is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

[SherAli]

salaam dosto aur dostanyo,

basaa auqaat yeh hotaa hai k ham koi she'r paRhte haiN aur us she'r kii saadgii-e-bayaan se mutassir na hote huye aksar sarsarii guzar jaate haiN. Akbar Allahabadii urdu shaa'iri meN tanz o mizaaH aur sanjeedah kalaam [hazaliyaat o Ghazaliyaat yaksaaN] ke baadshaah gardaane jaate haiN. unkaa ek she'r jab merii nazar se guzraa to maiN bhii sarsarii guzar gayaa magar ba'd az_aaN zehn men yeh nukta vaarid huaa k Akbar kaa she'r is qadar 'aamiyaanah kaise ho saktaa hai is liye jab us she'r par vaapas lauTaa to us she'r meN pinhaaN aalaa zaraafat aur tanz ke pahloo mujh pe vaa huye.

sochaa aap sab ke liye vo she'r is laRii meN yahaaN chaspaaN karuuN taa k aap log bhii mustafeed ho sakeN. shukria.

vo she'r kuchh yuN hai:

shai'Kh saaHib! Khudaa se Darte ho?
maiN to angrezoN hii se Dartaa huuN

aap Hazraat o Khawaateen bhii mashq kareN aur bataayeN k is she'r kii kia Khoobii hai...so, happy maGhaz-maaring hehehe

wassalaam,
_______Sheroo

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Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

:yy:

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

:yy:

ziddi bachchii...kaan se khooNT nikalvaao hehehe hahaha hohoho

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

Yeh sher he ya tere dil ki awaz

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Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

ziddi bachchii...kaan se khooNT nikalvaao hehehe hahaha hohoho

baat ko asan kar kay bolian gay tab hi to koi jawab day sakye ga

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

baat ko asan kar kay bolian gay tab hi to koi jawab day sakye ga

Tum is ki baaton ka bura mut manaya karo Aanchal, yeh khud bhi apni baaton ka bura nahi manata :D:

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

baat ko asan kar kay bolian gay tab hi to koi jawab day sakye ga

is meN kia mushkil hai? achchhaa bolo...kis zabaan emN tarjumalation kar duuN? hehehe

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Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

Tum is ki baaton ka bura mut manaya karo Aanchal, yeh khud bhi apni baaton ka bura nahi manata :D:

in ki batian samajh main aian gee to bora manian gay 372-haha

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Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

is meN kia mushkil hai? achchhaa bolo...kis zabaan emN tarjumalation kar duuN? hehehe

aik asan say jumlay main likhoo kay is thread main karna kia hai :mm:
sirf aik jumlay main :na:

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

Tum is ki baaton ka bura mut manaya karo Aanchal, yeh khud bhi apni baaton ka bura nahi manata :D:

vaise, aapas kii baat hai...me ko bhi baat samajh emn naii aayii 372-haha

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

in ki batian samajh main aian gee to bora manian gay 372-haha

Yeh bhi shayad isi liye apni baat ka bura nahi manata ke isay apni baatein akser samaj nahi aati hoon gi :khi:

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

in ki batian samajh main aian gee to bora manian gay 372-haha

Dictionary.com kii ek extra memory chip lagvaao bheje meN 372-haha372-haha372-haha

[SherAli]

Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

aik asan say jumlay main likhoo kay is thread main karna kia hai :mm:
sirf aik jumlay main :na:

EDIT kar di post...aap log bataaiye k is she'r kii Khoobii kia hai? kiuN itnhaa saada saa she'r is qadar achchhaa hai. socho socho :mm: :)

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Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

Dictionary.com kii ek extra memory chip lagvaao bheje meN 372-haha372-haha372-haha

aap bhi lagwa loo zaida memory wali

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Re: is she'r kii Khoobii bayaan kijiiye...plz

EDIT kar di post...aap log bataaiye k is she'r kii Khoobii kia hai? kiuN itnhaa saada saa she'r is qadar achchhaa hai. socho socho :mm: :)

us waqat angraizoo ki hakoomat hoo gee ....