Khoaiy Ho Tum Kahaa'n...Love Story

[hayaa_n]

Re: Khoaiy Ho Tum Kahaa'n...Love Story

:lol :lol Gul ji :insha: seekhna hay urdu composing bhi....bouhat kuch seekhna hay bouhat kuch :tauba

Bouhat shukriya kay aap ko yeh tehreer bhi pasand aai.:jazak: :)

[tallica]

Re: Khoaiy Ho Tum Kahaa'n...Love Story

Muy tragico!
K historia! madre mia .
:) Criss

[Desi_Kuri]

Re: Khoaiy Ho Tum Kahaa'n...Love Story

Haya bhai, zaalim ho aap.. maar diya masoom uri ko :(
;'(

[arslan_khan]

Re: Khoaiy Ho Tum Kahaa'n...Love Story

bohat khub ji barre hi achay andaaz hai aap k likhne ka barre acha andaaz se aap nain zindagi k aik hise ko baiyaan kia aap nain kari k liye ahsi tahreer k parrte hoye uss ki dilchaspi barrti jaye khoob hote hai aap nain ahsa he koch racha hai bohat khoob

[sarah_rafeeq2003]

Re: Khoaiy Ho Tum Kahaa'n...Love Story

:rose :rose me abhi new hu abhi ap ki ye story read ki boht roi ap ne Ali ko mara kiyu? end ko acha kardo ap bohat shukria.Ali ko marna nahi tha Haya.ap bohat acha likhti ho kiya seekha he?:phool: :salam:

[Spy009]

Re: Khoaiy Ho Tum Kahaa'n...Love Story

Itna bada kahani dekh kar online padhney ka patience nahin raha, print out lekar itminana se padha.

achha kahani hai,

kahani mein ek do mod bhi hian, jaise Sandara ne Ali ke tasveer writer (Hayaa) ko dikhai, aur ek din Pakistan mein Ali Haya ko milta hai, that's mean ke Ali ki mother ki telephonic information wrong hai.


Main to wahan sach mein true story samajh liya jahan Sandra, Hayaa ko uski kahani likhney ki ilteja karti hai take reality aur Sandra ki tadap Ali ke mother tak jaa pahunchey, lekin last line yeh

(Tamaam kirdaar aur kahaani farzi aur zaihni takhleeq hay)

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Nice story Hayaa

[hayaa_n]

Re: Khoaiy Ho Tum Kahaa'n...Love Story

Itna bada kahani dekh kar online padhney ka patience nahin raha, print out lekar itminana se padha.

achha kahani hai,

kahani mein ek do mod bhi hian, jaise Sandara ne Ali ke tasveer writer (Hayaa) ko dikhai, aur ek din Pakistan mein Ali Haya ko milta hai, that's mean ke Ali ki mother ki telephonic information wrong hai.


Main to wahan sach mein true story samajh liya jahan Sandra, Hayaa ko uski kahani likhney ki ilteja karti hai take reality aur Sandra ki tadap Ali ke mother tak jaa pahunchey, lekin last line yeh

(Tamaam kirdaar aur kahaani farzi aur zaihni takhleeq hay)

padh ker ek lambbbbiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii saans liya


Nice story Hayaa

Spy ji thank you so much k itni long story woh bhi roman urdu main read karnay ki himmat ki aap nay....urdu composing nahi aati warna aap ko itni mushkil na hoti..
Spy ji story main kahin mention nahi hay na kay Zara, Ali say mili thi...Zara ki to mulaqaat hi Sandra say tab hui thi jab Ali is duniya main nahi raha tha....Zara Pakistan nahi gai thi...Ali kay Parents only Pakistan main thay aur Ali hi un k pass gaya tha...Kahani bhi Zara nay suni thi Haya nay nahi.:)

bouhat dil say likhi thi yeh story, meri to khud aankhain bheeg gai theen..mujhay khushi hay k aap ko story pasand aai.:)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Khoaiy Ho Tum Kahaa'n...Love Story

toba hay...............

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: Khoaiy Ho Tum Kahaa'n...Love Story

great.............