~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

[BUS U HE]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

hmm kya baat hai sameera jeee:rosebohut he khoobsurat andaz may likha hai wonderfull:rose
KHUDA APKO HAMAISHA ACHA SOACHNAY ACHA SAMAJHNAY AUR ACHA LIKHNAY KI TOFEEK DAY:rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

bohat shukriya
Allah aapko bhi kamiyabi day sada khush rakhy ameen

[ChaMpioN PaKiStaNi]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

بہہت خوب زبردست:rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

bohat shukriya janab :ff:

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

Bahoot khoob sameera
pehli barish ne pehli barish per bahoot khoobsurat andaz mein likha hai

[*Hala*]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

haa!! buht achi lekhi Sumeara jani .... lekhti rahi .. or khush rahein

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

bohat shukriya hala ji :ff:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

Bahoot khoob sameera
pehli barish ne pehli barish per bahoot khoobsurat andaz mein likha hai

bohat shukriya wasi ji
khush rahain :rose

[withlove]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

..tanhai mein chaman bhi sehra lagtay hein aur mehfil mein sehra bhi gulzar hua kertay hein...

khoob.. yun bazahir eik sada sa afsana kaha ja sakta hai .. magar agar baghor jaiza liya jaye.. to eik baat bohat wazeh hai aur wo hai manazer.. jis khoobsoorat andaz se takhyulaat ki manzir kashi ki gayee hai wo qabil-e-satayesh hai aur yehi eik likhari ki kamyabi hai.. dhairo'n daad-o-mubarakbaad iss kamyabi ki nazr.. Nawazish :rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

bohat shukriya, aap ko meri tehreer psand aai mujhy bohat
khushi hoi , khush rahain