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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
Bohat Umdah :)Allah
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
Thanks for appreciating my short story. TafseerOriginally posted by Last Knight
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
Shukria ke ap ko pasand aya. TafseerOriginally posted by YaaramComment
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
nobody stopped u to touch her???? Police came or not??? USA main.. aiesey... aik pal ke liye nahen maan rahi hoon.... koz i m also here... yehan kisi main dam nahen hota koi terrpey to aap uski help kero... koz ...nuthing... kher Allah reham karey sab pe...Originally posted by Tafseer
when I started this story... me ko yaad aayaa... to observe surrnoudings ..usually writers aur painters kertey hein... then... dil udas huaa ......
if its true.. then.. bohat afsos hua... Larrkiyaan itni jazbaati kion hoti hain :(Comment
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
Assalam-o-Alikum WR WBOriginally posted by Tafseer
Eid ky baat aap ki ya pahali tahreer jo aap nay share ki parhi .... kuch yaadain insaan sey asi munsalik ho jaati hay kay un sey jis qader pecha chorhna ho per mumkin hi nahi ho pata .... aap ki tahreer bhot haqeeqat kay kareeb ter hay aur nehyat hi dil ko cho jaanay wali tahreer share ki hy ...
FeamanAllah
Meri Taqdeer Main Likha Tha Khuda Ny Aik Din
Tu Jisay Cha-hyga Wo Shaks Paraya Ho Ga
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
Salam Aania,Originally posted by Aania
Mujhey baRi khushi hoi ke apne iis afsane to paRa. Ek Adeeb ki ye tamanna hoti hey ke uske readers, kahani main jazbati taur per involue ho jain. Agar main ye kerne main kam yaab hoa hoon tu main khush hun. Ye kahani Haqiqi nahi hai.
Ap bajaa farmati hain ke america main loog iis qisam ke haadsoon main dakhaal nahi dete kyun ke unko help lene wala sue kersata hai. Aur lene ke dene paR sakte hain.
Ye kahani ek mukhtisar kahani hai. Main doosre lambi aur manzr kashi ke sath likhi hain ( Maad-jazar aur Taqwaa) umid hai ke ap unko bhi paRe gi.
http://www.pegham.net/showthread.php?t=5389
http://www.pegham.net/showthread.php?t=5113
Take care.
:)
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
Salam,Originally posted by Bheegi-Palkain
Himat afsai ka bouhat bouhat Shukria.
Agar ap mere dosrey afsanun per bhi tabsara kein to inayaat hogi.
http://www.pegham.net/showthread.php?t=5113 (Maad-o-Jazar)
http://www.pegham.net/showthread.php?t=5389 (Taqwaa)
:)
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
sure ji inshaAllah zaroor parhoon gi.... kia naa aap ne likha hi itna acha hai... ke baat se baat yun bani ke zehn sawalon se bhar giaa...Originally posted by Tafseer
koii aahaT nahii.n badan me.n kahii.n
koii saayaa nahii.n hai aa.Nkho.n me.nComment
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
aah! bahut hi short touching story thi...........ikhtetaam dil dehla dene waala.....Tafseer jee...aap ki pehli tehreer paRhi hai..aap bahut achcha likhte hain..daad pesh hai!
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
ShumailaOriginally posted by shummu
Adaab arz hai,
Ap ka bhout bhout Shukria is tehreer per comment kerney ka. Muhje khusi hai ke ye apko pasand ai. Inshallah ap meri doosry afsane Taqwaa, aur Maad-jarz bhi paRen gi. Mein ek shoyt novelet bhi likha hai, jis ki pheli qist yahan mojud hai. Pukhyoon ki Bait. Umeed hai ke ap paRen gi.
Tafseer:)Comment
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
bohut hii khoobsorat:rose :thmbup:Qaffas-e-hijr mein
saansoon ka amal
jarii tou hey magar
zindagii hey kahaan
dhoondh raha hoon
sagarkhan:roseComment
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
Originally posted by SAGARKHAN
Shukria Himat afzai ka...:)Comment
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Re: Thande laab ( ٹھنڈے لب﴿
Buhat umda....aap ne jis khobsorati se apni sooch ko alfaazon me dhala hai us ka jawaab nahi :roseComment
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