Delete Kar Kay Kisi Doosray Ka Likh Doo'n)

Ji Hayaa bilkul apna bhi likha jaa sakta hai, ba'shart yeh keh woh shairi key taqazon ko poora karta ho aur aap ka kalaam masha'Allah sey har lehaz sey achha hota hai. So please do share your own :)

Hayaat ham koi talatum mein ley key doob gaee
wagar'nah maut ney sahil dikha diya hota
Adam

[hayaa_n]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

Bouhat shukriya.ji samajh gai.

Sahil

Gharq kar'deta hay sahil ka sukoo'n un ko Háya
Zadd main toofano'n ki aa'kar jo nikal jatay hain

(Háya)

[Masood]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

samundar:

Jaa samundar dekh li ham ney teri darya dili
tishna lab rakha sadaf ko boond paani key liye
(??)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

Sahil

Haal kiya poochtay ho mera dosto mujh pay beeti jo sunnay kay qabil nahi
Zindagi kay main us mour par hoo'n jaha'n sirf toofa'n hi toofa'n hain sahil nahi
(Háya)

[Masood]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

Sahil aur manjhdhar

Khabardar! aey subuk saraan-e-saahil
yeh saahil bhi kahbi manjdhar bhi hai
Jiggar

[hayaa_n]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

Darya

Jab teri yaad main nam hoti hain aankhain meri
Behtay Darya merey ashko'n main mila kartay hain
(Háya)

[Masood]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

Darya

Main keh khush hota tha, darya ki rawani dekh ker
kaanp uthta hoon, gali koochoon mein paani dekh ker
shehzad ahmed

[Enigmatic]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

Darya:
Yeh jo darya maiN chala aaya sunhera sa ghuroor
Us nay darya maiN kahiN paoN utara hoga

[hayaa_n]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

Darya
Ajab hay raat say aankho'n ka aalam
Yeh darya raat bhar charhta raha hay

[Enigmatic]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

Darya

Baad-e-mawafiq kay dosh pay rawaan rahay mairee zindagi:rose
Tairee fart-e-muhabbat may chaloo'n, woh darya ki dhaar day:rose

zee

[ummid]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

jin ko toofan se ulajhney ki aadat ho "mohsin",
un ki koshish ko samander bhi dua detay hain!

[aik_lerki]

Re: Is Haftey Ka Lafz ~*~ Sahil, Samunder.. ~*~ (01/06)

Samander

Mai samander tha mager veerano main sehra ki tarah
mery gher tak chal ker ataa itna piasa koun thaa