Merty Huay Khawbon per raqsaan hawas..!

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

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Bahot khoob janab acha likha hai aap ne

[azeems]

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Bohot Khoob janab

[milestone]

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Assalamualikum ,
acha likha likin ek do jhol hain agar yeh na hotey toh lajawaab hota .

[Pakiza]

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baat bahut achi aur khari ki hia aap ne magar afsoos tu yehi hai ke yehi haqeeqat hai

achi kawish hai apki:)
likhtey rahin

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Merty Huay Khawbon per raqsaan hawas..!

Bahot khoob janab acha likha hai aap ne

thanks bhai :rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

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Bohot Khoob janab

thanks:rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

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Assalamualikum ,
acha likha likin ek do jhol hain agar yeh na hotey toh lajawaab hota .

pasand kernay ka shukriaa ...wo kia ha na kay main mustakil nahi likhta ..bus asay hi jo daikha aor mehsoos kia .wohi qalam ki zuban per aa jata ha :rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Merty Huay Khawbon per raqsaan hawas..!

baat bahut achi aur khari ki hia aap ne magar afsoos tu yehi hai ke yehi haqeeqat hai

achi kawish hai apki:)
likhtey rahin

jee..ham wohi kom ha jo khud hi goliaan bersaatay hain aor bad main phr dil khol ker imdaadi camp bhi lagatay hain
thanks:rose

[*Hala*]

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deer de pa zara pori lekhali de...
khushala osi. :)

[Z.]

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well written ! :thmbup:

[*bEbO*]

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bohat acha likha hay 3 char bar read kia pher theek say samaj ae

[Mahvish Waqas]

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Assalam o alaikum wr wb..

Bohat umdah tahreer likhi hai aap ne..
Khush rahain...

[thefire1]

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Assalaam-O-Alaikum Janab

Socha aap kay nick say aap ko mukhatib karoon magar mujhay apni tehreer main tazaad pasand nahin, jo shaks itni achi soch rakhta hoo, dosroon kay liye itna dard mehsoos karta hoo woh shaks qabil-e-mohabbat, qabil-e-tareef aur qabil-e-tehseen ho sakta hay qabil-e-nafrat nahin!

Bohat hi umda tareeqay say aap nay apnay khuwaboon ko lafzoon ki shakal day kar iss screen per bikhair dia aur itni mushkil aur gehrayi waali baad bohat hi asaan lafzoon main paish kar di, sach kahain tou bohat kutf aaya aap ki tehreer paRh kar aur aisi news sunn kar afsoos karna tou aik mamool ki baat hogayi....

Har din kisi na kisi kay khuwaab tootnay aur pisnay ki baat humari zindagi ka roz marra ka mamool ban gaya hay, balkay ab jab kisi ko khush dekhta hoo yaa khuwab poora hotay huway dekhta hoon tou khushi kay bajayay HAIRAT hoti hay aur baRa hi abnormal lagta hay aisa lagta hay jaisay koi khuwab hi khuwab main hi apnay khuwab poora honnay ki dastaan suna raha hay :)

Chalain iss say pehlay kay mera yeh response paRh kar aap bore hojayain main isay yahin end karta hoon iss umeed kay saath kay aap jald hi aik aur khoobsurat si tehreer hum sab say share karain gain jo kay humaray naqis ilm main izaafa aur humari soch kay mayaar ko bulund karnay main humari madadgaar sabit ho.

Fi Amaan ALLAH meray Qabil-e-mohabbat dost, Khush Rahyeh