~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

[Pehli``Barish]

:rose Asalam-o-alikum :rose

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

Ye aap ne likha hai???? :donno:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

nahi...... parosiyon say likhvaya hai :hehe:








obviously main ne likha hai isi liye to share kia

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

nahi...... parosiyon say likhvaya hai :hehe:








obviously main ne likha hai isi liye to share kia

Parosiyon matlub ek se zyada parosi shamil hon ge .....................buhat khubsorat likhti hain aap .......... kitni khobsorti se aap ne apni sooch ki duniya ko alfaazon ka amli jaama pehnaya hai......... really a beautiful sharing or buhat hi achi designing :thmbup:........... Khush rahiye :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

itny khubsurat alfaz main hosla afzai ka bohat shurkiya janab
khush rahain :ff:

[Pakiza]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

wow so sweet

bahut khub

U r 2 good Sameera

very well written

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

thanks sweeto
same to u :ff:

[Mind hackeR]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

hmm...!!!
bohut khubsurat likha hai aap ne barish ji...!!!
keep on sharing...!!!
:)

[Life is Alone]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

zaberdasttt sameera...bohat hi khubsuraat alfaaz ke sath likhaa hai...

bohat khubsurat..:) likhtii rhaiye or humre sath share kerti rahiyee..:)

keep writting..:)

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

hmm...!!!
bohut khubsurat likha hai aap ne barish ji...!!!
keep on sharing...!!!
:)

bohat shukriya janab :ff:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

zaberdasttt sameera...bohat hi khubsuraat alfaaz ke sath likhaa hai...

bohat khubsurat..:) likhtii rhaiye or humre sath share kerti rahiyee..:)

keep writting..:)

bohat shukriya lagan
sada khush raho :ff:

[GumShuda]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

ahan bohat hi payara likha hai . Keep writing.

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

:rose Asalam-o-alikum :rose

buhat hi acha likha ha aap nay..pehli baarish..:thmbup:
issi terha likhti rehiyay aor hum say share bhi kerti rehiyay..aor haan
khush bhi rehiyay..:khi:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

ahan bohat hi payara likha hai . Keep writing.

bohat shukriya janab :ff:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Pehli Barish~ (afsana)

buhat hi acha likha ha aap nay..pehli baarish..:thmbup:
issi terha likhti rehiyay aor hum say share bhi kerti rehiyay..aor haan
khush bhi rehiyay..:khi:

bohat shukriya sher ali ji
khush rahiye :ff: