Barish ki khushboo

[Mahvish Waqas]

Assalam o alaikum wr wb

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Barish ki khushboo

Barish ki ye khushboo hamesha mujhe tumhari qurbat ka ahsaas dilaigi .........
k tum mere qareeb ho........bahot qareeb

waah zabardast bahot khoobsurat tehreer

[life.]

Re: Barish ki khushboo

gr8 ..............

[Z.]

Re: Barish ki khushboo

acha likha hai mehwish (Y)

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Barish ki khushboo

Assalam o alaikum wr wb..

Pasand karnay ka bohat shukria..

[Z.]

Re: Barish ki khushboo

Assalam o alaikum wr wb..

Pasand karnay ka bohat shukria..

walaikum salam :-)

[thefire1]

Re: Barish ki khushboo

Walaikum Assalaam WRWB

Barish ki khushboo..iss nazm ka unwaan bazaat-e-khudh apnay andar samandar see gehrayi rakhta hay aur uss kay saath saath aap ka andaaz-e-khudh kalaami aur lafzoon kay intikhaab nay poori nazm main char chaand laga diye, bohat hi khoobsurat tehreer hay aur har uss shaksh kay dil ko choo sakti hay jissay BAARISH say mohabbat ho, Parveen shaakir ki ek bohat choti si nazm hay baarish ki munasibit per, paish karnay ki jasaarat kar raha hoon....

Baarish ka ek qatra
Meri Ankhoon kay rastay
Meray dil main
Kahin gum ho gaya!

Issi tarhan likhti rahain aur humain apni khoobsurat tehreer say mustafeed karti rahain.

ALLAH HAFIZ

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Barish ki khushboo

Assalam o alaikum wr wb the fire ji..

Pasand karnay ka bohat shukria..
Shukria kay aap ne parveen shakir ka itna khbsorat kalam share kiya...
Bohat bohat shukria :)

[*Rida*]

Re: Barish ki khushboo

buht acha likha hai .....:rose.....