is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

khoobi tou tum ne khud hi bta di sher ali........hum se kya poochtay ho....:lpop:

maiN ne bataaii nahiiN Saara...yeh bataayaa hai k mujhe ko aHsaas huaa k is she'r meN bahot KhoobiyaaN haiN. aapko sirf yeh bataanaa hai k vo KhoobiiyaaN kia haiN? so good luck N happy maGhaz maaring :) :tasali:

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

:lahoul shaikh to jannati nikla Alah say darta hai dosray k baray main kia kahon aqalmand ko eshara hi kafe hai

aap ne shaah-raah to sahii pakRii magar aage chal kar pagDanDiyoN meN gum ho gaye...ma'zarat-Khowaah huuN k yeh is she'r kii yeh Khoobii nahiiN hai...showwwyyyyy!! !

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

sheroo lolzzzzzzz mare chote si bhanji bohat cute hai uskay pass sheroo hai toy woh uski dum pakar k ghumate hai lolz

achchhaa...hahaha...arii waah...agar amiN kabhii u ke ghar aayaa to apnii dun emN dhaagaa baandh kar rakkhuuNgaa k kahiiN vo me kii dum hii na gum kar de hahaha

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

Us ke haath istariyoon walay hein, mistariyoon walay nahi

hahahaha ISTRI aur MISTRI kaa mishraNR [mix] Khoob rahaa...me ko pasand aaya :)

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

kia jawab hai is ka ? kia khoobi hai is main ?

abhii bataata huN ... pahle me ko zaraa dam to lene do ... abhii dekhte ahiN 2-4 ghanTe k shaayad koii Soorma Bhopaalii aa jaaye aur bataa de Khoobii is she'r kii hahaha

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Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

abhii bataata huN ... pahle me ko zaraa dam to lene do ... abhii dekhte ahiN 2-4 ghanTe k shaayad koii Soorma Bhopaalii aa jaaye aur bataa de Khoobii is she'r kii hahaha

:lpop:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

kia jawab hai is ka ? kia khoobi hai is main ?

Is sher ne sindhi topi pehni hui he 372-haha

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

dil kii aawaaz bhii sun, mere fasaane pe na jaa
merii nazroN se zaraa dekh, zamaane pe na jaa!

Mujay moaaf ker de 372-shock

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

hahahaha ISTRI aur MISTRI kaa mishraNR [mix] Khoob rahaa...me ko pasand aaya :)

Pasand aaya he to tu rakh le :khi:

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

Pasand aaya he to tu rakh le :khi:

maiN koi "rakhel" huN jo rakh luuN 372-haha372-haha372-haha

[MuQadas]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

:lahoullahol parhoo aur nikal chalo:lahoul

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

salaam dosto,

lo ji maiN aa gayaa jawaab le kar. :)

Akbar Allahabadi urdu shaa'irii ke naamvar shaa'ir haiN...vo hazaliyaat ke liye jis qadar mash'hoor o ma'roof haiN usii qadar Ghazaliyaat men bhii naam kamaayaa hai. unkii mashhoor-e-zamaana GhazloN meN se chand ek yeh haiN:

1.
hangaama hai kiuN barpaa, thoRii sii jo pee lii hai
choorii to nahiiN kii hai, Daaka to nahiiN Daalaa hai

2.
dil miraa jisse baheltaa koii aisaa na milaa
but ke bande mile, Allah ka abandaa na milaa!

3.
dunyaa meN huN, dunyaa kaa talab-gaar nahiiN huuN
baazaar se guzraa huN, Kharidaar nahiiN huuN

4.
aaNkheN mirii talvoN se vo malne nahiiN dete
armaan mire dil kaa nikalne nahiiN dete

5.
saaNs lete huye bhii Dartaa huN
yeh na samjheN k aah bhartaa huN

aaKhir waalii Ghazal kaa yeh she'r:

Shai'Kh saaHib! Khudaa se Darte ho
maiN to angrezoN hii se Dartaa huN 372-scare

yuN to ba-yak nazar qaarii is she'r se sarsarii guzar jaataa hai magar ba-nazr-e-digar is she'r kii KhoobiyaaN us par vaa hotii haiN. hoo-ba-hoo mere saath bhii aisaa hii huaa.

aaiye to dekheN k is she'r meN kia Khoobii hai jise shaa'ir ne is qadar saade alfaaz aur saade bayaameN ke zarii'ye adaa kar dii.

vo zamaana firangiyoN kaa zamaana thaa aur Akbar ne un par apne kalaam meN ja aba jaa tanz bhii kiyaa karte the. chuN k, angrezoN ke Khilaaf khul kar kuchh baateN aiisii hotiiN thiiN k jo nahiiN kahii jaa saktii thiiN is liye unehN dar-parda ba-soorat-e-tanz-o-mizaaH bayaan kar dii jaatii thiiN. is she'r meN bhii Akbar ne ShaiKh saaHib [yeh Hazrat bhii Hasb-e-ma'mool unkii hadaf kaa nishaanaa banteaa karte the] ke kaandhe par bandooq rakh kar firangiyoN par goli daaGh dii. farmaate haiN k:

ai ShaiKh ji aap Khudaa se kiuN darte haiN jab k Khudaa nihaayat raHeem o kareem hai, agar Darna hai to shaitaan-e-mardood se Dariye jis ne Allah se ham sab ko raah-e-raast se bhaTkaa dene kii chhooT le rakkhii hai...vaisii hii Allah se moHabbat kijiye jaisii maiN kartaa huN AUR shaitaan se bhii hoo-ba-hoo vaise hii Dariye jaise maiN firangiyoN se Dartaa huuN. goyaa, shaitaan aur firangiyoN meN koi farq nahiiN hai. so, kis nafaasat se, kis Husn e Khoobii ke saath aur kis saadgii se firangiyoN ko shaitaan kaa laqab de diyaa

ummeed hai k itnaa saa Khulaasah aapkii tashaffii-e-Khaatir ke liye kaafii rahaa hogaa. Khowaandgii ke liye banda aapkaa mamnoon o mutashakkir hai.

wassalaam :)

[MuQadas]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

wah bohatkhoob itnay sada alfaz main itni khoobsurat tashreeh chupi thi v nice bohat khoobsurat shairi hai
hangaama hai kiuN barpaa, thoRii sii jo pee lii hai
choorii to nahiiN kii hai, Daaka to nahiiN Daalaa hai
yeh shair too mainay suna howa hai baqi nahi suni really nice

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

maiN koi "rakhel" huN jo rakh luuN 372-haha372-haha372-haha

Tu ager rakhel hota to tujay mein rakh leta 372-haha

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

Tu ager rakhel hota to tujay mein rakh leta 372-haha

are yaar chal haT...agar hotaa to maiN Khud hii na rakh letaa 372-haha372-haha372-haha372-haha372-haha