A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

[Gul]

[SherAli]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

salaam Gul saaHiba,

aapkii pesh-kash nazaar navaaz huii. Hasb-e-ma'mool 'aks laa-jawaab hai jis meN jaazbiyat ba darja-e-atam hai. par, afsos ke saath arz kar rahaa huN k Ghazal koii Khaas nahiiN. jadeediyat se bhari hai aur Ghair maanoos moHaavaraat, talmeeHaat, iste'aaraat must'amil huye haiN. shaayad yeh merii jadeed tarz-e-shaa'irii se naa-waaqfiiyat hai. ba-har kai'f 'aks pasand aayaa. shukria. :)

[Gul]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

yeh Shairi Jadeed nahi :)..

Iss mein Jo B isteaaray Musta`mil Howay hein ...
aik Buhat achi shairy ka aNdaaz hein
Yeh alag baat hai k aap Ko Waqfiyat nahi :)

Dar asal hum urdu poetry ko
sirf Mushkil alfaaz Ka istemaal samjhtay hein
Jab k ...aaj ki poetry nay har Tarz ko apnaya hai !
Urdu Poetry sirf Alfaaz ka ejtema`a hee nahi ....
EHsaass ka Andaaz Bhee hai ...
Bulkeh sirf Alfaaz ko agar istemaal kiya ja-ay aur onn mein
Ehsass nahi ho ...Tu ...WO poetry aik dum Khoakhli hoti hai

Kher..!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shukriya :)

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

Waah bahot khoobsurat design kiya hai
khas taor per frame zabrdast banay hai
Aur poetry ka intkhab to aap ka hota he lajwab hai

[Gul]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

Buhat Shukriya . Wasi ...Mohsan naqvi Ki poetry hai hee zabardast ! ...!

Thanx ...:)

[SherAli]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

yeh Shairi Jadeed nahi :)..

Iss mein Jo B isteaaray Musta`mil Howay hein ...
aik Buhat achi shairy ka aNdaaz hein
Yeh alag baat hai k aap Ko Waqfiyat nahi :)

Dar asal hum urdu poetry ko
sirf Mushkil alfaaz Ka istemaal samjhtay hein
Jab k ...aaj ki poetry nay har Tarz ko apnaya hai !
Urdu Poetry sirf Alfaaz ka ejtema`a hee nahi ....
EHsaass ka Andaaz Bhee hai ...
Bulkeh sirf Alfaaz ko agar istemaal kiya ja-ay aur onn mein
Ehsass nahi ho ...Tu ...WO poetry aik dum Khoakhli hoti hai

Kher..!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shukriya :)

mere Khayaal se "pasand apnii apnii, Khayaal apna apna" kaa misaaq saadqi aataa hai. aisii shairi kisii ko pasand aatii hai kisi ko nahiiN...vaise kuchh shaayar hote ahin jo sadiyoN tak jinkaa naam chaltaa hai kuchh hote ahiN jinkaa naam unke dunyaa se jaane ke bad jald hii miT jaate ahin...yeh sab bas shairi kaa nizaam hai...sabhi ko mauq'e milte ahiN...hai na? sorry if i offended u in anyway...i just tried to discuss and not just passively praise the poetry...right? isn't it a healthy trend? :)

[saraah]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

mizaaj ahl emohabbat ka aasmani hai.....wah gul...thats touching..farme ka border achaa laga.:)

[*Hala*]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

great frame work............ with beautiful selection ;rose:

[*Rida*]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

buht khobsorat design kia hai.. yeh ghazal mujhay bay had pasand hai...

[YAJ]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

kia baat hay janab...maza aa gya.....thanks to u

[Sky angel]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

very nice

[R A P T O R]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

HAm APKEy ZUOK kU SALAAm krtey hain

[Soulmate]

Re: A ghazal Of MOhsan naqvi ..

wow its really great work