Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

[sheem]

Re: Aania's demand

kitnay muskil mushkil alfaaz hain is main :khi:

wah zaberdsat kaam kiya hai aap ne anchal

keep it up yaar :clap::clap:

:phool:

[shakeeel]

Re: Aania's demand

Hello- Aania, this is my composition, kesi lagi?

[ADNAN.S]

Re: Aania's demand

salaam aania g......main ne b eik choti si koshish ki umeed hai aap ko pasand aay gi.....

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Re: Aania's demand

wow sabhi nay bhuhat achi try ki hai :thmbup:

chaloo Aania ki demand to poori hovi :lpop:

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*Kainat* Demand

Assalamalikum

Aania kay bad humaye doosri request designing poetry demand ki kainat ki taraf say ai hai :) .....umeed hai aap sab is ki bhi buhat achi designing karain gay :phool:

*~*~*~*~*~*Shaam K Baad*~*~*~*~*~*

Mein Ney Tanhai Sey Poocha K Milo Gi Kab Tak
Us Ney Becheni Sey Foran Hi Kaha Shaam K Baad

Tu Ney Dekha Hai Kabhi Ik Nazar Shaam K Baad
Kitney Chup Chap Sey Lagtey Hain Shajar Shaam K Baad

Itney Chup Chap K Rastey Bhi Rahen Gey La Ilam
Chor Jayen Gey Kissi Roz Nagar Shaam K Baad

Mein Ney Aisey Hi Gunah Teri Judai Mein Kiye
Jaisey Toofan Mein Koi Chor Dey Ghar Shaam K Baad

Shaam Sey Pehley Woh Mast Apni Urano Mein Rahey
Jinkey Hathon Mein They Tootey Huye Par Shaam K Baad

Raat Beti To Giney Abley Aur Phir Soocha!
Kon Tha Ba isey Agaz e Safar Shaam K Baad

Tu Hai Suraj Tujhey Maloom Kahan Raat Ka Dukh
Tu Kissi Roz Mere Ghar Mein Utar Shaam K Baad

Lot Aaye Na Kissi Roz Woh Awara Mizaj
Khol Rakhtey Hain Issi Aas Pe Dar Shaam K Baad

[ADNAN.S]

Re: *Kainat* Demand

salaam kainat g.......i will try.....par aap ne jo ghazal likhi hai mere kheyaal se yeh ghalat hai.....

[ADNAN.S]

Re: *Kainat* Demand

salaam..... yahee ghazal urdu main upload kar raah hooon...

[Kainat]

Re: *Kainat* Demand

Assalamalikum

Aania kay bad humaye doosri request designing poetry demand ki kainat ki taraf say ai hai :) .....umeed hai aap sab is ki bhi buhat achi designing karain gay :phool:

Thanks Aanchal sis :phool:

[Kainat]

Re: *Kainat* Demand

salaam kainat g.......i will try.....par aap ne jo ghazal likhi hai mere kheyaal se yeh ghalat hai.....

Walekum Assalam. Alone ji :)

well Actually... mai nai khud ishay thora change kya hai :cc: anyway thanks for reminding me
Khush Rahain:dua

[Kainat]

Re: *Kainat* Demand

salaam..... yahee ghazal urdu main upload kar raah hooon...

hmmmmmm well i have this Ghazal ...thanks for sharing :) :thmbup:

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Re: *Kainat* Demand

teesary shair main gana hai ya gunah ?

[shakeeel]

Re: *Kainat* Demand

salam......in 3rd shehr, its "GUNAH" but written in short form.

[Aania]

Re: Aania's demand

bohat shukryaa... Shakeeel , AIL, jumy bro... aanchal di... bohat shukryaa sab ka is cute si poem ko aur cute bana-ney ka... khush rahye...

[Kainat]

Re: *Kainat* Demand

teesary shair main gana hai ya gunah ?

sis Gunah hai :)

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Re: *Kainat* Demand

:rose