Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

[*Samra*]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

pata nahi mein in moaamlon mein itna lazy kyoon ho gaya hoon :pagal:

I don't promise, but ager mood bana to likh daalon ga inshallah

ok... intezaar rahe ga :rose

[aabi2cool]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

meri tarf se aik koshish.. Mai pehle likha kerti thi.. lekin ab kaafi arsa se nahi likha tha... aaj pihr se likha he :) aur PLEASE meri urdu mistakes ke liye sorry :phool: :rose

bohat khoob samra bara jandar pegham diya hy aap nay likha karooo

[kutkutariyaan]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

meri tarf se aik koshish.. Mai pehle likha kerti thi.. lekin ab kaafi arsa se nahi likha tha... aaj pihr se likha he :) aur PLEASE meri urdu mistakes ke liye sorry :phool: :rose

Very Nice shandar

Bohut Khoob zaberdast

Start to bohut acha kia tha aap ne.... chiips

Tanheed bohut Khoob soorat or rola dene wali thee :thmbup:

Lekin pata nahi aap kio aik ek dam se Mazmoon ko Finish ker deti hain ? thinkingg

I think 2 pages or bhi likhe ja sakte the...jesa aap ne Mashool create kia tha thinkingg

Aap ki story me jaan hoti hai...but.... Shaid aap k pass Time nahi hota....ya pher....Dehaan change ho jata hai aap ka.... thinkingg

Anyways....Very Good Attempt. :rose

Kaash aap ko Reputation de pata :pagal: ...System me Error aya hua hai...udasi

Thanks alot for such a Nice sharings chiips

Keep it up :dekh:

[*Samra*]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

bohat khoob samra bara jandar pegham diya hy aap nay likha karooo

thanks bahiyaa :phool: aapki hosla afzai rahi to likha keroongi :)

[*Samra*]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

Very Nice shandar

Bohut Khoob zaberdast

Start to bohut acha kia tha aap ne.... chiips

Tanheed bohut Khoob soorat or rola dene wali thee :thmbup:

Lekin pata nahi aap kio aik ek dam se Mazmoon ko Finish ker deti hain ? thinkingg

I think 2 pages or bhi likhe ja sakte the...jesa aap ne Mashool create kia tha thinkingg

Aap ki story me jaan hoti hai...but.... Shaid aap k pass Time nahi hota....ya pher....Dehaan change ho jata hai aap ka.... thinkingg

Anyways....Very Good Attempt. :rose

Kaash aap ko Reputation de pata :pagal: ...System me Error aya hua hai...udasi

Thanks alot for such a Nice sharings chiips

Keep it up :dekh:

:D thanks ahmer.. pata he aap ne bilkul sahi guess kiya..
Asal me hua yoon.,, yeh ilfaaz raat ko sute huey mere zehan me arahe the.. lekin aaj subah jaab me yeh computer per beth ker likh rahi thi... to ... saaare kaam aan pare.. :lahoul .. aur mai hoo hi aisy jazbaati ke.. koi KAAM adhoora chorne ko dil nahi kerta... :embarasse iss liye.. jaldi kahani khataam kerdi...

[kutkutariyaan]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

:D thanks ahmer.. pata he aap ne bilkul sahi guess kiya..
Asal me hua yoon.,, yeh ilfaaz raat ko sute huey mere zehan me arahe the.. lekin aaj subah jaab me yeh computer per beth ker likh rahi thi... to ... saaare kaam aan pare.. :lahoul .. aur mai hoo hi aisy jazbaati ke.. koi KAAM adhoora chorne ko dil nahi kerta... :embarasse iss liye.. jaldi kahani khataam kerdi...

hmmm thinkingg

Ese Mashool me koi bhi tehreer nahi likha kerte.... Jis Mashool me aap ne likh dali hai :)

Acha Writer tab banta hai Insaan...jab aap k zehan me koi Idea ayee to...foran un Kheyalat ko alfaaz ki shakal me dhall dia jaee....

Or ager aap ka mood acha ho...or kuch likhne ki khewahan hoon...to...Car pakri...Kisi Garden me...ya Park me....ya Canal Bank me ka ker Laptop ON kia....or Pursakoon ho ker apna zehan ko Tehreer ki shakar de di jaee....

Jab aap aisa Senerio create ker lete hain....pher aap aik bohut he achi tehreer ko likh pate hain....

Atleast me esa he kerta ho.... chiips

Anyway, jesa aap ne mahool bataya...Uss me aap ne itni touching tehreer likh daali...wo waqaee qabil-e-sitaish hai :thmbup:

[saraah]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

apart, kia yahan angreezi mein bhi kuch share kia ja sakta he ya sirf urdu mein ?

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

meri taraf se pehla inaaam aap ka . . . yaar kaya likha hy aur khoob likha hy great yaar maza agaya yaar aap likhtay raha karo na bari jan hy aap k khilaat main . . . . .. :salam:

:phool:...buht buht shukriaa abii bhaaii...jee time milnay per meri awaaleen khawhish aor koshish kuch na kuch likhnay ki hoti ha ...:khi:

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

Yaar you are no more kabil-e-nafrat now :lol

Meri taraf se dheir saari daad wasool ker, bohat khoob likha tum ne. Cheeta :thmbup:

cheeeta ......panja laraaaye ga ..:p?
..yaar aay tu sach keh riyaa ain kay main kabile nafrat nahi ...:embarasse

[saraah]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

..yaar aay tu sach keh riyaa ain kay main kabile nafrat nahi ...:embarasse

nae agr tumhara dil chahay tou tum reh saktay ho

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

nae agr tumhara dil chahay tou tum reh saktay ho

:embarasse...meray chanay na chahnay say kia hota ha

[saraah]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

ok... intezaar rahe ga :rose

samra kisi soorat aamir ko ytahan english me likhnay ki ijazat nae deti

barray chao se jo eng sec me apna khata khulwaya hai na aamir ne wo poora kren ja kr 372-shed

[saraah]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

:embarasse...meray chanay na chahnay say kia hota ha

''nighah e mard e momon se badal jati hain taqdeerain''

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

''nighah e mard e momon se badal jati hain taqdeerain''

shert momin hona laazim ha ..sirf musalmaan nahi

[saraah]

Re: Competition Best writer - Topic: Zindagi

shert momin hona laazim ha ..sirf musalmaan nahi

tou momin ban jao