Ham Ko Jahan Se Kiyaa....

[Aania]

['SamRazi']

Re: Ham Ko Jahan Se Kiyaa....

Bin mangey hi qabool ho jis dil ki her dua
mangey woh khushnaseeb terey aastaan se kya :thmbup:

Buhut khoob dear :)

[Aania]

Re: Ham Ko Jahan Se Kiyaa....

Bin mangey hi qabool ho jis dil ki her dua
mangey woh khushnaseeb terey aastaan se kya :thmbup:

Buhut khoob dear :)

thnx u thnx... u ... khush rahye...

[Nav]

Re: Ham Ko Jahan Se Kiyaa....

:thmbup: very nice aania

[Aania]

Re: Ham Ko Jahan Se Kiyaa....

:thmbup: very nice aania

thnx u so much...:rose

[Aania]

Re: Ham Ko Jahan Se Kiyaa....

waah Aano, waah :rose kia jaadoo jagaayaa hai is jaadooaana kalaam se. mujhe hamesha hii talab rahtii hai k shaa'ir kaa naam ma'loom ho jaaye...is baar bhi tum ne shaa'ir kaa naam nahiiN likhaa aur sitam yeh oopar se k Ghazal bhii mukammil nahiiN...maqt'a to na-daarad hai...agar baqaayaa ash'aar mil jaayeN to please zaroor p[ost karna. thank you :rose

ek baat sochaa tumhaare zehn e mubaarik meN daaltaa chaluuN..aakhiri she'r ke dusre misr'e meN lafz "TERE" [te, ye, re, ye] saHeeH nahiiN hai kiuNki she'r be-vazan ho jaayegaa aur Khaarij-ul-bahr bhii...is lafz kaa ek aur roop hai vo saHeeH hogaa yahaN is she'r meN, aur vo lafz hai "TIRE" [te zer, re, ye] which has a shorter vowel. hope you didn't mind. :rose

jinaab bohat shukryaa... i didnt know ke ghazal full nahen hai :cc:
mujhey to pm aaya thaa ke ye ghazal bana den... to bana di... :cc:
trey or terey... mein bhi confuse thee... :cc: fir socha chalo... jaan deyo dekha jaaye gaa... :cc:
thnx... for ur concern...
as i m new born in urdu designing n ... urdu writing ... so need correction all the time... :) :cc:
thnx to like it... khush rahye.. i ll the word soon...inshaAllah... :rose
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