~Sitaroon se aage~

[Wafa]

:)

[khananiz]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

nice one.........:thmbup:

[Wafa]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

nice one.........:thmbup:

shukriya.....:)

[Masood]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

Wafa aap ney shair ghalat likh diya hai ....

sitaron sey aagey jahan aur bhi hain
abhi ISHQ key imtihaan aur bhi hain

[Mrs.Khan]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

Hmm Very Nice

[Karb]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

hmmm ishq ho ya zindagi baat to aik hi hai...par shayer ke ehsaas me ishq lafz tha...:)
nice composition

[*Rida*]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom

wow...wat frame.....:D
shair ki mistake Masood bhai nay bata di :)
composing as wholw achi hai

[Wafa]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

bohot bohot shukriya aap sab ka.......:phool:
shair me ishq he hai, lekin me ne kisi song me zindagi suna aur mughe aisa ziada acha laga...:blush:

[fari]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

bohat zabrdast Composing ha Wafa too good I wish ka mai bhi kar sakon:)

[Masood]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

bohot bohot shukriya aap sab ka.......:phool:
shair me ishq he hai, lekin me ne kisi song me zindagi suna aur mughe aisa ziada acha laga...:blush:

woh to theek hai Wafa lekin is sey Iqbal key shair ka satyanas ho jata hai na... :)

[Wafa]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

woh to theek hai Wafa lekin is sey Iqbal key shair ka satyanas ho jata hai na... :)

acha.........:D
to theek hai me kal he correction kar do ge......:lpop:

[Wafa]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

bohat zabrdast Composing ha Wafa too good I wish ka mai bhi kar sakon:)

dear wo din door nahi jab tum is se bhi ache composing karo ge.....baas tum practice karte raho ........:lpop:

[Masood]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

acha.........:D
to theek hai me kal he correction kar do ge......:lpop:

jeeti raho khush raho doodho nahao potoon phalo - mazeed kya kehtey hain :D:

[Wafa]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

jeeti raho khush raho doodho nahao potoon phalo - mazeed kya kehtey hain :D:

mughe to jo likha hai ,us ka bhi adha aata hai...:blush:
soo nice of u ......:phool:

[shakeeel]

Re: ~Sitaroon se aage~

Bohat acha,
( zidagi ke imtehan aur Ishaq ke imtehan mein bohat faraq hai)