*~~Pachhtawa~~*

[WASI ANJUM]

یہ کہانی میں نے بہت پہلے لکھی تھی جب میں پڑہتا تھا
تب یہ کہانی ایک میگزین میں شایع بھی ہوئی تھی
سوچا کہ آپ سب کے ساتھ بھی شیئر کروں
وصی انجم

[Afroze]

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Allah Asy aqal baki asheko ko bhi dy ...bhot Acha lekha ha ap ny

[WASI ANJUM]

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Bahoot shukriya Afroze
Aameen he keh sakta hoon

[*Hijab*]

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Assalamo-Alekam
Yeh hue na asal baat sir, bilkul zindagi bewafa aur khud-garz logon ki wajh say barbaad karnay ki shay nahi hai.
Agar hum kise ke liye mar saktey hein, rou saktey hein, tou apno ke liye khud ko khush bhi rakh saktey hein aur un ke liye jee bhi saktey hein.
Bohat sabaq-amouz tehreer raqam ki hai aap nay.
Jazak ALLAH for sharing!

[WASI ANJUM]

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Assalamo-Alekam
Yeh hue na asal baat sir, bilkul zindagi bewafa aur khud-garz logon ki wajh say barbaad karnay ki shay nahi hai.
Agar hum kise ke liye mar saktey hein, rou saktey hein, tou apno ke liye khud ko khush bhi rakh saktey hein aur un ke liye jee bhi saktey hein.
Bohat sabaq-amouz tehreer raqam ki hai aap nay.
Jazak ALLAH for sharing!

Walekum Asslam
bahoot bahoot shukriya Hijab:rose
ye story mene bahoot pehlay likhi thi
pehlay isi type ki story likha karta tha......lekin ab nahi likhi jati
shayed ab meri sochoon ka rukh badal gaya hai :)

[*Hijab*]

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Walekum Asslam
bahoot bahoot shukriya Hijab:rose
ye story mene bahoot pehlay likhi thi
pehlay isi type ki story likha karta tha......lekin ab nahi likhi jati
shayed ab meri sochoon ka rukh badal gaya hai :)

Assalamo-Alekam!
Ji haan hota hai aisa.....woh phir yeh he keh lijeay kay insan us jagh khara ho jaata hai jahan khud tou woh andehray mein hota hai magar dosron ko roshni day raha hota hai.
Halaat kay saath saath insan kay khiylaat aur jazbaat badaltey rehtey hein, kuch changes positive bhi hotay hein lekin koshish honi chaiye kay negative changes ko avoid kiya jayey.
Well, aap ab bhi acha likhtey hein, bus ab aap ki kahani ka mouzo badal gaya hai, which is fine:)
Keep writing!

[Pakiza]

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BAHUT
khubsoorat
zabardas
meaningful
aur umda tehreer
kafi pur asar aur simple tehreer hai

bahut khub Wasi bhai

[WASI ANJUM]

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Assalamo-Alekam!
Ji haan hota hai aisa.....woh phir yeh he keh lijeay kay insan us jagh khara ho jaata hai jahan khud tou woh andehray mein hota hai magar dosron ko roshni day raha hota hai.
Halaat kay saath saath insan kay khiylaat aur jazbaat badaltey rehtey hein, kuch changes positive bhi hotay hein lekin koshish honi chaiye kay negative changes ko avoid kiya jayey.
Well, aap ab bhi acha likhtey hein, bus ab aap ki kahani ka mouzo badal gaya hai, which is fine:)
Keep writing!

Bahot bahoot shukriya Hijab aap ne bilkul sahi farmaya
waqat k saath saath insaan ki sochen badal jati hain
thanx again:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

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BAHUT
khubsoorat
zabardas
meaningful
aur umda tehreer
kafi pur asar aur simple tehreer hai

bahut khub Wasi bhai

Pasand karne ka Bahoot shukriya Pakiza :rose

[shummu]

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wah bahut hii sabaq aamoz tehreer thi...abhi aapki 2 kahaniyaan parhin aur dono se ek baat to zaahir hui ke aap ki tehreer mein rawaani aur tasalsul barqarar rehta hai aur aap ek aam roz marra ke alfaaz istimaal karte hain isliye aur mazaa aata hai paRhne ka...aakhir mein jo aap ne likha woh to dil ko chuu gaya khaaskar woh maan ke qadmon tale jannat waali baat..bahut khoob..dheron daad pesh hai is qadar umda likhne par!

[WASI ANJUM]

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wah bahut hii sabaq aamoz tehreer thi...abhi aapki 2 kahaniyaan parhin aur dono se ek baat to zaahir hui ke aap ki tehreer mein rawaani aur tasalsul barqarar rehta hai aur aap ek aam roz marra ke alfaaz istimaal karte hain isliye aur mazaa aata hai paRhne ka...aakhir mein jo aap ne likha woh to dil ko chuu gaya khaaskar woh maan ke qadmon tale jannat waali baat..bahut khoob..dheron daad pesh hai is qadar umda likhne par!

Pasand karne ka bahoot bahoot shukriya Shummu :rose