main zinda hi nahen rehi....

[Aania]

Jab pukara tumhen Tanhayon main... har simt aiesa sannata mila... ke dharkanon ke shor se nafrat si honey lagi... jab bhi chaha tum merey paas ho.. aankhon ko ashkon ke siwa kuch na milaa... jab bhi socha...tumhen milney jaoon...har dar pe dastak bhi di lekin...tumhari yaad ke dareechon se koi jawab hi na mila... jab bhi chaha ... hathon main mehndi rachaoon... tumhen dhoondtey dhoondtey... din mahinon saalon main dhal gaye... jab bhi tumhari pasand ke rang pehney... udaasiyon ne gher liya... aur rangon ki ra'anaayaan bhasm ho gayeen...


ab jo meri qabr pe aao... to na hi zard na hi surkh gulabon ko saath lana.. na koi dua na aansoo saath tum lana... kion ke jab jab main ne dhoondna chaha tum ko... tum kahin bhi to mujhey nazar naa aaye... ab to dil ko andheron ki ... saanson.. ko rukey rehney ki...aadat si ho chuki hai...

Jitney aansoo the sab tumharey liye beh gaye... jitney armaan the... khamoshyon ki nazar ho gaye... jitni aawaazen theen... cheekhen theen... khamoshyon se ulajh ke dafn ho gayeen hain...
ab koi shermindagi koi aah koi afsos koi dukh le ke bhi merey paas tum kabhi na aanaa... bulao ge bhi to ...pukaro ge bhi to... khamoshyaan samet len gi tumhen... kion ke main nahen rahi... main zinda nahen rahi... tumhari aawaaz pe bechain ho ke tum se lipatney ke liye tumhen apna-ney ke liye...
main zinda hi nahen rehi....

by me (A )

[Yaaram]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

acha likha hay :)

[Eqan]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

awww aaniaaa..........bohat zabardast likha hai......:thmbup:

laikin udas ka gia.....

khush rahoo hameesha.......:phool:

[Aania]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

acha likha hay :)

abey parh ke jawab deney kaa.. :lol

[Aania]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

awww aaniaaa..........bohat zabardast likha hai......:thmbup:

laikin udas ka gia.....

khush rahoo hameesha.......:phool:

Eqo... teri to.... ye Aania. ko AAINA kion likhaa ... Banderni... :lol chal koi gal nahen... its ok.... hehe :lol khush reh aur udas karney ke liye nahen likhaa motooo... :lpop:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

Asslama-o-Alikum WR WB

Aania ji :) .... Tahreer achi hay per khi na khi kaami nazr aarhai hay .. aur man wo kami puri nahi kr paa rtha hu :) .. shayd masood parhay to un ko samjh aajay .. well bhot umda aur bhot dil sey likhi hui hy ... per .......:cc:

per...
:cc:

Malsa ya hay kay aap nay kha aap zinda nahi ho ........ per janaab apna Singnature to dekhya na .......... us main to aap zinda hay .. per wo bichara zinda nahi hy lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :khi: :khi: :tauba

Bhot umda :) :lpop: :lpop:

FeamanAllah:phool:

[Aania]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

Asslama-o-Alikum WR WB

Aania ji :) .... Tahreer achi hay per khi na khi kaami nazr aarhai hay .. aur man wo kami puri nahi kr paa rtha hu :) .. shayd masood parhay to un ko samjh aajay .. well bhot umda aur bhot dil sey likhi hui hy ... per .......:cc:

per...
:cc:

Malsa ya hay kay aap nay kha aap zinda nahi ho ........ per janaab apna Singnature to dekhya na .......... us main to aap zinda hay .. per wo bichara zinda nahi hy lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :khi: :khi: :tauba

Bhot umda :) :lpop: :lpop:

FeamanAllah:phool:

wo pehla incomplete lagta tha... is mein to me ko koi prob nahen lagg rahi lets see wot masood says abt it... :cc: :tauba

[Withoutsoul]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....


WORDING BOHT ZABARDAST HAI... LEKIN BIBI ZINDAGI ITNI TALKH BHE NAHI JO HAR BAAR APP KI TEHREERON MAIN INNI TALKHI AUR SAKHTI NAZAR AATI HAI..... KHUSH RAHA KARAIN......

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

kafi intersting hay

[Shaim]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

KAFII shakista dil se likhi hoi tehreer hai.......Nice!

jab halaat se insaan buhat kuch xpect ker le or uski xpectations halaat poori na kar sakin wo phir xpect karin phir yahi haal ho to dil marr hi jata hai or murda dil k sath ager jism zinda ho to kiya farq perta hai insaan to 90% murda hi hota hai

[D@y W@lk3r]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

Bohat Khoob, Mujhay totay hoay Shishay aur dil achay nahi lagtay Dil karta hain kay sab ko doabara jor doon.:khi:

[baykamal]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

Assalaam o alaikum
AUR CHAMAKTI HUI HARR SHAE KO MITAYA TUM NAY
DIL SAY UTH-TAY HUAY SHOLON KI LAPAK BAAQI HAY.
bohat likhti haiN aur khoob likhti haiN pegham ki raunaq kaafi hadd takk inn hi k damm say hai, bohat saari qurbani day k pegham ko sajati haiN.
asaan alfaaz maiN to yai hi kaha jaa sakta hay k alfaaz ka acha chunao hay magar aik shokh shakhsiat say aisi nasr ki tawwaqqo nahi thi.
aur na hi honi chahiyai. ummeed hay k aaienda iss ka khyaal rakha jayai ga.
kuch hasta muskurata sa mazmoon chahiyai hamaiN.
Wasalaam
Raza Baykamal

[Aania]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

WORDING BOHT ZABARDAST HAI... LEKIN BIBI ZINDAGI ITNI TALKH BHE NAHI JO HAR BAAR APP KI TEHREERON MAIN INNI TALKHI AUR SAKHTI NAZAR AATI HAI..... KHUSH RAHA KARAIN......

thnx u sohnyo.... koshish kerti hoon kuch u ki terah happy happy likh sakoon... :cc:

[Withoutsoul]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

thnx u sohnyo.... koshish kerti hoon kuch u ki terah happy happy likh sakoon... :cc:

KOSHISH KEE JAE GEE TO ASAR NAZAR AA JAE GA..... WAITING FOR THAT WAVE OF CHANGE......:tasali:

[Spy009]

Re: main zinda hi nahen rehi....

Ufffff...totey huwe dil ki daastan...Nice words Ania,