Ik Lamha Khyal e zindagi rukhsat hua mujh se....

[Aania]

Ik Lamha Khyal e zindagi rukhsat hua mujh se....aur yun hua ke dil kisi gehri soch mein hai....yaa phir maut ke hosh mein hai...har wadi har aangan kitnaa soona soona sa hai...jesey aankhen band huii hon...Ik aahat kisi khauf ke hisar mein chupi..har simt khamoshiyon ki chadar tani hai...har raah umeed ki kirnon se bekhabar..... Ab zindagi nahen hai...to phir ye kia ehsas hai... ya tum jaa chukey ho...kitab e zindagi band kar ke...ya saanson ka rishta nahen koi khyalon se wabastaa.... ye ajab kasak dil mein hai...koi kami hai...ya kuch aur hona baaqi thaa....zindagi rukhsat honey se pehley..

Ik Lamha Khyal e Zindagi roshan hua hai... har pal dil se ji loon yunhi aawaz aati hai har khuwahish har dharrkan se...bohat kuch sochney samajhney aur ho janey ki tamanna hai...har saans dil se wabasta har khuwab se jurri hai... bohat si khushyan manzilon ki raah takti hein....bohat se khuwab raah-e-manzil pe hein gamzan... koi bhi khauf nahen...bas itnaa...ke tum saath hi chalnaa... in saari khushyon mein...aur in umangon mein...har roz naya josh nayee aarzoo ka aa jana...fitrat hai...kion ke bohat kuch honey ko baqi hai. ....tasalsul rabton mein hai..jo har dil se jurr ke aankhon mein sapney sajatey hein..kahin rabtaa zindagi se..aur kahin...khushyon se...phir chotey chotey khuwabon se.... abhi bohat kuch honey ko baaqi hai.....


by, Me ( A )

[Yaaram]

Re: Ik Lamha Khyal e zindagi rukhsat hua mujh se....

Bohat umdah likha hay Aania :)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Ik Lamha Khyal e zindagi rukhsat hua mujh se....

Assalaam o alekum,


shaabash bahoot umdeh bahoot hi khoob likhaa ania aapnien dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

[Ambreen]

Re: Ik Lamha Khyal e zindagi rukhsat hua mujh se....

bahut khobsorti se khayalat ke mutiyon ko ail lari main piroya hai khoob likhti hain aap Ania

[riyaz]

Re: Ik Lamha Khyal e zindagi rukhsat hua mujh se....

:rose nice composing..
lekin kuch ekhtelaf hai... if u dont mind....:na:
Khusiyan kabhi manzil ki raah nahin takteeN...Khusi bazat-e-khud manzil hoti hai...aur Khawab bhi kabhi raahe manzil pe naheen hote... bcoz khawab ek surab hai aur surab ki koi haqeeqat naheen......
rest.... i am agree...:thmbup:

[Aania]

Re: Ik Lamha Khyal e zindagi rukhsat hua mujh se....

Assalaam o alekum,


shaabash bahoot umdeh bahoot hi khoob likhaa ania aapnien dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

thnx u ji

[Aania]

Re: Ik Lamha Khyal e zindagi rukhsat hua mujh se....

bahut khobsorti se khayalat ke mutiyon ko ail lari main piroya hai khoob likhti hain aap Ania

thnx u ji

[Aania]

Re: Ik Lamha Khyal e zindagi rukhsat hua mujh se....

Bohat umdah likha hay Aania :)

thnx u chanda...

[Aania]

Re: Ik Lamha Khyal e zindagi rukhsat hua mujh se....

:rose nice composing..
lekin kuch ekhtelaf hai... if u dont mind....:na:
Khusiyan kabhi manzil ki raah nahin takteeN...Khusi bazat-e-khud manzil hoti hai...aur Khawab bhi kabhi raahe manzil pe naheen hote... bcoz khawab ek surab hai aur surab ki koi haqeeqat naheen......
rest.... i am agree...:thmbup:

Its ok... and thnx... aap ki baat pe ghor kerti hooon... lets see then wot can I write.. :cc: