Afsana: Shama

[raafi]

Re: Afsana: Shama

Yeah!!! Awesome. You leave me speechless each time I read your lit, sameera. Your work is so intense and powerful. I feel it inside me...you write it in a way that makes the reader feel it and that is an awesome gift. Thanks for sharing this! I look forward to reading more of your work, much more, hopefully, eh? Say yes;-)

[Rai]

Re: Afsana: Shama

Bohat khoob acha likha ha .bohat acha laga perh ker kafi sad ho gaya ma end per .

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: Afsana: Shama

Yeah!!! Awesome. You leave me speechless each time I read your lit, sameera. Your work is so intense and powerful. I feel it inside me...you write it in a way that makes the reader feel it and that is an awesome gift. Thanks for sharing this! I look forward to reading more of your work, much more, hopefully, eh? Say yes;-)

bohat shukriya raafi ji

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: Afsana: Shama

Bohat khoob acha likha ha .bohat acha laga perh ker kafi sad ho gaya ma end per .

bohat shukrya rai

[Hashim Raza]

Re: Afsana: Shama

bohot khoob sameera
hamesha ki tarha apka piyara andaaz-e-bayaan aur munasib tareen alfaaz
khush rahin sada
keep sharing...

[*Hijab*]

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Walekam-Aslam, oh my goodness, uff..mein kahani mein itna sachi kho gaye thi ke jab reply likhne lagi hoon tou aisa mehsoos ho raha hai ke kise aur duniya mein aa gaye hoon..Sameera..itna khubsurat likha hai aap ne ke bus, seriosuly..bohat he khubsurat..I am unable to give words to my feelings & thoughts..kitni khubsurti say describe kiya hai aap ne sab kuch...bohat umda..lajwab..just fantastic:)
ALLAH(SWT) aap ko hamesha khush rakhey. Ameen!

[Pehli``Barish]

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sadia ji mujhy bohat khushi horhai hai ye jaan kar k
aapko mera afsana psand aaya.. khush rahain :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

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bohot khoob sameera
hamesha ki tarha apka piyara andaaz-e-bayaan aur munasib tareen alfaaz
khush rahin sada
keep sharing...

bohat shukriya... khush rahain:rose

[Z.]

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bohat shukriya jo tum ne itni tawaja say meri tehreer parhi :rose

mera khayal hai k kahani k anjaam say aik our kahani sharoo honi chahiye, agar main chahti to naz our raheel ki dosti or shadi ko tafseel say discuss karti , lakin esa main ne jaan bojh kar nahi kia iski ki vajha say bhi kahani kuch adhori adhori si lagti hai. bahral tumhari raye mery liye bohat mohteram our mashal-e-rah hai..
Q k main sirf net k liye likhti hon, our net per ziyadha taweel na to log parhty hain our na he itna waqt sarf kar sakty hain, is liye bhi main mukhtasir likhti hon. kisi kahani ka phailaao agar barh raha hota hai to usy smait dayti hon our samaitny ki koshish main kabhi kamiyaab hojati hon to kabhi nakaam, agar tumhain lagta hai k main is kahani main nakaam hoi hon to main isko dobara dekhongi
our is bary main our logon ki raye ki muntazir rahongi :rose

nahi sis aap nakaam bilkul bhi nahi huye ho .... bas jo mujhey perhney key baad laga wo mey ney likh diya :d ..... sirf ye tha key iss ka end meyrey nazdeeq bohot calm hua hai :D ..... leykin overall ye bohot acha likha gaya hai :rose


keep them coming

[SADAFASLAM]

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hmmmmm bohat haseen manazir ,alfaz aur aap ki souch
zaberdst
b happy

[Pehli``Barish]

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nahi sis aap nakaam bilkul bhi nahi huye ho .... bas jo mujhey perhney key baad laga wo mey ney likh diya :d ..... sirf ye tha key iss ka end meyrey nazdeeq bohot calm hua hai :D ..... leykin overall ye bohot acha likha gaya hai :rose


keep them coming

hmmm. mujhy to khushi he hoi thi k aap ne itna ghor say parha,
bohat shukriya :ff:

[Pehli``Barish]

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hmmmmm bohat haseen manazir ,alfaz aur aap ki souch
zaberdst
b happy

bohat shukriya sadaf :ff:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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bohat khoob, bohat he ummda

[Pehli``Barish]

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bohat shukriya :ff:

[hasnain]

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mene abhi aadha parha wahan tak bahoot achha afsana tha