~Main Barish Hon~

[miss sng]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

Walikum Asalam
bohat shukriya siso :ff: mujhy bohat khushi hoi aapko pasand aaya :rose
vesy mera naam sumara nahi sameera hai :hehe: our barish to sab ko psand hoti hai hai na???

:rose
well siso urdu me sumera aur sameera aik jesay he likhy hoty hain na..
barish.....raat say yahan barish ho rhi hay...:blush::blush:

[Pehli``Barish]

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:rose
well siso urdu me sumera aur sameera aik jesay he likhy hoty hain na..
barish.....raat say yahan barish ho rhi hay...:blush::blush:

haan ji isi liye log sameera sumaira aik samjhty hain
barish to aaj yahan bhi horahi hai, dill main aik ajeeb si khushi hoti hai
bypanah mohabat hai mujhy is mosam say :rose

[Life is Alone]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

zaberdasttttt sameera...bohat khubsuraatt likhaa..or bohat hi khubsurat words use kiye hain..reallyy veryyy niceee....:)

keep writtingg....:)

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

aapko mera Afsana pasand aaya mujhy bohat khushi hoi
sada khush rahain :ff:

[wajid hanif]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

wa jee bahut ache hai .......

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

thanks ji

[GumShuda]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

Honestly mashAllah very nice , chun chun kay lafz dalay hain. Keep sharing. kuch jagein aisi hain jahan mazeed improvement ho sakti thi lekin phir bi zabardast hai. Keep it up. Allah apko aur bi acha laiknay ki taqat dain Ameen :D

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

bohat shukriya janab
hum to abhi seekh rahy hain inshallah jald he kuch bahter
likh paain gay :ff:
khush rahain

[GumShuda]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

bohat shukriya janab
hum to abhi seekh rahy hain inshallah jald he kuch bahter
likh paain gay :ff:
khush rahain

you r most welcome
insaan tu sari zindagi hi seekhta rahta hai :D

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

ji bilkul sahe kaha aap ne

[Z.]

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Extra ... :D

bohot payara likhti ho aap

likhti raheiN :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

bohat shukriya sis :ff:
bs aapki duaain chahiyen

[Pakiza]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

wah ji wah
app ki tehreerin parh kar waqai bahut acha laga
app ke alfaz ka istemal aur bahao....tasalsul bahut khubsoorat hai...maza aata hai app ki tehreerin parhney main....zabardas
sada khush rahein ....aur keep writing

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

lagta hai pakiza jaani aaj aap meri sari tehreerain parh logi :hehe:
mujhy bohat khushi horahi hai :ff:
aap bhi khush raho

[Pakiza]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

:khi:
app ki aik tehreer parh kar ruka nahi gaya....app bahut acha likhti hain aur mujh ko parhney ka shoq hai...:)