Bazm-e-Ummid

[Masood]

Re: bhiga hoa kagaz

Ummid bohat umdah intikhaab hai aap ka - I think main aap key muntakhib kardah ashaar aik thread mein jama karta hoon, is sey ziyada khoobsurat lagey ga - khush raho :)

['SamRazi']

Re: bhiga hoa kagaz

i just want to say "sorry" to you people b'coz the above written shair is wrong the correct one is:
:love:koi tehrir 'mitao' tu dhoowan uthta hai
dil woh bhiga hoa kagaz hai keh jalta hi nahi!

i hope you will understand keh insan se galti ho jati hai!

No need to say sorry dear, shair dono sortein mei hi zabardast ahi kiu ke dono ka pegham ek hi hai :)


Thnx for sharing and correcting as well :phool:

[ummid]

dil

:love: dil ajab shehar hai keh jis per bhi khola dar iska
woh musafir use har simt se barbad karey!

[hayaa_n]

Re: dil

Shukriya sharing ka. :)

[ummid]

mera mehbob

woh tu woh hai tumhein ho jayegi ulfat mujh se
ek nazar tum mera mehbobe-nazar tu dekho!

[ummid]

Re: bhiga hoa kagaz

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lot!
Masood bhaijan chaar ashar padh ker raay mat qayam kijye mujhse umda collection tu aap sab logon ka hai.
"may allah grace upon all of us"

[rehman]

Re: mera mehbob

woh tu woh hai tumhein ho jayegi ulfat mujh se
ek nazar tum mera mehbobe-nazar tu dekho!

meinay kuch samjha nahi...??

[ummid]

Re: mera mehbob

i am shoked!
is ka yeh matlab hai ke: mera mehbob itna pyaara hai ke usey dekhney key baad aap ko na sirf us se balkeh meri pasand sey(mujh se)bhi mohabbt ho jayegi!
shaid ab aap ko samajh mein aajaye!
is shair per shair ne mushaira jeet liya tha.

[ummid]

ek shair

:rose woh hain bhi nahi bhi mere ranj-o-gum mein shamil,
woh qadam mere saath bhi rahein hai aur door bhi chalein hain.:rose

[ummid]

dil-e-betab

:love:Aye dard bata kuch tu hi bata ab tak yeh muamma hal na hoa,
hum mein hai dil-e-betab nihan ya aap dil-e-betab hai hum!

nihan: chupa hoa.

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: dil-e-betab

Aye dard bata kuch tu hi bata ab tak yeh muamma hal na hoa,
hum mein hai dil-e-betab nihan ya aap dil-e-betab hai hum!


buhat ala

[ummid]

muhhabbat

:rose jab kabhi khwaab ki ummid bandha karti hai,
neend aankhon mein pareshan phira karti hai.
yaad rakhna hi muhabbat mein nahi hai sab kuch,
bhool jana bhi badi baat hoa karti hai!:rose

[Yaaram]

Re: muhhabbat

Bohat umdah qita hum se share kya hay aapne ummid jee keep sharing :)

[D@y W@lk3r]

Re: muhhabbat

super
taluq he na rahay koe...
jab k sabab bhi baki ho..
kiya mein abb bhi zinda hoon
kiya tum abb bhi baki hoo....

[ummid]

bewafai ki mushkilein