~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

[bakhtawer]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh hhh
bohat khob....keep it up!!!!


Dost wo hy jo dil k dard ko jaan lay..
chal rahay hon hm teez barish ma ..
phir bhi aanso ko pahchan lay.......!!

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

thanka alot dear :ff:

[Masood]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

Pehli baar aap ki tehreer parhi hai, bohat pasand aai. Alfaz ka istimaal, soch ki rawangi, tarakeeb ka istimaal bohat khoobsurat hai. Kuchh alfaz to aisey hain jin sey merey zakheerey mein izafa huwa hai - bohat shukriyah itni achhi tehreer share karney per :)

[Gul]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

Buhat khoob :) .....afsana hee sahi magar acha laga! kion k kafi halka phulkha sa tha iss liyay mizaj b halka phulkha raha ...achay andaz mein aap nay ek msbat kahani likhi ....Jiss se zehan kafi fresh ho giya....Thanx for sharing ur stuff.....and plz share karti rahiyay ..!
Khush rahiyay ..:)

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

Pehli baar aap ki tehreer parhi hai, bohat pasand aai. Alfaz ka istimaal, soch ki rawangi, tarakeeb ka istimaal bohat khoobsurat hai. Kuchh alfaz to aisey hain jin sey merey zakheerey mein izafa huwa hai - bohat shukriyah itni achhi tehreer share karney per :)

bohat shukriya masood aapka
sada khush rahin :ff:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

Buhat khoob :) .....afsana hee sahi magar acha laga! kion k kafi halka phulkha sa tha iss liyay mizaj b halka phulkha raha ...achay andaz mein aap nay ek msbat kahani likhi ....Jiss se zehan kafi fresh ho giya....Thanx for sharing ur stuff.....and plz share karti rahiyay ..!
Khush rahiyay ..:)

bohat shukriya sweet gul :ff:
aap ko mera afsana pasnad aaya mujhy bohat khushi hoi
sada khush rahain :rose

[*Rida*]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

Walaikom Assalam
buht acha likha hai....mazedar....:em:
andaaz bhi buht pasand aaaya.....:thmbup:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

walikum asalam
bohat shukriya rida ji :ff:

[Z.]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

aik halki phulki aur mazzey ki tehreer ....

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

bohat shukriya :ff:

[tabish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

wah wah bus itna kahoon ga lajawab hai
bohat hi acha likhte ho
itna acha hai k ab hum b brish main beheg gay
nice

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

bohat shukriya
arry janab agar aap really barish main bhegna chahty hain
to isi page per "main barish hon" zaror parhiyega :)

[Life is Alone]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

zaberdasttt sumaira..bohat maza ya perh ker...bohat acha likha hai ap nee...:)

keep sharinggg.:)

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

thanks sis :ff:

[Pakiza]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

bahut khubsoorat
waqai maza aaya parh kar

thanku so much for sharing