Insaan

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Insaan

Chalo muaf kiya

[aquari]

Re: Insaan

Hosla hi sab kuch hota hai.Insaan kay hoslay kay agay sab haich hai.:phool:

nahi dear main thora sa ikhtelaf karoogi yahan app sey....hosla hona bhi kabhi kabhi humain manzil tak nahi poohncha pata....khiar apni apni zindagi ka tajurba haii...:)

sada khush rahoo ..:phool:

[zapk]

Re: Insaan

nahi dear main thora sa ikhtelaf karoogi yahan app sey....hosla hona bhi kabhi kabhi humain manzil tak nahi poohncha pata....khiar apni apni zindagi ka tajurba haii...:)

sada khush rahoo ..:phool:

Yeh aapki nai takhleeq kay liyay acha plot ban sakta hai.:thmbup:

[aquari]

Re: Insaan

Yeh aapki nai takhleeq kay liyay acha plot ban sakta hai.:thmbup:

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thek pehchana tum ney..:insha: ..bauht jald isi topic pr meri tehrreer parhoo gi tum

[zapk]

Re: Insaan

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thek pehchana tum ney..:insha: ..bauht jald isi topic pr meri tehrreer parhoo gi tum

hmm.......I will wait.:rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Insaan

boht khoobsoorat tehreer hay Almaas :thmbup:

aur jahan tak Khalil bhai ki baat k writer doosroon ki tehreeroon ko raddo badal k saath paysh kar dayty hien to mujhy is baat say ikhtilaaf hay...
is duniyaan mien jitnay loog hien sab ki apni kahani hay......is duniya mien jitnay loog hien un say kahin zayaada kahaaniyaan hien.....kahaaniyaan wohi rehti hien chehray badal jaatay hien......moozoo wohi hotay hien likhnay waalay badal jaatay hien.....har koi apni sooch, observation aur experience ko kissi na kissi abdaaz say share karta hay.......aur hamari yeh sooch boht say loogoon say milti hay......jaysay k hum koi tehreer parhtay hien to hayrat hooti hay k yeh to hoo bahoo wohi baat hay jo hum sooch rahay thay...ya kabhi koi kahaani parhty hien to lagta hay k likhnay waalay nay thooray raddo badal say hamari hi kahani likhi hay.......
har tehreer ka apna asar hota hay........apki baatv saheh k koi hal paysh karna chahiay....magar i believe k jab kissi k saamnay ussi ka masla byaan kiya jaay to phir woh khud bhi is qabil ho jata hay k koi hal dhoond sakay......kuchh loog hal paysh karty hien to kuchh loog aaina dikhaatay hien......aaina daykho ,khud ko judge karo...aur phir khud hee faysla karo k mujhay khud ko kahan aur kaysay badalna hay...:)
Deal Karnegy ko parha hay mien nay....aur apki baat say itfaaq karti hoon...magar yaad rakhiay ..har banda asar qabool nhi karta hay:tauba ...jaysay k mien hoon:khi:

Dear sumera main khudh bee ik writer hun aur main ny kabi apni writing share nai kee os kee yeh waja hay k os kee koi khas quality hee nahi kiun k main kuch anokha likhna chahta tha main nahi likh saka pata nahi kiun shaid muj main wo Asthetic sense nahi hay jo huna chayee ya pher muj main himmat nahi hay k main apny aap ko aik bari personality k toor per oper ly ker aon...khair aap ny likha k jo Khalil ny kaha hay k writer kisi na kisi aur writer kee tehreer likhty hian yeh ghalt hay
chaloo maan lia k yeh ghalt hay ...lakin ap ko shaid yeh pata nahi k ground reallity yehi hay aur ya pher aap ko Letrature k bary main pata nahi...

siraf mujy aap aik baat batain jitny bee writer ko Nobel Prize mil hian wo kiun mily hian? yeh kuch novels hian

1. waitng for godot.
2. to the light house
3. Heart of darkness.
4. Othelo

some thing like that.
main bataata hun k wo kiun mily hian es liy k wo aik new creation thee aik new annovation kisi bee tehreer ya pher kisi kee writer ka copy nahi thee aik alag kee dunia batai hay ony ny.....aur hamary jitny bee writer hain kia en ko koi bee prize mila hay aur ager mila hy to kuch khas tha onn main..
Balky main to yehan yehi kahonga k kuch alag kuch anokha likhy wo likhy k Jo wakee Takdeer e Yazda ban jay....
ALLAH hafiz:tauba

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Insaan

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thek pehchana tum ney..:insha: ..bauht jald isi topic pr meri tehrreer parhoo gi tum

tum nahi aap..........:rose meri sister hain.

[aquari]

Re: Insaan

tum nahi aap..........:rose meri sister hain.

sorry....:(

[zapk]

Re: Insaan

Dear sumera main khudh bee ik writer hun aur main ny kabi apni writing share nai kee os kee yeh waja hay k os kee koi khas quality hee nahi kiun k main kuch anokha likhna chahta tha main nahi likh saka pata nahi kiun shaid muj main wo Asthetic sense nahi hay jo huna chayee ya pher muj main himmat nahi hay k main apny aap ko aik bari personality k toor per oper ly ker aon...khair aap ny likha k jo Khalil ny kaha hay k writer kisi na kisi aur writer kee tehreer likhty hian yeh ghalt hay
chaloo maan lia k yeh ghalt hay ...lakin ap ko shaid yeh pata nahi k ground reallity yehi hay aur ya pher aap ko Letrature k bary main pata nahi...

siraf mujy aap aik baat batain jitny bee writer ko Nobel Prize mil hian wo kiun mily hian? yeh kuch novels hian

1. waitng for godot.
2. to the light house
3. Heart of darkness.
4. Othelo

some thing like that.
main bataata hun k wo kiun mily hian es liy k wo aik new creation thee aik new annovation kisi bee tehreer ya pher kisi kee writer ka copy nahi thee aik alag kee dunia batai hay ony ny.....aur hamary jitny bee writer hain kia en ko koi bee prize mila hay aur ager mila hy to kuch khas tha onn main..
Balky main to yehan yehi kahonga k kuch alag kuch anokha likhy wo likhy k Jo wakee Takdeer e Yazda ban jay....
ALLAH hafiz:tauba

Daikho mairay bhai,himaat karo,zaroori nahin hai kay pahlay pahal koi bohat acha likh paye,laikin pegham jaisay forum isi liyay hotay hain kay naye writers ko islah ka mouqa milay.Main bhi aaj tak isi liyay kuch khas nahin likh paai,laikin yahan main nay aik do tahreerain paish ki hain,to mujhay lagta hai kay mairi nigarish main rawani aa hi jaye gi.
Tumhara point of view darust hai.Maira muta'ala kuch khas nahin hai laikin hamaray kuch writers nay bohat acha likha hai.Tum jo kuch alag karnay kay khuahishmand ho,agar himmat karo to aik din aisi tahreer takhleeq kar saktay ho.Main yehi kahoon gi:
شکوہﹺظلمتﹺشب سے تو کہیں بہتر تھا
اپنے حصے کی ہی ہم شمعیں جلاتے جاتے۔
Apnay hissay ki shama'a jalao mairay bhai ho sakta hai isi say charaghan ho jaye.

[zapk]

Re: Insaan

tum nahi aap..........:rose meri sister hain.

Cool down dear!:tasali: formalities main parnay say betakulifi nahin hogi aur mahoul friendly nahin ho sakay ga.:phool:

[zapk]

Re: Insaan

sorry....:(

Never mind dear! Pegham kay saathion main betakulifi per sorry ki zaroorat nahin.:phool:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Insaan

sorry....:(

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oho plz naraz na huna ...:rose :rose :rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Insaan

Daikho mairay bhai,himaat karo,zaroori nahin hai kay pahlay pahal koi bohat acha likh paye,laikin pegham jaisay forum isi liyay hotay hain kay naye writers ko islah ka mouqa milay.Main bhi aaj tak isi liyay kuch khas nahin likh paai,laikin yahan main nay aik do tahreerain paish ki hain,to mujhay lagta hai kay mairi nigarish main rawani aa hi jaye gi.
Tumhara point of view darust hai.Maira muta'ala kuch khas nahin hai laikin hamaray kuch writers nay bohat acha likha hai.Tum jo kuch alag karnay kay khuahishmand ho,agar himmat karo to aik din aisi tahreer takhleeq kar saktay ho.Main yehi kahoon gi:
شکوہﹺظلمتﹺشب سے تو کہیں بہتر تھا
اپنے حصے کی ہی ہم شمعیں جلاتے جاتے۔
Apnay hissay ki shama'a jalao mairay bhai ho sakta hai isi say charaghan ho jaye.

:rose :rose :rose :thmbup: :thmbup: Thanks Baji inshaALLAH aisa hee huga jaisay ap chaheen gee take care:alhamd: :jazak:

[aquari]

Re: Insaan

Never mind dear! Pegham kay saathion main betakulifi per sorry ki zaroorat nahin.:phool:

ha isi liya tum keh gai thii app ko.....:blush:

[aquari]

Re: Insaan

:phool: :phool: :phool: :phool: :phool: :phool: :phool:
oho plz naraz na huna ...:rose :rose :rose

nahi nahi..main baroo ki nasihatoo ka bura nahi mantii :)