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  • Re: ~~.alfaaz say designing ashaar post karain .~~

    sawan ki hawaon ka jab shor sunoge tum
    bikhrey howe mazi ke jab awraaq chunoge tum
    mahol ke chehrey par jab dhool jami hogi
    mehsoos tumhein har dum phir meri kami hogi
    jab tum mujhe dhoondogey aankhon me nami hogi

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    • Re: ~~.alfaaz say designing ashaar post karain .~~

      Originally posted by Aanchal View Post
      "hum"
      please sher derust lekha karain
      dosra mesra kuch yon hay
      khak ho jain gay meger tum ko khaber honay tak

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      • Re: ~~.alfaaz say designing ashaar post karain .~~

        shakeel bhai bahut umda
        aap ka intekhab bahut acha hay
        alfaz main bhi derustgi hay
        qafiya o radeef ka bhi kheyal rekha gaya hay

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        • Re: ~~.alfaaz say designing ashaar post karain .~~

          Originally posted by naveed iqbal View Post
          please sher derust lekha karain
          dosra mesra kuch yon hay
          khak ho jain gay meger tum ko khaber honay tak

          sher tu aisay hee hai k
          Hum nay mana k tagahaful na karo gay laikin
          Khaak ho jaein gay hum tum ko khabar honay tak...
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          aur Naveed Sahib yehan per sher ki desiging hoti hai sab VALID AND KNOWN poets ki ...so ..
          radeef qafiya b onhi ka use hota hai .....,,rest mein kia keh sakti hoon :)

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          • Re: ~~.alfaaz say designing ashaar post karain .~~

            Originally posted by Gul View Post

            sher tu aisay hee hai k
            Hum nay mana k tagahaful na karo gay laikin
            Khaak ho jaein gay hum tum ko khabar honay tak...
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            aur Naveed Sahib yehan per sher ki desiging hoti hai sab VALID AND KNOWN poets ki ...so ..
            radeef qafiya b onhi ka use hota hai .....,,rest mein kia keh sakti hoon :)
            ful bhai ye theek hay keh redeef o qafiye beray shaeron ka hi use hota hay laken meray jesay log jis tereh is ki tang merortay hain us ka aap ko bhi andaza hona chahiye
            hemaray liye to ye hi kafi hay keh ager ham khud shair nahain keh saktay to dosray shaeron kay shairon ko to sahi redeef o qafeeye say perhain ye lekhay

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            • Re: ~~.alfaaz say designing ashaar post karain .~~

              hala g

              it is not truth that some pepole are living for itself

              as a example we are iving for over beloved persons

              Amanat Hussain AnjumSharjah

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              • Re: ~~.alfaaz say designing ashaar post karain .~~

                Originally posted by naveed iqbal View Post
                ful bhai ye theek hay keh redeef o qafiye beray shaeron ka hi use hota hay laken meray jesay log jis tereh is ki tang merortay hain us ka aap ko bhi andaza hona chahiye
                hemaray liye to ye hi kafi hay keh ager ham khud shair nahain keh saktay to dosray shaeron kay shairon ko to sahi redeef o qafeeye say perhain ye lekhay
                aap nay meray tu naam hee mein mistake kar de Naveed Sahib...
                aur behna se bhai bana diya

                mein iss baray mein ab aur kia keh sakti hoon....bass itna k ...mein nay ya kisi nay b jo sher yehan istemaal kiyay ....oss mein agar koi ghalati waqi hoi tu hum nay ek doosray ki mistake ko point out kiya..aur phir....Oss ko darust kia..
                hum sher kahein ya nahi ..wo ek alag baat hai ...aur kuch nahi keh sakti mein ab :)

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                • Re: ~~.alfaaz say designing ashaar post karain .~~

                  Maza Aagya Janab

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                  • Re: ~~.alfaaz say designing ashaar post karain .~~

                    Originally posted by Gul View Post
                    aap nay meray tu naam hee mein mistake kar de Naveed Sahib...
                    aur behna se bhai bana diya

                    mein iss baray mein ab aur kia keh sakti hoon....bass itna k ...mein nay ya kisi nay b jo sher yehan istemaal kiyay ....oss mein agar koi ghalati waqi hoi tu hum nay ek doosray ki mistake ko point out kiya..aur phir....Oss ko darust kia..
                    hum sher kahein ya nahi ..wo ek alag baat hai ...aur kuch nahi keh sakti mein ab :)

                    oh so sorry dear sister mujhay ilam nahain tha

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                    • Re: ~~.alfaaz say designing ashaar post karain .~~

                      i Am Back


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                        TAQDEER
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                        • Re: ~~.alfaaz say designing ashaar post karain .~~

                          Originally posted by shakeeel View Post
                          i Am Back

                          Originally posted by shakeeel View Post
                          TAQDEER
                          welcome back ji :rose
                          bohat he khubsurat design :rose

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                            Munkir
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                              :rose DUSHMAN :rose
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