main zinda hi nahen rehi....

[Aania]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

Assalaam o alaikum
AUR CHAMAKTI HUI HARR SHAE KO MITAYA TUM NAY
DIL SAY UTH-TAY HUAY SHOLON KI LAPAK BAAQI HAY.
bohat likhti haiN aur khoob likhti haiN pegham ki raunaq kaafi hadd takk inn hi k damm say hai, bohat saari qurbani day k pegham ko sajati haiN.
asaan alfaaz maiN to yai hi kaha jaa sakta hay k alfaaz ka acha chunao hay magar aik shokh shakhsiat say aisi nasr ki tawwaqqo nahi thi.
aur na hi honi chahiyai. ummeed hay k aaienda iss ka khyaal rakha jayai ga.
kuch hasta muskurata sa mazmoon chahiyai hamaiN.
Wasalaam
Raza Baykamal

thnx to like it ... ll try for happy words..... :cc:

[NaQsh]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

bohat hee umda
very touching ........

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

Jab pukara tumhen Tanhayon main... har simt aiesa sannata mila... ke dharkanon ke shor se nafrat si honey lagi... jab bhi chaha tum merey paas ho.. aankhon ko ashkon ke siwa kuch na milaa... jab bhi socha...tumhen milney jaoon...har dar pe dastak bhi di lekin...tumhari yaad ke dareechon se koi jawab hi na mila... jab bhi chaha ... hathon main mehndi rachaoon... tumhen dhoondtey dhoondtey... din mahinon saalon main dhal gaye... jab bhi tumhari pasand ke rang pehney... udaasiyon ne gher liya... aur rangon ki ra'anaayaan bhasm ho gayeen...

ab jo meri qabr pe aao... to na hi zard na hi surkh gulabon ko saath lana.. na koi dua na aansoo saath tum lana... kion ke jab jab main ne dhoondna chaha tum ko... tum kahin bhi to mujhey nazar naa aaye... ab to dil ko andheron ki ... saanson.. ko rukey rehney ki...aadat si ho chuki hai...

Jitney aansoo the sab tumharey liye beh gaye... jitney armaan the... khamoshyon ki nazar ho gaye... jitni aawaazen theen... cheekhen theen... khamoshyon se ulajh ke dafn ho gayeen hain...
ab koi shermindagi koi aah koi afsos koi dukh le ke bhi merey paas tum kabhi na aanaa... bulao ge bhi to ...pukaro ge bhi to... khamoshyaan samet len gi tumhen... kion ke main nahen rahi... main zinda nahen rahi... tumhari aawaaz pe bechain ho ke tum se lipatney ke liye tumhen apna-ney ke liye...
main zinda hi nahen rehi....

by me (A )

Excilent..

[shehzadi]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

AWW.. BAHUT HI UDAAS UMDAA AUR TANZ BHARE AUR KUSH YAAD DILAANE WAALE JHUMLE ..DIL KO chuu gaye bahut khoob jee!

[life.]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

wow..............

[Passionaire]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

bohut behtreen n umdah alfaaz ka chunao hai........

[Dr Maqsood Hasni]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

bohat khoob.......