--------Dulhan-----

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB



shaminyo ki gunjh mery kano say guzar kar rahi hy ........ aj wo sapna jis ko aksar

raat kay karwato main dekha karti thi .....us ki haqeeqat saaf nazar arhi hy....sakhiyo ky hatho

sajna sawarna acha lag rha hy .....jo nakbat ,jo jor zindagee ny dekhy thy aj un ko suljhny ky

liya kisi ny mery sath qadam barhnay ka ahad karna hy....yahi dhun her lamhy mery dil ky gosho

main janam lyti ja rahi hy .....surkh poshak , jhumkay , bindiya aur ya payal .........mery tan ko

ajj apni zaroort samjh rahy hy .....hatho ki hina is baat ki gawahi dey rahi hy ky aaj mery khubo

ko haqeeqat ka rang mil rha hy , her taraf ghama ghami is baat ki gawahi dey rahi hy kay janat

aaj mery der per dastak dey ny ko baykraar hy , her taraf halacahl machi hui hy her taraf sey

geet aaj mery liya apnay alfazo ka haq ada kr rhy hy .....



pr haal sey pahly aik mazi bhi hy ........wo mazi jis ko roposh nhi kya jasakta hy ,wo mazi jis

ny mery zindagee ko aik arsay tak muntashir kr rakha hy.....wo ghum jo lail-o-nhar mery dil main

aik kanty ki maninind chubta rha us say bhi ankh macholi nhi khili jati....phuser phuser rony ki awaz

bhi in shamino main asar rakhti nazr ati hy .....ya bhi aik sacahi hay jis ko nazar anadz krna mery

liya mumkin hi nhi ....yahi haal , ya geet , yahi poshak yahi log aaj sey pahly bhi meri hi zindagee

ka hisa thy ........yahi khushya barso pahly bhi mery hi anagan main nechawar hui thi .....isi trha in

hatho ko hina ny chuma tha , isi trha kangan ny meri kaliyo ko apni zeenat banaya tha aur isi poshak

ny mery jism ko chuna tha ..........kya ya phir sey mazi ki aahat hy ya meri manzil ki shurat....?



Nahi!....ya buri aahat nhi hy .......ya to meri zindagee ka aj naik shughan hy , ya kangan,payal , jhumkay

aaj ya sab mery saath hy , aaj hina ka rang kacha nhi hy .... ya mazi ki dastak nhi haal ka sangeet hy , zindagee

ki aaj pahli serhi mey ny kisi ky hatho ko tham kar charhni hy .....mery Maa ki ankho main ya ansoo dukh ky nhi

khushi ka paygham liya bathy hy , bhano ka payra aj mujh per nichawar ho ga , sakhiyo ky geet aaj mery liya

hi alfazo ka phool jhaar rhy hy ........Haan! ya zindagee ki shurat hy , jina ki ahat hy aur mahfooz hatho ki talab hy.

Ajj ky baat her geet , her khushi , her aik ki dua mery qadmo ko chumay gi .......aaj main kisi ki izzat aur kisi ki

chaat banu gi ..........ya sach hay pagli! ajj main sirf usi ki umar bhar ky liya Dulhan ban jaw gi ....Sirf uski zindagee

ki Dulhan.



FeamanAllah

[muskaan]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

bheegi palkain :) welcome :)

bauhat hi achi tehreer likhi hai aap nahi khushi kai halkai sai darr kai rangoon mein saji hui :)

khush rahiiyai aur likhti rahiyai :)

[Ambreen]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

hmmm har dulhan ke ehsasat kitne miltey hain....bahut acha likha aap ne:)

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

bheegi palkain :) welcome :)

bauhat hi achi tehreer likhi hai aap nahi khushi kai halkai sai darr kai rangoon mein saji hui :)

khush rahiiyai aur likhti rahiyai :)

Assalm-o-Alikum WR WB

Shukrya

FeamanAllah

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

hmmm har dulhan ke ehsasat kitne miltey hain....bahut acha likha aap ne:)

Asslam-o-ALikum WR WB

Shukrya

FeamanAllah

[SaPpHiRe]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

eeey mashaallah.,akhir har ladki ka khawaab hai yeh jo aap ne itne pyare lafzoun mei is shair mei likha......it was nice......... har ladki ka armaan har ladki ki zaroorat .... akhir hum ladkioun ki life mei zindegi eik neye mor leti hai,.....neya ghar neye rishte ney adatein....ney mulaqatein.....neya muashra ney family.......sub kuch hi aisa jaise neye bedaish hui ho.......it was nice......liked it very much

[Mehak]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

Ajj ky baat her geet , her khushi , her aik ki dua mery qadmo ko chumay gi .......aaj main kisi ki izzat aur kisi ki

chaat banu gi ..........ya sach hay pagli! ajj main sirf usi ki umar bhar ky liya Dulhan ban jaw gi ....Sirf uski zindagee

ki Dulhan.

Bheegi palkain bohat hi khoobsurat tehreer likhi hai...... and itney pyare lafzon mein likhi hai.. Very NiCe :rose

[Z.]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

good one :thmbup:

[aik_lerki]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

bOhat he Zabaredast bheegi palkain:rose
bhaot acha likha hai aap nay..:)

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

bOhat he Zabaredast bheegi palkain:rose
bhaot acha likha hai aap nay..:)

Assalam-o-Alikum wrw b

thx
femanAllah

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

Bheegi palkain bohat hi khoobsurat tehreer likhi hai...... and itney pyare lafzon mein likhi hai.. Very NiCe :rose

Asslam-o-Alikumw rw b

thx

FeaamnAllah

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

eeey mashaallah.,akhir har ladki ka khawaab hai yeh jo aap ne itne pyare lafzoun mei is shair mei likha......it was nice......... har ladki ka armaan har ladki ki zaroorat .... akhir hum ladkioun ki life mei zindegi eik neye mor leti hai,.....neya ghar neye rishte ney adatein....ney mulaqatein.....neya muashra ney family.......sub kuch hi aisa jaise neye bedaish hui ho.......it was nice......liked it very much

Asslam-o-Alikum wrw b

itni tareef ka haqdar nhi , bhot izat bakhs di ,, thx

FeaamnAllah

[WOH LARKI]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

pr haal sey pahly aik mazi bhi hy ........wo mazi jis ko roposh nhi kya jasakta hy ,wo mazi jis

ny mery zindagee ko aik arsay tak muntashir kr rakha hy.....wo ghum jo lail-o-nhar mery dil main

aik kanty ki maninind chubta rha us say bhi ankh macholi nhi khili jati....phuser phuser rony ki awaz

bhi in shamino main asar rakhti nazr ati hy .....ya bhi aik sacahi hay jis ko nazar anadz krna mery

liya mumkin hi nhi ....yahi haal , ya geet , yahi poshak yahi log aaj sey pahly bhi meri hi zindagee

ka hisa thy ........yahi khushya barso pahly bhi mery hi anagan main nechawar hui thi .....isi trha in

hatho ko hina ny chuma tha , isi trha kangan ny meri kaliyo ko apni zeenat banaya tha aur isi poshak

ny mery jism ko chuna tha ..........kya ya phir sey mazi ki aahat hy ya meri manzil ki shurat....?



Nahi!....ya buri aahat nhi hy .......ya to meri zindagee ka aj naik shughan hy , ya kangan,payal , jhumkay

aaj ya sab mery saath hy , aaj hina ka rang kacha nhi hy .... ya mazi ki dastak nhi haal ka sangeet hy , zindagee

BP aap ki sari thareer ki trah yeh bhi nihayet hi achi hey, mugar iss tehreer ne mujhey thora sa uljha diya hey, aap ne mazi ka thorra sa ziker kiya hey aur phir haal mein pohnch gaye hein, mujhey yeh kahani kuch adhoori see ya shayed kuch chupaati hui see lagi...........meray khyal se mazi mein jo kuch hua uss ki aik zarasee jhalak zaroor honi chahiye thi.

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

pr haal sey pahly aik mazi bhi hy ........wo mazi jis ko roposh nhi kya jasakta hy ,wo mazi jis

ny mery zindagee ko aik arsay tak muntashir kr rakha hy.....wo ghum jo lail-o-nhar mery dil main

aik kanty ki maninind chubta rha us say bhi ankh macholi nhi khili jati....phuser phuser rony ki awaz

bhi in shamino main asar rakhti nazr ati hy .....ya bhi aik sacahi hay jis ko nazar anadz krna mery

liya mumkin hi nhi ....yahi haal , ya geet , yahi poshak yahi log aaj sey pahly bhi meri hi zindagee

ka hisa thy ........yahi khushya barso pahly bhi mery hi anagan main nechawar hui thi .....isi trha in

hatho ko hina ny chuma tha , isi trha kangan ny meri kaliyo ko apni zeenat banaya tha aur isi poshak

ny mery jism ko chuna tha ..........kya ya phir sey mazi ki aahat hy ya meri manzil ki shurat....?



Nahi!....ya buri aahat nhi hy .......ya to meri zindagee ka aj naik shughan hy , ya kangan,payal , jhumkay

aaj ya sab mery saath hy , aaj hina ka rang kacha nhi hy .... ya mazi ki dastak nhi haal ka sangeet hy , zindagee

BP aap ki sari thareer ki trah yeh bhi nihayet hi achi hey, mugar iss tehreer ne mujhey thora sa uljha diya hey, aap ne mazi ka thorra sa ziker kiya hey aur phir haal mein pohnch gaye hein, mujhey yeh kahani kuch adhoori see ya shayed kuch chupaati hui see lagi...........meray khyal se mazi mein jo kuch hua uss ki aik zarasee jhalak zaroor honi chahiye thi.

Asslam-o_Alikum WR WB

aap ny sahi kha ! pata nhi is ko likhty hui ...... main likh nhi payi . mujhy pata hy is main bhot kuch kami hy .... per is ko mhaz is liya post ki . ky alfazo ka aika pna roop hy .. per dil ko is main sey kuch lag jay to wo ahmiyat rakhat hy .....

FeaamNAllah

[Shaim]

Re: --------Dulhan-----

Nice:)

kia dulhaa ke ehsaasat bhi aise hote hain???
kia wo bhi apni tamam umer sirrf iik hi lerki ke naam kerna chahta hai hamesha ke liye?:)