Aurat

[Masood]

Apni aik ghazal - benaam-e-Aurat :rose

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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Apni aik ghazal - benaam-e-Aurat :rose

Kahan hai ghazal:hhh:

[Wafa]

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wow beautiful designing........:thmbup:
ghazal me bohot mushkil word hai..samagh nahi aae....lekin aap ne lekhi hai,to bohot he ache ho ge.....:eye:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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bohat khoob designing aur us per aapka kalam :phool:

[Masood]

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wow beautiful designing........:thmbup:
ghazal me bohot mushkil word hai..samagh nahi aae....lekin aap ne lekhi hai,to bohot he ache ho ge.....:eye:

Hmm chalein ham school bhi khol letey hain, aap btaein kaun sa lafz samajh nahin aaya ?

[Wafa]

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Hmm chalein ham school bhi khol letey hain, aap btaein kaun sa lafz samajh nahin aaya ?

is me to bohot saare lafz samagh nahi aae :embarasse ...rehne de ,its ok....:D

[MuQadas]

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wahhhhhhhh baree khoobsurat ia main takhalus masood kion istemal howa hai kia yeh appnay likhi hai

bohat zabar10

[Masood]

Re: Aurat

wahhhhhhhh baree khoobsurat ia main takhalus masood kion istemal howa hai kia yeh appnay likhi hai

bohat zabar10

Yeh ji aik be'tuka shair hai Masood uski likhi hui hai :zuban: aur us waqt us ney likhi thi jab uski age 14 yrs thi

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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Hmm chalein ham school bhi khol letey hain, aap btaein kaun sa lafz samajh nahin aaya ?

school kholnay se behter hay k aap aasan urdu use kia kijieey ......
bhala aap se kis ney kaha bahadur shah zaffar k zamanay ki urdu likhein:a stick: .....bachi becharee ko pareshan ker diya :comfort:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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Yeh ji aik be'tuka shair hai Masood uski likhi hui hai :zuban: aur us waqt us ney likhi thi jab uski age 14 yrs thi

oho to ye baytukkay , baydhangay:zuban: :zuban: shair 14 years ki age se hee baabay thay

[Masood]

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school kholnay se behter hay k aap aasan urdu use kia kijieey ......
bhala aap se kis ney kaha bahadur shah zaffar k zamanay ki urdu likhein:a stick: .....bachi becharee ko pareshan ker diya :comfort:

BIBI ji abhi to main bohat khiyaal rakhta hoon keh AAP ney parhna hai isi liye hath hola rakhta hoon - warna main to Meer Taqi Meer ki urdu likh sakta hoon :p aur bachi seekhney key liye hi to Pegham per aati hai na - seekh jaey gi :p

[MuQadas]

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Yeh ji aik be'tuka shair hai Masood uski likhi hui hai :zuban: aur us waqt us ney likhi thi jab uski age 14 yrs thi

14 sal ki umer main itni mushkil ghazal main to 24 sal ki umer main nahi likh pai

kia pp baqaida shair hain appki dewan e masood chupa k market main hai main seriously poch rahi hon

[Masood]

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oho to ye baytukkay , baydhangay:zuban: :zuban: shair 14 years ki age se hee baabay thay

Jiiiiiii nahin - yeh betukkey bedhangey shair 12 saal ki umer hi sey likhna shuru ho gaey they :p aap ki tarha nahin - aakhri umer mein aa ker bolney lagi hain :p

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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BIBI ji abhi to main bohat khiyaal rakhta hoon keh AAP ney parhna hai isi liye hath hola rakhta hoon - warna main to Meer Taqi Meer ki urdu likh sakta hoon :p aur bachi seekhney key liye hi to Pegham per aati hai na - seekh jaey gi :p

Hola hee rakhiey ga hath , werna hamein bharee karna paray ga bailan ya hathora:hathora
bachi ko agar aisay sikhaya to bachi phir giyoooo:kr: :kr:

[Masood]

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14 sal ki umer main itni mushkil ghazal main to 24 sal ki umer main nahi likh pai

kia pp baqaida shair hain appki dewan e masood chupa k market main hai main seriously poch rahi hon

Nahin Muqadas - main ney kabhi koi kitaab nahin likhi - siraf apni website Bismillah @ Shab-o-Roz - Tariq Maqsood's HomePage sey aaghaz kiya tha aur ab mera aksar kalaam Pegham key is section mein mojood hai agar aap nazar sani karna chahein to:

http://www.pegham.com/masood/