Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

[*Rida*]

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

[shakeeel]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

Bohat acha design kiya aap ne lekin kuch mistake hai, yeh ghazal kuch is tarah hai :

Kabhi Aansoo Kabhi Khushboo Kabhi Naghma Bankar
Hum Say Her shaam Mili Hai Tera Chehra Bankar

Chand Nikla Hai Teri Aankh K Ansoo Ki Tarah
Phool Mehkay Hain Teri Zulf Ka Saya Bankar

Meri Jaagi Huyi Raaton Ko Usi Ki Hai Talash
So Raha Hai Meri Ankhon Main Jo Sapna Bankar

Dil Kay Kaghaz Par Utarta Hai Jo Sheron Ki Tarah
Meray Hontoon Pay Machalta Hai Jo Naghma Bankar

Raat Bhi aaye To Bujhti Nahin Chehray Ki Chamak
Rouh Main Phail Gaya Hai Woh Ujala Bankar

Mera Kya Haal Hai Yeh Aakay Kabhi dekh To Lay
Jee Rahi Hoon Tera Bhoola Hua Vada Bankar

Dhoup Main Kho Gaya Woh Haath Chhura Kar
Ghar Say Jo Saath Chala Tha Mera Saya Bankar

Kabhi Aansoo Kabhi Khushboo Kabhi Naghma Banker
Hum Say Her Shaam Mili Hai Tera Chehra Banker

[*Rida*]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

wow .......Shakeel bhai thanks........
main is ki correction bhi karon gi...aur ghazal bhi design karnay ki koshish karon gi....

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

nice rida
bahoot khoob

[fari]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

bohat pyari designing ha

[Aarzo]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

wow Bohaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat umdah

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

a beautiful combination Rida

very nice

[*Rida*]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

Wasi
Fari
Kishwar
Aamir
aap sab kay pasand karnay ka buht shukriyaa

[Shaim]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

Nice Rida Sisso :rose

[Aamir Ahmed]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

Hmmmm Nice Image and Nice Qitta but Ye pori Ghazal hai

[*Rida*]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

main nay kab inkaar kia poori ghazal nahin :D

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

walaikum assalam
rida jaani bohat khubsoorat intekhab aur kaam :rose
keep it up

[*Rida*]

Re: Rooh mein phail gaya hai woh........

thanks Rb:phool: