~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

[Pehli``Barish]

Asalam-o-alikum
main pehli dafa aap logon say apni koi tehreer share kar rahi hon
agar psand na aaye to pehly say mazraat :ff:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

[La'hasil]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

Lol Sapphire Baqia ka Intezar rahay ga

[Mind hackeR]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

hmm...
sapphire ji wah kiya khub likha hai aap ne...
aap k andaaz mai kaffi zayada pukhtagi hai...
abhi yeh pura tu nai hua lekin jitna bhi aap ne share kiya hai woh perh ker bhi kafi enjoy kiya aur baqi ta intizaar hai...
jaldi jaldi likhiye aur share kijiye... :)

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

Lol Sapphire Baqia ka Intezar rahay ga

ji baqaia bhi share kar lia hai :rose

[Mind hackeR]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

hmm...
wah ji wah...
kiya baat hai janab...
bohut khubsurt tehreeer hai aap ki aur jis khubsurti se aap ne iss mai mazah takhleeq kiya hai yeh aap hi ka khassa hai...
agarchey yeh aik choti si baat lagti hai lekin aap ne jiss terah sarey scenes ki manzar kashi ki hai aur jesey barjistah chotey chotey jumley takhleeq kiye hain iss se pata chalta hai k aap kis qadar gehri nigah rakhti hain aur muashrey mai honey wali kisi bhi tabdeeli ko kis qadar wasee nazar se dekhti hain...
aam tor per likhari hazraat mazah likhney se katratey hain bcz mazah likhna koi khala ji ka gher tu hai nai lekin aap ne yeh sabit kiya hia k mazah ho ya koi aliya aap uss ko bakhubi apney qalam ki nok se satah-e-qirtaas per muntaqil kerney ki salahiyat rakhti hain...
MASHA ALLAH...!!!
esey hi likhti rahen aur share kerti rahen...
khush rahen... :)

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Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

haye..mai perhne se pehle bata dun...k mai janti hun tum bohat behtreen writer ho..tumhara likha huwa mujeh hamesha pasand aya hay aur ata rahe ga...tumhe bara kamal hay is fan mai bhi..wese tum ho herfan mola :)

mai zaror parhungi....lekin abhi nahi...araam aur sukoon se raat mai ...aur phir aker reply dungi..

[Pehli``Barish]

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hmm...
sapphire ji wah kiya khub likha hai aap ne...
aap k andaaz mai kaffi zayada pukhtagi hai...
abhi yeh pura tu nai hua lekin jitna bhi aap ne share kiya hai woh perh ker bhi kafi enjoy kiya aur baqi ta intizaar hai...
jaldi jaldi likhiye aur share kijiye... :)

hmm...
wah ji wah...
kiya baat hai janab...
bohut khubsurt tehreeer hai aap ki aur jis khubsurti se aap ne iss mai mazah takhleeq kiya hai yeh aap hi ka khassa hai...
agarchey yeh aik choti si baat lagti hai lekin aap ne jiss terah sarey scenes ki manzar kashi ki hai aur jesey barjistah chotey chotey jumley takhleeq kiye hain iss se pata chalta hai k aap kis qadar gehri nigah rakhti hain aur muashrey mai honey wali kisi bhi tabdeeli ko kis qadar wasee nazar se dekhti hain...
aam tor per likhari hazraat mazah likhney se katratey hain bcz mazah likhna koi khala ji ka gher tu hai nai lekin aap ne yeh sabit kiya hia k mazah ho ya koi aliya aap uss ko bakhubi apney qalam ki nok se satah-e-qirtaas per muntaqil kerney ki salahiyat rakhti hain...
MASHA ALLAH...!!!
esey hi likhti rahen aur share kerti rahen...
khush rahen... :)

hosla afzai k liye bohat shukriya :ff:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

Lol Sapphire Baqia ka Intezar rahay ga

baqi bhi hazir hai janab

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

haye..mai perhne se pehle bata dun...k mai janti hun tum bohat behtreen writer ho..tumhara likha huwa mujeh hamesha pasand aya hay aur ata rahe ga...tumhe bara kamal hay is fan mai bhi..wese tum ho herfan mola :)

mai zaror parhungi....lekin abhi nahi...araam aur sukoon se raat mai ...aur phir aker reply dungi..

:khi: my dear friend aap ne jo meri tehreerain parhi hain ye un say
bilkul he alag hai.....main ne socha thora apny style say hat kar likha jaye.. deskhty hain kesa responce milta hai......
bohat jald main aik our afsana share karongi
yehe subrang digest main jan main publish ho rahi hai
socha k pegham k sathoyon k sath share kar lon :ff:

[miss sng]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

Asalam-o-Alikum,

:thmbup:
really bohat maza aya app ka afsana parh kar....:lpop:
bohat acha + mazy ka likha hy app ny
ye jo urdu punjabi ki mixing hy...i like it :lpop:
and
thnx for sharing :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

walikum asalam :rose
aapko mera afsaana pasand aaya mujhy bohat khushi hoi
hosla afzai ka bohat shukriya khush rahain :ff:

[BUS U HE]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

nice bohut maza aya reallykeep sharing:phool:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Tery sary rang ajeeb hain~

thanks alot :ff: