KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

[shummu]

Salam ahl-e-bazm!

Pehle afsane ki pazeraayi ke baad himmat ho gayi ek aur afsana likhne ki aam zubaan mein...ummeed hai ye wala bhi pasand aayega...aapki aara ka intizaar rahega...ummeed hai hausla afzaayi farmaayenge..shukriya!:rose


P.S:main Wasi jee ka shukriya ada karna chahungi jinhone mere afsaane ko urdu mein type kiya hai.

[shummu]

Re: KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

cont...

[*Rida*]

Re: KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

buht acha likha hai shammu...lakin kuh kami si hai....yeh anjaam kuch adhora dhora mehssos ho raha hai....

[shummu]

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thanx rida for liking my story... han main jaanboojh ke ending aisi hi rakhti hun..kuch readers pe chorhti hun ke woh sochte rahein ke aage kya hua :)

[kutkutariyaan]

Re: KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

Wowwwwwwwwww...

Bohut Acha Likh App nNe :)

Lekin END Pakistani Films Jesa Kerdia :D

Thanx....

Reputation Added :)

[shummu]

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thank u so very much...taareef ke liye bhi aur reputation ke liye bhi..I'm really honoured :salam:

maine to aaj tak koi pakistani film nahi dekhi..han indian filmein dekhti hun hehehe :lpop:

btw aap male hain ya female... sorry mujhe pata nahi hai isliye asking :embarasse

[WASI ANJUM]

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Bahot khoobsurat Afsana likha hai aap ne
mujhe to bahot achha laga end aap ne story k hisaab se sahi likha hai
mujhe to aap ka ye afsana really bahot pasand aaya
likhti rahen
khush Rahen

[shummu]

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:alhamd:

Bahot khoobsurat Afsana likha hai aap ne
mujhe to bahot achha laga end aap ne story k hisaab se sahi likha hai
mujhe to aap ka ye afsana really bahot pasand aaya
likhti rahen
khush Rahen

bahut bahut shukriya wasi jee jo meri adna si koshish aapko pasand aayi...duaa kijiyega ke aayenda aur behtar likh sakoon...:rose


thanx for the reputation:salam:

[kutkutariyaan]

Re: KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

thank u so very much...taareef ke liye bhi aur reputation ke liye bhi..I'm really honoured :salam:

maine to aaj tak koi pakistani film nahi dekhi..han indian filmein dekhti hun hehehe :lpop:

btw aap male hain ya female... sorry mujhe pata nahi hai isliye asking :embarasse

Your Welcome.... Acha Kaam Tha Reputation lena Aap Ka Right tha na :)

Lekin Style To Aap Ka Pakistani Films jesa he tha na....Bohut Jald App Film producer ban jaeen gien.. :) Ager Esse He Likhte Rehien... :):khi:

I am Male (Wese Kio Poocha ??)

[shummu]

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woh mukhatib karne ke liye poocha..socha kahin ghalti na ho jaaye..main apako female samjh rahi thi..achcha hua ab pata chal gaya u r a male :)

[Gul]

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Nice story shummu dear ,
mujhay nahi pata tha aap poetry k sath sath
nasar b achi likh leyti hein ...
nice work..!
Share karti rahiyay ...!:)

[coolbilal]

Re: KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

bout acha afsana likha hai app ne
Bilal

[shummu]

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Nice story shummu dear ,
mujhay nahi pata tha aap poetry k sath sath
nasar b achi likh leyti hein ...
nice work..!
Share karti rahiyay ...!:)

thank u so much Gul sis..aap khud ek achchi writer hain aur aap ki jaanib se daad paa kar bahut khushi hui...:) main nasr ke maidaan pe wasi jee ki badaulat hi aayi hun...unhone hi mujhe encourage kiya tha likhne ke liye...pehla afsana maine yahin ke muqaable ke liye likha tha 'bewafa kaun' shayad apane dekha ho... kaafi pazeraayi mili to uske baad himmat karke ye wali story likhi hai... ummeed hai aayend abhi yuhin hausla afzaayi farmaati rahengi....thanx :rose

[shummu]

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bout acha afsana likha hai app ne
Bilal

bahut shukriya bilal jee.. :salam:

[*Hijab*]

Re: KHOOBSURATI KA PUJAARI (mera naya afsana)

Walekam-Aslam
bohat he khubsurat likha hia janab
parh ker bohat acha laga
story aise he honi chaiyey, jis mein reader khud ko us jagah per mehsoos karay
kabhi kabhi adhori kahaniyan achi hoti hein:phool: