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  • #16
    Re: KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

    Originally posted by *Hijab* View Post
    Walekam-Aslam
    bohat he khubsurat likha hia janab
    parh ker bohat acha laga
    story aise he honi chaiyey, jis mein reader khud ko us jagah per mehsoos karay
    kabhi kabhi adhori kahaniyan achi hoti hein:phool:
    meri adna si koshish ko pasand farmaane aur saraahne ka behad shukriya Hijab rose

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    • #17
      Re: KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

      Walikumsalaam apii:rose
      boht khoobsurtii s3 likha hai apn3....:thmbup:
      jisss p3 ap itna trust kart3 hun wo ak pal m3i apka trust tor d3....to k3sa lagta hai y3 to woi jan3 jiss p3 b33t3... :)

      bht achii....

      r3putation add3d

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      • #18
        Re: KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

        Originally posted by shummu View Post
        Salam ahl-e-bazm!

        Pehle afsane ki pazeraayi ke baad himmat ho gayi ek aur afsana likhne ki aam zubaan mein...ummeed hai ye wala bhi pasand aayega...aapki aara ka intizaar rahega...ummeed hai hausla afzaayi farmaayenge..shukriya!:rose


        P.S:main Wasi jee ka shukriya ada karna chahungi jinhone mere afsaane ko urdu mein type kiya hai.

        Wasalam,

        :thankzu::thankzu::thankzu: For Sharing....

        Is Kee Tareef Ab Kaisay Kee Jaye!!!!!

        Meri Zaat Se Sab Lafz Chunn
        Her Lafz Se Ik Nazm Likh
        Her Nazm K Her Lafz Mein
        Her Lafz K Her Harf Mein
        Teri Zaat Ho! Teri Baat Ho!

        Her Lafz Mein Her Harf Mein..
        Tera Shukr Ho! Tareef Ho!
        Tareef Ka Her Lafz bHee
        Teri Zaat Sa Hee Lateef Ho!...........
        Shahsigpic

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        • #19
          Re: KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

          Originally posted by *khushi* View Post
          Walikumsalaam apii:rose
          boht khoobsurtii s3 likha hai apn3....:thmbup:
          jisss p3 ap itna trust kart3 hun wo ak pal m3i apka trust tor d3....to k3sa lagta hai y3 to woi jan3 jiss p3 b33t3... :)

          bht achii....

          r3putation add3d
          thanx a lot dear ...pasand karne ka aur rep. dene ka :phool:

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          • #20
            Re: KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

            Originally posted by Shahdil View Post
            Wasalam,

            :thankzu::thankzu::thankzu: For Sharing....

            Is Kee Tareef Ab Kaisay Kee Jaye!!!!!

            Meri Zaat Se Sab Lafz Chunn
            Her Lafz Se Ik Nazm Likh
            Her Nazm K Her Lafz Mein
            Her Lafz K Her Harf Mein
            Teri Zaat Ho! Teri Baat Ho!

            Her Lafz Mein Her Harf Mein..
            Tera Shukr Ho! Tareef Ho!
            Tareef Ka Her Lafz bHee
            Teri Zaat Sa Hee Lateef Ho!...........
            wah shahdil..kya kehne..bahut umda andaaz hai aapka to tareef karne ka...shukriya tah-e-dil se :rose

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