~Main Barish Hon~

[Pehli``Barish]

Asalam-o-alikum
lijiaye main aik bar phir hazir hon aap logon ko bore karny k liye :hehe:

[BUS U HE]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

bohut zabardast ..kya baat hai:rose.......yakeen nahi ata k yeh aap ne likha hai:eye:

[Mind hackeR]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

hmm...!!!
Pehli Barish aur "Mai Barish Hon" yeh dono aik hi leri k moti hain...!!!
as usual bohut khubsurat afsana...!!!
agarchey me ne yeh afsana pehley bhi perha hua hai tumhara lekin ab jab me ne dobara perha tu iss ka maza pehley se kaheen zada aya...!!!
esey hi likhti raho aur hum se share kerti rahoo...!!! :) :) :)

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

bohut zabardast ..kya baat hai:rose.......yakeen nahi ata k yeh aap ne likha hai:eye:

bohat shukriya janab :ff:
yaqeen to karna he paryga aapko varna .......... :hathora

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

hmm...!!!
Pehli Barish aur "Mai Barish Hon" yeh dono aik hi leri k moti hain...!!!
as usual bohut khubsurat afsana...!!!
agarchey me ne yeh afsana pehley bhi perha hua hai tumhara lekin ab jab me ne dobara perha tu iss ka maza pehley se kaheen zada aya...!!!
esey hi likhti raho aur hum se share kerti rahoo...!!! :) :) :)

bohat shukriya :rose
jald he Afsana_Pehli Barish_ bhi share karongi :ff:

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Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

awww..meri barish..

mai yeh tehreer pehle bhi parh chuki hun....aur mujeh tumhari tamam tehreero mai 'pehli barish' aur 'mai barish hun' bohat zada pasand aye....even mene save bhi kia huwa hay apne pas...mai chahti hun tum barish per kuch aur likho.



no doubt bohat touchy..dil ko cho lene wali teehreer hay....

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

thanks sweeto :ff:

mery pass hain aik do new tehreerain jo u ne nahi parhi INSHALLAH jald share karongi

[miss sng]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

Asalam_O_Alikum,:rose

zabardast....:clap::clap:
bohat acha likha hy app ny:thmbup:
especially words ka jo redham hay na wo mazay ka laga...:lpop::lpop:
wesay ye sumera name ki kuriyan barish per he kyon tehreer likhti hain(agar writter hon too):cc:
keep sharing
khush rahiy:)

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

Walikum Asalam
bohat shukriya siso :ff: mujhy bohat khushi hoi aapko pasand aaya :rose
vesy mera naam sumara nahi sameera hai :hehe: our barish to sab ko psand hoti hai hai na???

[.]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

buhat acha likhti hai aap :thmbup: khooubsurat alfaaz istamal keye hain aap nay :rose

[Yaaram]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

AhaN - Bohat aala likha hay aap ne - Bohat taazgi ka ahsaas hota hay zindagi main aap ka yeh afsana parh ke - Acha likhti hain aap - Keep writing :)

[*Rida*]

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walaikom Assalam.......wah.....buht zabardast...buht khobsorat....isteaaray buht zabrdast hain

mmm....tell me pls.......fakahat ki kia meaning hai ...main nay yeh word pehli martaba perha hai.....

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

buhat acha likhti hai aap :thmbup: khooubsurat alfaaz istamal keye hain aap nay :rose

bohat shukriya aanchal ji khush rahain :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

AhaN - Bohat aala likha hay aap ne - Bohat taazgi ka ahsaas hota hay zindagi main aap ka yeh afsana parh ke - Acha likhti hain aap - Keep writing :)

bohat shukriya janab
khush rahiye :ff:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Main Barish Hon~

walaikom Assalam.......wah.....buht zabardast...buht khobsorat....isteaaray buht zabrdast hain

mmm....tell me pls.......fakahat ki kia meaning hai ...main nay yeh word pehli martaba perha hai.....

aapko mera afsana psand aaya mujhy bohat khushi hoi :)
ji line hai "main shokhi hon main fakahat hon" ye fakahat asal main
fakahiya say lia hai, fakahiya say murad sanjeeda baat mizah main likhna,
i hope samjh main aagaya hoga nahi to dobara our achi terha say smajha dongi :ff:


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