Insaan

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Insaan

exactly baat thek kahi app ney writers apni tankeed per khush hotey hain
rahi baat k koi aisa hoo jo hal batadain
ek choti si baat shayed mera khayal ghalat hi hoo is barey main k hal tu apni samjh k hisab sey nikala jasakta haii koi bhi writer zaa'ti ya society k masloo ka hal nikal ker likh sakta haii...pr kya us hal pr koi amal karey gaa....kaisey kersaktey haii jub k problem bataney wala kitni bhi koshish ker lain apni zindagi ki poori kitab nahi likh saktaa or jo solution bataye gaa woh sirf us cheez kabataye gaa jo ba'zahir nazr arahi hai..us k background k barey main woh sirf utna hi janta hogaa jitney arsey sey us neyy in sub cheezoo ko observe kerna start kya hoga..or ok thek hai writer hal bata bhi dey pr ager woh humari mansha k mutabiq na howa tu hum justify nahi karain gey k nahi aisa nahi haii...sath main yeh bhi tu masla haii ..kunk her cheez ek chain main juri hoti haii
humarey ird gird kitney hi loog hotey hian even humarey apney behn bhai bhii apni probs humarey pas latey hian hum sub jantey hain pr phr bhi humara dia howa hal woh exactly nahi mantey ..kabhi mana ..tukabhi kaha k nahi app baat ko smajh nahi raheyy ..
hal likh dena tu shayed asaan hoo..pr jis k liya likhaa jaye kya woh poori tu'r per ussey qabool karey gaa ?

mainey khud abhi recently apni soochoo ko qalm ka perh'n diya hai kuch dil ki baatain likhi hai or main khud bhi ager apni zaat k barey main baat karoo or is waqt mujhey koi kahye k tumhari yeh sooch ghalat hai ya kuch bhi tu main tehreer k hawaley sey tu tanqeed ko ba'khushi qabool karoogi pr ager woh merey masla ka hal merey mutabiq nahi dey ga ya meri sooch ko galat kahye ga tu main 10 jawazoo sey ussey qail kerney ki koshish zaroor karoogi
writer i think sirf masla ki taraf nishnadhi kersakta haii ..hal dey bhi dain phr bhi masla wahi rahey gain

ap kee batian achi hian janab thanks for sharing...................

writer kee soch aam logon sy zra hatt kre huti hay....main khudh hee likh sakta haun aur os ka hall bee paish ker sakta hun aur mujy yakeen hay k loag os per ammal bee kariangee.....
aur main yeh kehna chahta hun k jaisy writer ko apni tehreer per etna yakeen huta hy k loag osy parr ker sehraayngy es tarah osy yeh bee yakeen huna chayee k loag os kee baton per amal bee kariangy
aur i hope key aisa hee huga...........

aur main ny abi tak aik writer dekha hay
wo hy Deal Karnegy......

wo buhat acha writer aur danishwar hay loag os kee baton per amal karty hian jin main aik main khudh hun:SubhanAllhaa:

[aquari]

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ap kee batian achi hian janab thanks for sharing...................

writer kee soch aam logon sy zra hatt kre huti hay....main khudh hee likh sakta haun aur os ka hall bee paish ker sakta hun aur mujy yakeen hay k loag os per ammal bee kariangee.....
aur main yeh kehna chahta hun k jaisy writer ko apni tehreer per etna yakeen huta hy k loag osy parr ker sehraayngy es tarah osy yeh bee yakeen huna chayee k loag os kee baton per amal bee kariangy
aur i hope key aisa hee huga...........

aur main ny abi tak aik writer dekha hay
wo hy Deal Karnegy......

wo buhat acha writer aur danishwar hay loag os kee baton per amal karty hian jin main aik main khudh hun:SubhanAllhaa:

hmm main in writer k barey main janti nahi..pr ager loog aml kertey hain tu yaqeenan koi khas baat hogi:)

app ney baat sahi kahi i agree k ager humain yeh yaqeen hai k koi humari tehrrer ko pasand karey gaa tu hal likhney k mamley main bhi koshish tu kerni chahyea..app ney mujhey ek or na'i raah dey dii likhney ko..or main koshish zaroor karoogi is barey main....zayda sey zayda kya hogaa k loog pasand nahi karaingey ya amal nahi karaingy..pr koshish tu kerni chahyea na..:)

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buhat khoob
aap ka bayan aur ilfaaz ka intkhaab aur khayalaat sabhi buhat pasand aaye
is khoobsurat tehreer ke liye daad aur mubarikbaad qabool kijye
Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyada
aap ki mazeed tehreeroN ka intzaar rahe ga
khush rahiye
zmufti

Pasand karnay aur hosla afzai ka shukriya.:rose

[zapk]

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Thanks Baji..........Main yehan aik baat kehna chaonga aap sy Masood Bhai sy aur ScorpionRules sy ya jo bee koi likhny wala hay un sab sy........

main ny aap kee tehreerain pari hian ....sab kee sab ka mozon takreeban aik jaisa hee huta hay bus kuch elfaz kee kami paishi rehti hay...aur jo mazmoon huta hay wo to wakee kamal ka huta hay dill moh laita hay........
hamara her writer aisy hee likhta hay kabi apny aap per tankeed kabi society per kabi kisi per aur kabi kisi per..........
Lakin mera sab sy yeh swal hay k koi aisa writer hay Jo en sab mushkulat ka koi bee acha sa HULL likh dain?
mery khiyal main hum main sy koi bee creative writer nahi hay...
sab kee sab deduction hay hum loag doseron key mazameen dekh ker os main sy kuch chezian AKHAZ ker laity hian aur likh daita hun...
aur i know k yeh kaam kuch etna asaan bee nahi hain kuch khas loag hee yeh sar enjam dy sakty hain....................thanks for this
lakin mera sab sy akher main wohi sab sy swal hay ...
koi aisa writer bata dain jo sab takaleef ka hal nikal saky?????

Hope k aap ko acha laga huwa huga kiun k writer loag jo huty hian wo apni tankeed per buhat khush huty hian....:khi:

Bhai mairay yeh to aap nay surqay ka ilzam dhar diya hai jis per ahtijaj ho sakta hai:hathora
Albata aap ki doosry baat per main yeh kahon gi kay writer masail ki nishandahi kartay huay hi inka hal bhi paish kar daita hai,bas zara ghor karnay ki zaroorat hoti hai,agar aap zair-e-nazar inshaiay per bhi ghour karain gay to aapko hal mil jaye ga.
Jis tarah aap chahtay hain kay hal alag say wazah kiya jaye usay literature main shumar nahin kiya jata usay research work kaha jata hai.Aik muhaqiq usi andaz main hal paish karay ga jis tarah aap chahtay hain laikin aik adeeb hal ko afsanvi andaaz main paish karay ga,taakay logon ki dilchaspi bhi barqrar rahay aur baat bhi convey ho jaye.:rose

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exactly baat thek kahi app ney writers apni tankeed per khush hotey hain
rahi baat k koi aisa hoo jo hal batadain
ek choti si baat shayed mera khayal ghalat hi hoo is barey main k hal tu apni samjh k hisab sey nikala jasakta haii koi bhi writer zaa'ti ya society k masloo ka hal nikal ker likh sakta haii...pr kya us hal pr koi amal karey gaa....kaisey kersaktey haii jub k problem bataney wala kitni bhi koshish ker lain apni zindagi ki poori kitab nahi likh saktaa or jo solution bataye gaa woh sirf us cheez kabataye gaa jo ba'zahir nazr arahi hai..us k background k barey main woh sirf utna hi janta hogaa jitney arsey sey us neyy in sub cheezoo ko observe kerna start kya hoga..or ok thek hai writer hal bata bhi dey pr ager woh humari mansha k mutabiq na howa tu hum justify nahi karain gey k nahi aisa nahi haii...sath main yeh bhi tu masla haii ..kunk her cheez ek chain main juri hoti haii
humarey ird gird kitney hi loog hotey hian even humarey apney behn bhai bhii apni probs humarey pas latey hian hum sub jantey hain pr phr bhi humara dia howa hal woh exactly nahi mantey ..kabhi mana ..tukabhi kaha k nahi app baat ko smajh nahi raheyy ..
hal likh dena tu shayed asaan hoo..pr jis k liya likhaa jaye kya woh poori tu'r per ussey qabool karey gaa ?

mainey khud abhi recently apni soochoo ko qalm ka perh'n diya hai kuch dil ki baatain likhi hai or main khud bhi ager apni zaat k barey main baat karoo or is waqt mujhey koi kahye k tumhari yeh sooch ghalat hai ya kuch bhi tu main tehreer k hawaley sey tu tanqeed ko ba'khushi qabool karoogi pr ager woh merey masla ka hal merey mutabiq nahi dey ga ya meri sooch ko galat kahye ga tu main 10 jawazoo sey ussey qail kerney ki koshish zaroor karoogi
writer i think sirf masla ki taraf nishnadhi kersakta haii ..hal dey bhi dain phr bhi masla wahi rahey gain

Aap ki baat darust hai laikin phir bhi main yeh kahon gi kay writers per zimadaari a'aid hoti hai kay woh achay tareeqay say masail ka hal paish karain,takay is say log istafada kar sakain,chahay kam log hi sahih.:rose

[zapk]

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bauht khobsoorat or achi sooch hai ..:)

Thanks:rose

[zapk]

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hmm main in writer k barey main janti nahi..pr ager loog aml kertey hain tu yaqeenan koi khas baat hogi:)

app ney baat sahi kahi i agree k ager humain yeh yaqeen hai k koi humari tehrrer ko pasand karey gaa tu hal likhney k mamley main bhi koshish tu kerni chahyea..app ney mujhey ek or na'i raah dey dii likhney ko..or main koshish zaroor karoogi is barey main....zayda sey zayda kya hogaa k loog pasand nahi karaingey ya amal nahi karaingy..pr koshish tu kerni chahyea na..:)

Bohat khub aik writer ka hosla aisa hi hona chahiyay.:thmbup:

[*Duaa*]

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boht khoobsoorat tehreer hay Almaas :thmbup:

aur jahan tak Khalil bhai ki baat k writer doosroon ki tehreeroon ko raddo badal k saath paysh kar dayty hien to mujhy is baat say ikhtilaaf hay...
is duniyaan mien jitnay loog hien sab ki apni kahani hay......is duniya mien jitnay loog hien un say kahin zayaada kahaaniyaan hien.....kahaaniyaan wohi rehti hien chehray badal jaatay hien......moozoo wohi hotay hien likhnay waalay badal jaatay hien.....har koi apni sooch, observation aur experience ko kissi na kissi abdaaz say share karta hay.......aur hamari yeh sooch boht say loogoon say milti hay......jaysay k hum koi tehreer parhtay hien to hayrat hooti hay k yeh to hoo bahoo wohi baat hay jo hum sooch rahay thay...ya kabhi koi kahaani parhty hien to lagta hay k likhnay waalay nay thooray raddo badal say hamari hi kahani likhi hay.......
har tehreer ka apna asar hota hay........apki baatv saheh k koi hal paysh karna chahiay....magar i believe k jab kissi k saamnay ussi ka masla byaan kiya jaay to phir woh khud bhi is qabil ho jata hay k koi hal dhoond sakay......kuchh loog hal paysh karty hien to kuchh loog aaina dikhaatay hien......aaina daykho ,khud ko judge karo...aur phir khud hee faysla karo k mujhay khud ko kahan aur kaysay badalna hay...:)
Deal Karnegy ko parha hay mien nay....aur apki baat say itfaaq karti hoon...magar yaad rakhiay ..har banda asar qabool nhi karta hay:tauba ...jaysay k mien hoon:khi:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Insaan

hmm main in writer k barey main janti nahi..pr ager loog aml kertey hain tu yaqeenan koi khas baat hogi:)

app ney baat sahi kahi i agree k ager humain yeh yaqeen hai k koi humari tehrrer ko pasand karey gaa tu hal likhney k mamley main bhi koshish tu kerni chahyea..app ney mujhey ek or na'i raah dey dii likhney ko..or main koshish zaroor karoogi is barey main....zayda sey zayda kya hogaa k loog pasand nahi karaingey ya amal nahi karaingy..pr koshish tu kerni chahyea na..:)

:phool: :thmbup: :salam: Thanks

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Insaan

Bhai mairay yeh to aap nay surqay ka ilzam dhar diya hai jis per ahtijaj ho sakta hai:hathora
Albata aap ki doosry baat per main yeh kahon gi kay writer masail ki nishandahi kartay huay hi inka hal bhi paish kar daita hai,bas zara ghor karnay ki zaroorat hoti hai,agar aap zair-e-nazar inshaiay per bhi ghour karain gay to aapko hal mil jaye ga.
Jis tarah aap chahtay hain kay hal alag say wazah kiya jaye usay literature main shumar nahin kiya jata usay research work kaha jata hai.Aik muhaqiq usi andaz main hal paish karay ga jis tarah aap chahtay hain laikin aik adeeb hal ko afsanvi andaaz main paish karay ga,taakay logon ki dilchaspi bhi barqrar rahay aur baat bhi convey ho jaye.:rose

oho baji mujy moaf kar dain mery khilaf koi ahtijaj na hee karian...
gee ap kee baat bee theek hay waisy main genral baat ker raha tha....
lakin aap dekhain mery es coments sy Aquari ko faida to huwa hay naa:khi:

[zapk]

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boht khoobsoorat tehreer hay Almaas :thmbup:

aur jahan tak Khalil bhai ki baat k writer doosroon ki tehreeroon ko raddo badal k saath paysh kar dayty hien to mujhy is baat say ikhtilaaf hay...
is duniyaan mien jitnay loog hien sab ki apni kahani hay......is duniya mien jitnay loog hien un say kahin zayaada kahaaniyaan hien.....kahaaniyaan wohi rehti hien chehray badal jaatay hien......moozoo wohi hotay hien likhnay waalay badal jaatay hien.....har koi apni sooch, observation aur experience ko kissi na kissi abdaaz say share karta hay.......aur hamari yeh sooch boht say loogoon say milti hay......jaysay k hum koi tehreer parhtay hien to hayrat hooti hay k yeh to hoo bahoo wohi baat hay jo hum sooch rahay thay...ya kabhi koi kahaani parhty hien to lagta hay k likhnay waalay nay thooray raddo badal say hamari hi kahani likhi hay.......
har tehreer ka apna asar hota hay........apki baatv saheh k koi hal paysh karna chahiay....magar i believe k jab kissi k saamnay ussi ka masla byaan kiya jaay to phir woh khud bhi is qabil ho jata hay k koi hal dhoond sakay......kuchh loog hal paysh karty hien to kuchh loog aaina dikhaatay hien......aaina daykho ,khud ko judge karo...aur phir khud hee faysla karo k mujhay khud ko kahan aur kaysay badalna hay...:)
Deal Karnegy ko parha hay mien nay....aur apki baat say itfaaq karti hoon...magar yaad rakhiay ..har banda asar qabool nhi karta hay:tauba ...jaysay k mien hoon:khi:

Bohat khoob kaha aap nay.Waqai aisa hi hota hai,aapka tajzia 100% darust hai.
Anyhow mairi kawish pasand karnay ka shukriya.:rose

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oho baji mujy moaf kar dain mery khilaf koi ahtijaj na hee karian...
gee ap kee baat bee theek hay waisy main genral baat ker raha tha....
lakin aap dekhain mery es coments sy Aquari ko faida to huwa hay naa:khi:

Chalo muaf kiya

[aquari]

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Bohat khub aik writer ka hosla aisa hi hona chahiyay.:thmbup:

hmm hosla tu krlya hai..dekhoo kamyab hoti hoo k nahi:blush:

[aquari]

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:phool: :thmbup: :salam: Thanks

:welcome:

[zapk]

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hmm hosla tu krlya hai..dekhoo kamyab hoti hoo k nahi:blush:

Hosla hi sab kuch hota hai.Insaan kay hoslay kay agay sab haich hai.:phool: