Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

[Aania]

jagti aankhon se subah ka manzar acha laga ...
ham uljhey huye bethey rahey raat bhar ..
ye soch liye ..kuch ban- parrey to ham bhi manzil ko chalen
...khayalon ne karwat li ...
subah ke ujaley ne khirrki se jhanka ..
hamari aankhon ... ko kuch pur-noor kia..
.ham nazara aasmaan ka dekhtey hi reh gaye ..
phir athkhelyaan gilehryon ki darakhton ki zeenat banin...
ab to soch ..dukh se sukh ki janib yun huii ke ham bhool
gaye preshaan kion kar the...
gehri saans ne umeed ke kuch diye roshan kar diye...
akhyaan qudrat ka nazara kartey janey kese khuaab
bun-ney lagin...
Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi Ley Ura Neendai.n .
.kuch ajab sa aalam thaa.. ham jaagtey rahey lekin
ham jagey na the.. so rahey the shayed ..
ya gum kisi maqsad ki khyali bunyaad pe the...
ham nahen jaantey kitni der tak us hisar main rahey..
. ke .. aankhon se neend to raat bhar ojhal rahi...
lekin .. khuwab kia tha wo jo le urra neenden ..
ham nahen jantey ya .. shayed ham khush hotey
rahey khuli aankhon se manzilon ki kahanyaan
parhtey huye jo ghera kiye rahin hamen raat bhar...
aur subah ke ujaley ne rang bhar diye muskurahat
ke in jagti aankhon main...

by me (A)

:cc:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

hmmmmmm cool:phool:

[baykamal]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

Assalaam o alaikum
kya baat hay !
haiN kya baat hay ???
mujhay kuch samajh nahi aayaa!!! :(
wassalaam
Raza Baykamal

[Withoutsoul]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi


BEAUTIFUL POEMS.... WOW.....

[Aania]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

BEAUTIFUL POEMS.... WOW.....

ye nasr hai
poems nahen hain.. :(

[Aania]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

Assalaam o alaikum
kya baat hay !
haiN kya baat hay ???
mujhay kuch samajh nahi aayaa!!! :(
wassalaam
Raza Baykamal

aap ka reply parh ke meri hansi band nahen ho rahi Razaaaaaaa
kahan reh gaye ho .... :lol

[Withoutsoul]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

ye nasr hai
poems nahen hain.. :(

LIKHEE AZAD NAZM K STYLE MAI HAI NA...
NASR TO PARAGRAPHS KI SOORAT MAI LIKHEE JATI HAI.. :zuban:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

bohat umda, adik sunder, bulke mashallah :flower

[Aania]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

LIKHEE AZAD NAZM K STYLE MAI HAI NA...
NASR TO PARAGRAPHS KI SOORAT MAI LIKHEE JATI HAI.. :zuban:

apun ka apna style hai ji.... :lpop:

[Aania]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

bohat umda, adik sunder, bulke mashallah :flower

shukran ... shonyo... aap ko acha laga ish liye shukran ... khush raho...

[baykamal]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

Assalaam o alaikum
wo kehtay haiN na k jab kisi jaanwar ki shaamat aati hay to wo sheher ki taraf dauRta hay aur jabb kisi insan pay shaamat aati hay to wo apnay pinD ki taraf dauRta hay!!!! abhi takk maiN pinD nahi gya!! yaani k theek hooN!!
fikar not!!!! maiN abhi takk iss nazm-e-nasr k beech maiN hi hooN k yai hay kya !!!! kya aania nay kuch naee sinf e sukhan to nahi eejaad kar li?? waisay inn ki sinf e sukhan, sinf e sukhan kamm aur sinf e dukhan zyada hoti hay!!!
ab haso tumhaiN maan jaooN ga!!!
wassalaam
Baykamal

[Withoutsoul]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

apun ka apna style hai ji.... :lpop:

Poem k style mai nasr...... :khi: :lol

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

aSSLAM_o_aLIKUM wr wb

Nice aania ... sorry late dekha

FeaamnAllah

[Aania]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

Assalaam o alaikum
wo kehtay haiN na k jab kisi jaanwar ki shaamat aati hay to wo sheher ki taraf dauRta hay aur jabb kisi insan pay shaamat aati hay to wo apnay pinD ki taraf dauRta hay!!!! abhi takk maiN pinD nahi gya!! yaani k theek hooN!!
fikar not!!!! maiN abhi takk iss nazm-e-nasr k beech maiN hi hooN k yai hay kya !!!! kya aania nay kuch naee sinf e sukhan to nahi eejaad kar li?? waisay inn ki sinf e sukhan, sinf e sukhan kamm aur sinf e dukhan zyada hoti hay!!!
ab haso tumhaiN maan jaooN ga!!!
wassalaam
Baykamal

bahir aa jao Raza ji.... :khi::tauba:lpop:

[cutelibra]

Re: Ik Khwaab jo dekha Na Kabhi

hmmmmmmmmm nice one aaina ji