Bazm-e-Ummid

[ummid]

Re: apna tamasha

Assalaam o alaikum
ummid g bohat achay zabardast bohat khoob.
hamm elfy maiN bujhay alfaaz istemaal kartay haiN na iss liay aap khichay chalay aatay haiN. ohhh yai baataiN to nahi batanay wali hoti haiN.. khair kabhi kabhar sach nikal hi aataa hay.
aap aur kaawishaiN karaiN hamm issi tarah elfy walay nahi nahi himmat afzaaee walay alfaz istemal kar k aap ko bulatay rahaiN gae.
ALLAH hafiz
Raza Baykamal

thank you!:rose
per mujhe "elfy" ka matlab nahi maloom:cc: agar aap bata dein tu nawazish hogi.
khush rahiye.

[aabi2cool]

Re: apna tamasha

nice one

[Khushi]

Re: apna tamasha

:rose apna aap tamasha karke dekhoonga,
khud se khud ko tanha karke dekhoonga,

wo shoala hai yaa chashm, kuchh bhed khule,
patthar dil mein rasta karke dekhoonga,

kab bichhda tha kaun ghadi, thi yaad nahi,
lamha lamha yakja karke dekhoonga,

waada karke log bhula kyon dete hain,
abke aisa main bhi karke dekhoonga,

:masha :masha

[ummid]

hont jaltay hain

Baywafaa Raastay Badaltay Hain
Humsafar Saath Saath Chaltay Hain
Kis Kay Aanso Chupay Hain Pholoo'n Main,
Choomta Hoon To Hont Jaltay Hain!

[Aania]

Re: hont jaltay hain

Baywafaa Raastay Badaltay Hain
Humsafar Saath Saath Chaltay Hain
Kis Kay Aanso Chupay Hain Pholoo'n Main,
Choomta Hoon To Hont Jaltay Hain!

zabardast.... keep sharing... :rose

[ummid]

rahne de

:rose Mujh ko apne hazoor rehne de.
Kuch mera bhi gharoor rehne de.

Raaston ka khumaar kaafi hai,
Manzilon ka saroor rehne de.

Har khataa ki sazaa nahin laazim,
Kuch mera bhi kasoor rehne de.:rose

[Yaaram]

Re: hont jaltay hain

Bohat umdah :) keep coming and keep shaaring :)

[Masood]

Re: hont jaltay hain

Haey haey haey maar dala bohat umdah shair sunaya hai Ummid - keep it up :)

[ummid]

Re: hont jaltay hain

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lot.:)

['SamRazi']

Re: hont jaltay hain

buhut zaabrdast shair hai dear , khush raho :)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: hont jaltay hain

Great very nice

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: hont jaltay hain

Asslam-o-Alikum wr wb

nice

FeamanAllah

[ummid]

aik shakhs

:rose Bana Gulab Tu Kante Chuba Gaya Aik Shakhs.
Hua Chirag Tu Ghar Hi Jala Gaya Aik Shakhs. :rose

:roseTamam Rang Mere Aur Sare Khwab Mere,
Fasane Thay Ke Fasana Bana Gaya Aik Shakhs.:rose

:roseMein Kis Hawa Mein Uron Kis Fiza Mein Lehraon,
Dukhon Ke Jaal Har Su Bhicha Gaya Aik Shakhs. :rose

:roseMohabbaton Ne Kissi Ki Bhula Rakha Tha Isse,
Mille Who Zakham Ke Phir Yaad Agaya Aik Shakhs.:rose

:roseKhula Yeh Raaz Ke Aaina-e- Khana Hai Duniya,
Aur Is Mein Mujhay Tamasha Bana Gaya Aik Shakhs.:rose

[Masood]

Re: aik shakhs

Bana Gulab Tu Kante Chuba Gaya Aik Shakhs.
Hua Chirag Tu Ghar Hi Jala Gaya Aik Shakhs.

Mohabbaton Ne Kissi Ki Bhula Rakha Tha Isse,
Mille Who Zakham Ke Phir Yaad Agaya Aik Shakhs.

Khula Yeh Raaz Ke Aaina-e- Khana Hai Duniya,
Aur Is Mein Mujhay Tamasha Bana Gaya Aik Shakhs.

Very impressive - bohat aala aur umdah shairi hai, good sharing ummid

[ummid]

dhadkan

jeet le jaye mujh ko koi nasibon wala
zindagi ne mujhe daow per laga rakha hai.
imtehan mere zabt ka tum kya loge...................
mei ne tu dhadkan ko bhi seenay mein chupa rakha hai.