,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

[hayaa_n]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

wah wah wah mazaa aa gaya HAYA jee lolzzzzzzzzzz :lol :lol you know mujhe mazaahiya cheezein paRhna..sunna..dekhna bahut pasand hai..aap ki tehreer uff Allah maze se bharpoor thi..is qadar maine enjoy kiya ke baat nahi sakti..bahut zabardast manzar kashi ki hai aapne ....mazaahiya tehreer likhna mere khayaal se zyaada mushkil hota hai magar aapne itni aasaani se ye kaam kar dikhaaya hai... :thmbup: shuru se le kar aakhir tak kahin boriyat mehsoos nahi hua....aap ne kahin kahin to aise mazedaar alfaaz aur dialogues istimaal kiye hain keh siwaaye hansne ke koi chaara hi nai tha overall bahut hi umda tehreer....bahut bahut mazaa aaya..aisi aur bhi aap ki mazaahiya tehreerin paRhna chaaungi..agar pehle se yahan post hai to link zaroor de dijiyega ......meri jaanib se dheron daad pesh hai is behtareen tehreer pe :rose


Shumaila

:jazak: :) Shumaila ji sach maira dil to chah raha hay kay aap ka ye reply frame kar k laga loo'n :) ..dil itna khush ho gaya k aap nay itni taweel tehreer woh bhi roman urdu main read ki...mujhay bouhat afsos hay k mujhay urdu composing nahi aati warna aap ko itni mehnat to na karna parti...aap ko yeh tehreer achi lagi aur is qadar howsla afza aap nay mujhay reply likha hay k maira dil :masha baagh baagh ho gaya hay.. bouhat khush rahiye..:)

WRITER ZONE main 3 hi kahaaniya'n hain..main sirf Roman Urdu ki wajha say nahi likhti k doosron ko bhi masla hoga aur main bhi apni 2 fingers par itna bhi zulm na kiya karun :lol mujh say typing bas 2 fingers say hoti hay baaqi fingers rest karti rehti hain. :lol

MAZAHIYA ADAB kay column main aik tehreer likhi to thi :lol ho sakta hay aap ko pasand na aaey bas yun hi likh di thi :lol 9 saal ki Girls say 90 saal ki Girls kay liye mashwaray..:lol aap read karna chahein to read kijiye ga...
Aik aur Story KHAIL HI KHAIL MAIN...isi Writer Zone Main Hay..but is kahaani say bilkul mukhtalif hay...:)
Bouhat shukriya Shumaila ji..:)

[shummu]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

:jazak: :) Shumaila ji sach maira dil to chah raha hay kay aap ka ye reply frame kar k laga loo'n :) ..dil itna khush ho gaya k aap nay itni taweel tehreer woh bhi roman urdu main read ki...mujhay bouhat afsos hay k mujhay urdu composing nahi aati warna aap ko itni mehnat to na karna parti...aap ko yeh tehreer achi lagi aur is qadar howsla afza aap nay mujhay reply likha hay k maira dil :masha baagh baagh ho gaya hay.. bouhat khush rahiye..:)

WRITER ZONE main 3 hi kahaaniya'n hain..main sirf Roman Urdu ki wajha say nahi likhti k doosron ko bhi masla hoga aur main bhi apni 2 fingers par itna bhi zulm na kiya karun :lol mujh say typing bas 2 fingers say hoti hay baaqi fingers rest karti rehti hain. :lol

MAZAHIYA ADAB kay column main aik tehreer likhi to thi :lol ho sakta hay aap ko pasand na aaey bas yun hi likh di thi :lol 9 saal ki Girls say 90 saal ki Girls kay liye mashwaray..:lol aap read karna chahein to read kijiye ga...
Aik aur Story KHAIL HI KHAIL MAIN...isi Writer Zone Main Hay..but is kahaani say bilkul mukhtalif hay...:)
Bouhat shukriya Shumaila ji..:)

aap yaqeen nahi karengi magar mujhe ROMAN URDU paRhna chaahe kitna hi taweel kyon na ho bahut hi aasaan lagta hai banisbat URDU SCRIPT ke...main urdu script PC pe jab paRhti hoon to aakhon pe behad zor paRta hai aur slow paRhti hoon jis ki wajah se boriyat hone lagti hai.... isliye mere liye to achcha hai keh aap roman me hi post karti hain ;) :lol

aap ki ye tehreer waqaii bahut achchi hai....sahi mein ek saleeqemand aurat ki pehchaan uska ghar aur rakh rakhaoo dekh ke hoti hai..bahut si ladies khud ko to saji saNwari rehti hain magar ghar ko kabaaR khaana banaaye rehti hai....mujhe qoft hoti hai aisi ladies se jo ghar ko saleeqe se nahi rakhtin :tauba

[hayaa_n]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

aap yaqeen nahi karengi magar mujhe ROMAN URDU paRhna chaahe kitna hi taweel kyon na ho bahut hi aasaan lagta hai banisbat URDU SCRIPT ke...main urdu script PC pe jab paRhti hoon to aakhon pe behad zor paRta hai aur slow paRhti hoon jis ki wajah se boriyat hone lagti hai.... isliye mere liye to achcha hai keh aap roman me hi post karti hain ;) :lol

aap ki ye tehreer waqaii bahut achchi hai....sahi mein ek saleeqemand aurat ki pehchaan uska ghar aur rakh rakhaoo dekh ke hoti hai..bahut si ladies khud ko to saji saNwari rehti hain magar ghar ko kabaaR khaana banaaye rehti hai....mujhe qoft hoti hai aisi ladies se jo ghar ko saleeqe se nahi rakhtin :tauba

Aray waah.. Shumaila ji aap nay to mazeed khush kar diya kay aap ko Roman main read karna easy lagta hay..:thmbup: ji ji yaqeen kar liya hay aur khush bhi hui hun :lol
Ji aap nay bilkul sahi kaha hay isi liye yeh tehreer main nay likhi...aap kay replies mairay liye :masha bouhat howsla afza saabit huway hain..:jazak: :)

[Malang]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

Haya mey ne aap ki likhi hui 3 stories parhi hain har aik me aap ka andaz mukhtalif hey aur zahir karta hey k aap mustaqbil ki aik umda writer sabit hongi.well done keep it up.

[Desi_Kuri]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

may nay bhee read ki hay teeno achee lagi hay stories. Roman may read karnay may difficulty hoi hay

[hayaa_n]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

Haya mey ne aap ki likhi hui 3 stories parhi hain har aik me aap ka andaz mukhtalif hey aur zahir karta hey k aap mustaqbil ki aik umda writer sabit hongi.well done keep it up.

:jazak: :) Malang ji mujhay khushi hui kay aap nay itna waqt diya aur howsla afzaai bhi ki...ji yeh 3no aik doosray say topic kay aitbaar say mukhtalif hain isi liye in ka andaz-e-tehreer bhi aik doosray say alag hay...bouhat bouhat shukriya...:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

may nay bhee read ki hay teeno achee lagi hay stories. Roman may read karnay may difficulty hoi hay

:jazak: :) Kuri ji bouhat shukriya kay aap nay itna time diya..mujhay bouhat khushi hui..maazrat chahti hun k mujhay Urdu composing nahi aati is liye aap ko yeh zehmat hui....koshish karun gi k yeh seekh loon.bouhat shukriya reply ka..:)

[Spy009]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

Hayaa ji Assalam Alaikum



Chudail ko ghaur se dekhney per pata chala ke wo Mr. Sarosh hai

Other quote Ahmed ka Irum se kahna ke Mr. Sarosh tum se age mein badi aur 3 bachhon ki maan ho kar bhi dekho to kitni saji sanwri rahti hai, ek tum ho jo ek bachhey ki maan ho kar phail gayi aur ujri pujri rahti ho,
Yeh to Ahmed ka joke tha, pyar karney wale aisa hi kabhi kabhi bola kartey hain warna ussey bhi pata tha ki uski biwi kitni khubsoorat hai.

Very nice story Hayaa ji:rose :rose

[hayaa_n]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

Hayaa ji Assalam Alaikum



Chudail ko ghaur se dekhney per pata chala ke wo Mr. Sarosh hai

Other quote Ahmed ka Irum se kahna ke Mr. Sarosh tum se age mein badi aur 3 bachhon ki maan ho kar bhi dekho to kitni saji sanwri rahti hai, ek tum ho jo ek bachhey ki maan ho kar phail gayi aur ujri pujri rahti ho,
Yeh to Ahmed ka joke tha, pyar karney wale aisa hi kabhi kabhi bola kartey hain warna ussey bhi pata tha ki uski biwi kitni khubsoorat hai.

Very nice story Hayaa ji:rose :rose

:jazak: :) Spy ji aap ka reply to bazat-e-khud batata hay k aap likhnay ki salahiyat bhi rakhtay hain...kis qadar umda aur bareek beeni say aap nay tajzia kiya hay k dil :masha bouhat ziyada khush ho gaya...mujhay apnay likhay say kahin ziyada replies azeez hain,mujhay khud to pata nahi hota k main nay kiya aur kaisa likha hay? replies read kar k hi pata chalta hay...aap ka yeh reply mairay liye bouhat ehmiyat rakhta hay.bouhat bouhat shukriya Spy ji k is qadar howsla afza reply likha hay..Writer aur Shaira honay ka daawa main kabhi bhi nahi karti hun is liye k bouhat bari zimmay dari as a writer ham par banti hay..hamaray likhay alfaaz kisi ko gumrahi k raastay par bhi lay janay ka sabab ban saktay hain aur bhalaai k rastay par chalanay aur acha sabaq dainay ka sabab bhi ban saktay hain.is liye main itni junior ho kar jab apnay liye writer aur shaira ka word sunti hun to khushi say ziyada aik hairani si aur aik jhitka sa feel karti hun.aehsas-e-zimm-e-daari barh jata hay aur dua karti hun k AIY MAIRAY ALLAH mairay qalam say kabhi koi aisa lafz na likha jaey jo k na munasib ho.Aameen
Spy ji bouhat shukriya:)

[Spy009]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

Finger tips se ghalti ho gayi, dammmmmmmm it

Mrs. Sarosh ki jagah main Mr. Sarosh type kar diya....

error is regretted

[hayaa_n]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

Finger tips se ghalti ho gayi, dammmmmmmm it

Mrs. Sarosh ki jagah main Mr. Sarosh type kar diya....

error is regretted

:lol :lol Spy ji main nay Mr.Sarosh hi read kiya tha..:lol

[Spy009]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

Jee haan meri hi ghalti thi

[hayaa_n]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

Jee haan meri hi ghalti thi

Ghalat likh gai thi ufffffffffffff :tauba mara likha jumla yun read kijiye. :lol

:lol Spy ji main nay Mrs.Sarosh hi read kiya tha. :lol

[Spy009]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

Ab kya karoon, kuchh communications hi nahin hain to Miss, Ms ya Mrs ke baarey mein kam hi sochta hoon, kuchh

[hayaa_n]

Re: ,,Aisa Bhi Houta Hay,,written by,Haya

Ab kya karoon, kuchh communications hi nahin hain to Miss, Ms ya Mrs ke baarey mein kam hi sochta hoon, kuchh

Aap ko umda pics collections + Behtreen collections of songs say fursat milay gi to yeh sochain gay na? :lol